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Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 7/10 draw pheonix is alot like dekoichi but oh well this deck would get crushed by greed decks and would get crushed by dark world decks maybe make one that special summons from the graveyard? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 thanks so much, i gave you a reputation! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Very good. 8/10. Though Card Pheonix is a bit broken, maybe you should add to its effect stating "This card can only be Fusion Summoned with the Spell card "Pheonix Fusion". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Discard Phoenix: When do they discard the card? It's okay, but IDK, it seems kinda overpowered to me... Make it every phoenix LV4 or under and who is not named "Discard Phoenix" Draw Phoenix: Kinda the same as Discard... Fusion card: I like this one. It seems like some good support. Do you need to sacrifice the card or not? Card Phoenix: I really like this one. No fixes, except to maybe increase the ATK bonus by 100 or so... As for the names, they seem kinda straightforward, not much coolness... If it were me, I'd probably use the names: Dooming Phoenix of the EnemyPhoenix of AscensionPhoenix ModificationPhantom Phoenix Or something along those lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragons-4-lyfe Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 nice cards yea draw phoenix is kinda like dekochi 7.5/10 you have a good idea maybe make like return phoenix or destroy phoenix something like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Coalition. Good word. :) I like 'em... Much much better. 9/10 For the first one though, "select a random card" If it's random, there is no selecting.If it's selected, it's not random... lol Which is it then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 actually, some cards really do say that, for example, aqua neos, and delinquent duo. select a random means, your opponent shows his hand (well not shows, but u see the back of the cards XD, and pick one to destroy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehodis Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Coalition. Good word. :) I like 'em... Much much better. 9/10 For the first one though' date=' "select a random card" If it's random, there is no selecting.If it's selected, it's not random... lol Which is it then?[/quote'] Lots of cards actually say that, and it is correct grammar anyways. Randomly select something, like there's face-down cards, and it's random when you select one. Randomly selecting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 thanks a bunch for the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Coalition. Good word. :) I like 'em... Much much better. 9/10 For the first one though' date=' "select a random card" If it's random, there is no selecting.If it's selected, it's not random... lol Which is it then?[/quote'] Lots of cards actually say that, and it is correct grammar anyways. Randomly select something, like there's face-down cards, and it's random when you select one. Randomly selecting. Oh yeah... I totally forgot about that... Never mind. You're right... Wow, I can't believe I missed that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 WOW!!!! Much better than the ones before, though a grammar mistake on Pheonix of Healing, you missed a " after pheonix ;). Other than that AMAZING! 9999999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragons-4-lyfe Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 excellent yea much better than the ones before 9/10 what does FOTP stand for Force of the Phoenix? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 yes. I couldn't think of a better name. And I will fix the error. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 lol awesome there awesome 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
027982 Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 nice job,any perticuler reason why you made phoneix cards.oh by the way 1000000000 out of 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 I like the Sky Battle card A LOT. No fixes there. As for "Phoenix Fury," that's a pretty huge price to pay, a battle phase for a monster... You should make it two cards, Monsters or S/Ts But still, these are great :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 Thanks for all the comments! I will make more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
5il3nc3r Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 Hope it's okay, but I thought I could add mine (I made a phoenix card) here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 neat. goood card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Denni_Green77 Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 I really like the art work you found for the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 Phoenix Battle is fine, but with Rise of the Phoenix, most people will just use Premature Burial instead. You should give it an even bigger bonus than just returning to the field. Good job once again :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 13, 2007 Report Share Posted August 13, 2007 yes, but it's effect cannot be negated. So you can bring it back, fuse it, then it gets destroyed. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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