my first CS3 sig

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i have now started to use CS3 and this is what i got after some time

 

i think its good

 

V1

 

V2

 

[Bloodrun]

It's really.. basic..

[overheat]

it is ?????/

 

how do you know how many effects are in that thing %$#^$^$% and how many brushes

[Miazo]

I think it is pretty good.What are you using to make them?

[overheat]

mmm wow its to much.

 

noise. abstract brushes, lightning effect and stuff like that

[Jerry OldMaster]

it is ?????/

 

how do you know how many effects are in that thing %$#^$^$% and how many brushes

 

Don't be upset. It is simple. Maybe not that simple for you, but simple for him.

Don't save it as a GIF.

[Miazo]

Oh.I can see that what system are you using,gimp,Ps?

[.Digital.Simplicity.]

I like it version 2 is better though but it is simple.

[overheat]

it may look simple but believe me it is not. if i have saved the PSD you good have seen yourself. i know that is not complicated like yours but it is for sure not simple

[「tea.leaf」]

Looks too rough and grainy.

[overheat]

'well thanks any way

[Jerry OldMaster]

Fine.

Only thing I see is a brushwork, double crosshatch, inking and text.

On the second, you noised it, and that's all. Oh yeah, and replaced/drop shadowed the text.

Bare the effects on the render, of course.

Not too complicated.

However, this may just be the GIF format.

 

Also, don't shade your render like that, it doesnt help him to blend nor is does add anything positive.

 

Next time please, save it as a PNG. Imageshack compatible and keeps all the detail, unlike GIF, which strips, like, 99.99% ._.

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mmm well is funny that you got some important things wrong. cuz there is no C4D here no crosshatch.

[Jerry OldMaster]

mmm well is funny that you got some important things wrong. cuz there is no C4D here no crosshatch.

 

There may be no crosshatch, but I still see one =P

[overheat]

lol ok then.....

 

do you have any tips for me ?

[Jerry OldMaster]

lol ok then.....

 

do you have any tips for me ?

 

Of course, but you'd be better off without asking me, really. I can only teach you how to be horrible xD

[3cchiFr3ak]

I prefer Photoshop CS2 as it works a lot better (faster) on my crappy laptop. Anyway, I see you used a lot of Filter effects.

[overheat]

finally some one who knew what i did

[3cchiFr3ak]

I can tell because I use Filters when I'm too lazy to color my own backgrounds, ^_^

[overheat]

yup you got that right

[Guest Tiger]

I don't like the render very much <_<

Sorry.

[Skyfi]

Not, bad for your first

[3cchiFr3ak]

Hey I got some advice, :D (that's rare of me) as long as you keep working on it, you'll get better without noticing. And don't be lazy like me lol :)

[problematica]

Not good at all

You have some sort of effect on the render that makes it look really lq

Those large lines around the render are sort of a hint that he isn't meant to go with styles like this

No flow or depth

The background makes no sense

No blending

How many times must I tell people to not make those ludicrous copies of the render

No lighting

Bad text

 

And #2 is even worse

[+Jono]

Here I go:

 

First one:

 

- Text needs work (-1)

 

- No light source (-2)

 

- Saved as GIF (-2)

 

- No flow (-2)

 

Total: 3/10

 

Second:

 

- Text needs work (-0.5)

 

- No light source (-2)

 

- Saved as GIF (-2)

 

- No flow (-2)

 

- Noise [Ewwww....] (-2)

 

Total: 1.5/10

 

If you work on those things you'll get better. This sig is kinda simple.