MachineHunter Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 I really want to be in the card makers academy,so i gave it my best shot!Hope some one will invite me in the academy after seing my cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MachineHunter Posted August 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2007 How come no one comments?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starscream23 Posted August 16, 2007 Report Share Posted August 16, 2007 i like them. like the 14 eyed robots eyed robots effect and the twisted spell, nice pics too. i give them a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kallan Posted August 17, 2007 Report Share Posted August 17, 2007 Remember not to say "the selected monster." Say "The monster equipped with this card..." There are too many commas. Use some periods. Make sure you space. On The Cursed 2 Handed Sword, "when" should start a new sentence. You also must say "Your opponent," not "The opponent". I've seen a lot worse. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joseph_downe Posted August 17, 2007 Report Share Posted August 17, 2007 good jobi like how both swords leave their effect on the monsterhowever by doing this i feel you should make it so that the equipped monster becomes treated as an Effect Monster also I'm not really liking the description of "The Blind Warrior"but maybe it's just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the person! Posted August 17, 2007 Report Share Posted August 17, 2007 Good cards I like 'Twisted Spell' and '14 Eyed Robot' the best. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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