jawsisra Posted September 8, 2008 Report Share Posted September 8, 2008 Super Speed Golden Castle of DarknessField SpellThis cards activatsion and Effects can not negatedOnce per turn the controler of this card, can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Deck.This card cannot be destroyed by the effect(s) of Spells or Traps (except this card). If a monsters attacks, that monster is destroyed and the turn player takes damage equal to half of its total ATK. During each of your Standby Phases, your opponent must send the top 5 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard. (This is not optional. If it cannot be fulfilled, destroy this card.)During each players Standby Phase place 1 Speed Counter on this Card. (max. 12 for each player).(Total 24)If a player actives a Spell Speed 2 of Higher deal 500 to the control of the card. (This Damage can be negated by removing 6 Speed Counters for a Spell Speed 2 and 12 for a Spell Speed 3)When a player takes battle damage, remove Speed Counters of the attacked Player from this card for each multiple of 1000 damage taken. I took both Speed World (From 5Ds and Golden Castle of Stromberg ) I change the effects a little but keep them just as deadly I need a little help with the wording Thank you Link to comment
rico203 Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 ok thats good Link to comment
jawsisra Posted September 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2008 Thank you I am working on fixing the wording up a little better but keep the effects the same I want it to be to the point with out all the extra stuff most cards have Thank you again Link to comment
jorel658 Posted September 14, 2008 Report Share Posted September 14, 2008 humm fair enough Link to comment
jawsisra Posted September 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2008 if any one can come up with a better way to say the effect I put can you let me know At the end of Oct their this create your own card tourney we get to enter a tourney with a card we created and I want to use this card but i need to get it ready for that day Link to comment
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