Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 [align=center]Bored and had this idea in my head. Saw a mask awhile ago, used the style it was drawn in a the base (half and half, patterned lines on the face) Not quite done yet, might give it as a present to my friend if she likes it. Rate / criticize / whatever is appreciated 9/10/08I left off on the shirt, if that's what you're wonderingI did more today, but I'm not gonna post the edit until I get a slightly more finished product.9/11/08Took out the shirt outline :/I didn't get much done today.9/14/08As done as it will get, for now. I'm moving on to another drawing,and i'm gonna put this mask in it. Gonna be tottally different tho, but same design, only on a different guy with an epic pose :D [spoiler=pic is a bit big] [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 1 word wonderfull That about sums up the image =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 1 word wonderfull That about sums up the image =) ditto Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Thx :DI don't quite like the way the hand is tho, fingers are off a bit >> (lol i'm never satisfied with my own work) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Pinky Finger and Thumb is offset.Arm could be slightly arched away, and upper torso slightly more detailed. Otherwise great :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Very, umm... random :)But very detailed, and good shading ^_^9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Pinky Finger and Thumb is offset.Arm could be slightly arched away' date=' and upper torso slightly more detailed. Otherwise great :P[/quote'] Yeah, those were giving me trouble >>I'm gonna fix them next time I get to it, same with the shirt. Left off there after school Very' date=' umm... random :)But very detailed, and good shading ^_^9.3/10[/quote'] Yeah, it's abstract. That's my job :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Then my advice for fast effect fixes...Extend the Middle finger some, solidify the nail on the Pointer Finger, arch the thumb down some and almost invisible, and solidify the nail on the Pinky Finger. The arm should be self explanatory... I can't see your intent on the shirt, so much luck ^_^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Then my advice for fast effect fixes...Extend the Middle finger some' date=' solidify the nail on the Pointer Finger, arch the thumb down some and [b']almost[/b] invisible, and solidify the nail on the Pinky Finger. The arm should be self explanatory... I can't see your intent on the shirt, so much luck ^_^. middle finger/pointer finger/thumb suggestions, will do. But i might leave the pinky, it's supposed to be curled back, I might just try and change it so it's easier to recognize that ^^And, the shirt, mainly there so you know it's more than a floating head. I'll detail that, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 lol yeah... I get that with the shirt. Maybe an inverted shadow technique so it serves its purpose better and allows practice?The reason I said that about the pinky is that the Index/Ring Finger has to slightly curl or it won't look too natural :| But meh, thats my final pennies until I see the finished product.And thanks, I normally draw in terms of proportional manga style. But this makes me wanna do a realistic stippling piece :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
「tea.leaf」 Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Anatomy needs a lot of work, and less smudging. This is hardly abstract, I say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 the T-Shirt needs a lot of work =\ not bad... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 Wow why don't you resize it and make a card with it it's awesome btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 Wow why don't you resize it and make a card with it it's awesome btw. Yeah, I could do that, for fun :/More done today... Arm looks better, fingers look less akward, t-shirt got a bit farther, ried to fix shading, the black on the mask has less grainy whiteness. Expect more tomorrow, or Friday if I don't like it tomorraw :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 good luck m8..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 that was awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 updatez: Fingers look better, still not perfect.Didn't get much done today, I'll post my revised one tomorrow. I might change the eye so it looks like the face behind the mask is more proportional, right now if you took off the mask his eyes would be really far apart xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 Bumpalicious. Final draft of it, now i'm moving on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 The face is great lol...But now the neck seems to serve no purpose :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 It is Awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted September 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 The face is great lol...But now the neck seems to serve no purpose :| Only there to remind you, somebody's still connected to it >>thx for the completment tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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