alex24567 Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 my first cardShot at 2007-08-13 upload some of yours and plz post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gary9672001 Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 well alot of mistakeput more stars, lower def, you put effect on the wrong place, grammer problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 I cant see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gary9672001 Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 you can't well by my description u might know what he posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonbatosai Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 is it suposed to be an effect monster??? too overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex24567 Posted August 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 Shot at 2007-08-14 is this better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 Change its type to machineand all the effect to When this card is used as a tribute for a dark monster increase the tribute summoned monster's ATK and DEF by 500this way it is gonna be your perfect first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 Also capitalize where neccessary,including the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ncheng1997 Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 its pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 grammar and overpowered 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MachineHunter Posted August 14, 2007 Report Share Posted August 14, 2007 Sorry,i dont understand the card,2/10Terrible job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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