Ryumancer Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavyd91 Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Wicked Awesome! Zombies made that duel interesting. Great as usual! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted December 25, 2007 Report Share Posted December 25, 2007 dude those were awesome episodes awesome job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted December 26, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 thanks, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alsharid Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 COOL!!! Is moss going to become a vampire? Libby is a good duelist, although he is supposed to be the weakest of the dark hunters(according to the guy who created him in your old thread)Can't wait to see how strong my dark hunter and the others are! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted December 26, 2007 Report Share Posted December 26, 2007 Just a comment: When Vampire Lady & Lord attacked Damon in the beginning, Libby never activated their effect. And I'm quite sure you have do activate their effect. Otherwise, good as the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted December 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 Oh crap. I did forget that. My bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted December 27, 2007 Report Share Posted December 27, 2007 Ah, errors happen. I'll let it pass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixty Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 epic. i luv it. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted January 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Chapter 21: Friend...or Foe?Our heroes were successful in finding Moss help. They were then on their way to try and win the tournament. They were also pondering how the Dark Hunters will make their next move. Mizura: I'm glad we were able to get Moss to a hospital. Lenny: Me too. He would have been in serious trouble if he wouldn't have made it. Damon: Yeah…I'm glad too. Lenny: Damon, why are you so glum? Mizura: Yeah, what is it? Damon: Nothing important. Lenny: It's about your duel with Libby, isn't it? Damon: Ermmm… Lenny: Come on, Yuri warned us that the Dark Hunters had extraordinary dueling skills. And Damon, you did great in that duel. You came back from a 3800 Life Point trail. Mizura: And you saved me. Damon: No, he let you go. I didn't save you. Lenny: Damon, this is no time to doubt yourself. Mizura: Come on, please cheer up. Please? Damon: I'll get over it. Just give me a little time. Mizura: Are you sure? Damon: Yeah, I'm fine. Mizura: Well…okay. Lenny: Look…who's that guy? Mizura: Huh? When Damon and Mizura looked over, they saw a person who looked lost. He was a tall man with long blue hair wearing black clothes with blue flames on them. Mizura: Lenny, that guy kinda dresses like you. Lenny: Yeah, and I consider my style unique. They walk over to the stranger. Mizura: You seem lost? You okay? ?????: I'm not really lost, but I am in trouble. Lenny: How so? ?????: Well, I used up almost all of my provisions and I need more water. Mizura: Well we can point you in the direction of a creek, but I don't know about any places that offer food. ?????: Thanks, the water will be good enough. Mizura: The creek is about a quarter-mile southwest of her, just follow that pathway and it will lead right to it. Lenny: Here, and take this chocolate bar too. ?????: Wow, I don't know what to say. Oh, my name is Drake. Lenny: Hey, my name is Lenny. Drake: I feel like dueling. You in? Lenny: Huh? Sure. It's my turn anyway. Drake: Your turn? Lenny: I'll explain later. Right now, let's do it! Drake: Very well! Lenny & Drake: Duel! Lenny: 4000 LPDrake: 4000 LP Lenny: I'll start things off, Drake! Here we go! [draws a card] I summon UFO Turtle in Attack Mode! UFO Turtle: 1400 ATK Lenny: I'll then place 2 cards face-down and end my turn! Drake: Now it's my turn! [draws a card] Since you have a monster and I have none, I shall summon this monster, Cyber Dragon! Cyber Dragon: 2100 ATK Lenny: Cyber Dragon? Damon: That's a very rare monster. It's been said that Zane Truesdale had the only ones in existence. How did this guy get one? Drake: And since that was a Special Summon, I can still Normal Summon. Lenny: Oh boy. Drake: I now summon D.D. Crazy Beast! D.D. Crazy Beast: 1400 ATK Lenny(IM): This guy has weird monsters that I've never heard about. Drake: I now play Mystical Space Typhoon on the right face-down card! Lenny: Oh crud! [Enchanted Javelin is destroyed] Drake: Now I play Kishido Spirit! Lenny: What is with these cards? Damon: Lenny is off to a bad start. Mizura: Yeah, he doesn't know any of his opponent's cards. Damon: Let's hope he gets a hang of it, or he's gonna lose. Drake: Kishido Spirit prevents my monsters from being destroyed in battle when they battle monsters with the exact same ATK strength. Lenny: Not good! Drake: D.D. Crazy Beast, attack UFO Turtle! D.D. Crazy Beast: 1400 ATKUFO Turtle: 1400 ATK[Only UFO Turtle is destroyed in battle] Lenny: Nonetheless, you activated my turtle's special ability! Drake: No I didn't! Lenny: Huh? Drake: When my beast destroys a monster in battle, the monster gets removed from play instead of being sent to the Graveyard. Lenny: What?! Mizura: Oh, poor Lenny. Damon: This definitely puts him in a tough spot. Lenny: No, now I open! Drake: Cyber Dragon, attack him directly! [Cyber Dragon blasts Lenny] Lenny: Ah! (-2100) 1900 LP Drake: Now I play this card face-down, your turn. Lenny: [draws a card] Yeah! I activate Pot of Greed, this will allow me to draw 2 cards! [draws 2 cards] Drake: And they will go straight to the Graveyard! Activate Null and Void! Lenny: Null and Void? Drake: I can only activate this when a player draws from his/her deck by way of card effect. You have to show me your 2 cards first of all. Lenny: Okay. [Lenny shows Drake Molten Zombie and Dragged Down into the Grave] Drake: Then they are discarded to the Graveyard. Lenny: You're kidding! Oh man! [sends the 2 cards to the Graveyard] Mizura: Poor Lenny. Damon: This guy's good. Lenny: No matter, because I use Premature Burial! I pay 800 Life Points to bring Molten Zombie back from the Graveyard! Molten Zombie: 1600 ATKLenny: (-800) 1100 LP Lenny: Thanks to my zombie's special ability, when brought back from the Graveyard, I can draw 1 card! [draws a card] Yeah! I play Salamandra! I can equip this to my Molten Zombie and boost its ATK by 700! Molten Zombie: 2300 ATK Lenny: Now, attack his Cyber Dragon! Molten Zombie: 2300 ATKCyber Dragon: 2100 ATK[Cyber Dragon is destroyed in battle] Drake: Whoa! (-200) 3800 LP Mizura: Alright Lenny! Damon(IM): Good recovery. Drake: Great move, Lenny. Lenny: Thanks, Drake. You're not so bad yourself. I end my turn. Drake: Great! Now it's my move! [draws a card] I switch D.D. Crazy Beast to Defense Mode! D.D. Crazy Beast: 1400 DEF Drake: And I summon Yomi Ship in Defense Mode as well! Yomi Ship: 1400 DEF Drake: I guess that's all. Lenny: My move! [draws a card] I summon Solar Flare Dragon! Solar Flare Dragon: 1500 ATK Lenny: Now I play my Field Spell, Molten Destruction! Molten Zombie: 2300 (+500) 2800 ATKSolar Flare Dragon: 1500 (+500) 2000 ATK Drake: Oh! Lenny: Now I play my face-down, Meteorain! Drake: This is gonna smart. Lenny: Oh yeah, it is! My Molten Zombie will attack your Crazy Beast! Molten Zombie: 2800 ATKD.D. Crazy Beast: 1400 DEF[D.D. Crazy Beast is destroyed in battle] Lenny: And because of my Trap Card, you still take damage even though your monsters are in Defense Mode! Drake: Ah! (-1400) 2400 LP Lenny: Now my Solar Flare Dragon will attack your Yomi Ship! Solar Flare Dragon: 2000 ATKYomi Ship: 1400 DEF[Yomi Ship is destroyed in battle] Drake: (-600) 1800 LP Drake: But my Yomi Ship has a special ability. When destroyed in battle, Yomi Ship destroys the monster that destroyed it! Lenny: Uh oh. [solar Flare Dragon is destroyed] Damon(IM): Drake just avoided being hit by Solar Flare Dragon's special ability. Even though Lenny has the advantage now, there's still more than a chance of him losing the duel. Lenny(IM): Darn! He stopped my Solar Flare Dragon before I could use its ability. This guy's good. Lenny: Alright, I end my turn. Drake: My turn then. [draws a card] I play Monster Reincarnation to bring my Cyber Dragon back from the grave and into my hand. Now I use Polymerization to combine 2 Cyber Dragons in my hand to become Cyber Twin Dragon! Cyber Twin Dragon: 2800 ATK Lenny: It has the same ATK as my Molten Zombie! Drake: Yes, but my monster will beat yours. Lenny: And why's that? Drake: Haven't you forgotten my Kishido Spirit Spell Card? Lenny: Oh…crap. Drake: Cyber Twin Dragon, attack Molten Zombie! Cyber Twin Dragon: 2800 ATKMolten Zombie: 2800 ATK[Only Molten Zombie is destroyed in battle] Lenny: My zombie! Drake: I now place 2 cards face-down and end my turn. Damon(IM): What? Drake could've finished Lenny right then and there. What's going on? Is he just toying with him? Lenny: Whew, good thing he only had one monster on the field. My turn! [draws a card] I place one card face-down and summon Fox Fire in Defense Mode! Fox Fire: 0000 DEF Drake: My move. [draws a card] Lenny: I activate Thunder of Ruler! For this turn, you cannot declare an attack! Drake: Very well then. I summon Proto-Cyber Dragon in Attack Mode! Proto-Cyber Dragon: 1100 ATK Drake: And activate my face-down De-Fusion to separate my Cyber Twin Dragon back into its pre-fusion forms! Cyber Dragon: 2100 ATKCyber Dragon: 2100 ATK Lenny: Uh oh. Now he's got more monsters! Drake: Now I play Share the Pain! By sacrificing a monster on my side of the field, you are forced to offer a monster on YOUR side of the field. Lenny: No way! Fine, my Fox Fire goes to the Graveyard. [Proto-Cyber Dragon and Fox Fire go to the Graveyard] Drake: That will be all. Lenny: This is my last chance. [draws a card] I place one card face-down and end my turn. Drake: Now on to me! [draws a card] I activate this card from my hand for my Standby Phase. Lenny: Huh? Mizura: Damon, can he do that? Damon: It's rare, but there are cards in existence that can be activated before the Main Phase. Drake: It's called Curse Restriction. If that face-down card of yours is a Trap Card, you cannot activate it if it negates attacks or destroys monsters. Mizura: But that's all Lenny has! Damon: I think Lenny lost. Drake: Now my Cyber Dragons! Attack Lenny directly and wipe out his Life Points! Lenny: No, I activate Gravity Bind! Drake: But you can't negate my attack! Lenny: True, but negating an attack and stopping an attack are two different things. Gravity Bind doesn't negate anything, it just stops high-level monsters from attacking, and that's all it is. Damon: That was close. Drake: Fine, I place a card face-down and end my turn. Lenny: Alright, my turn! Yeah! I play Double Spell! By discarding my Burning Spear, I can use a monster from YOUR Graveyard! Drake: You can what?! Lenny: I use your Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy the face-down card you just played! Drake: No! [Attack Reflector Unit was destroyed] Lenny: I assume that had something to do with your Cyber Dragon right? Now I sacrifice your 2 Cyber Dragons…! Drake: What?! You can't do that! Lenny: Yes I can! I sacrifice your two monsters to summon Lava Golem! Drake: Lava Golem?! Lava Golem: 3500 ATK Lenny: That'll be all for now! Mizura: Great, Lava Golem will gradually burn Drake's Life Points away. But I kinda feel sorry for Drake though. Damon(IM): There's still something about him that I don't trust. Drake: My turn! [draws a card] Lenny: Don't forget Lava Golem! He burns away 700 of your Life Points! Drake: 1100 LPLenny: 1100 LP Mizura: They're even! Damon(IM): For now. Drake(IM): Huh?! The card I drew. This can win me the duel! But I…can't… Drake began holding his head which was throbbing in pain. Lenny: Hey, Drake. You all right? Drake then fell to his knees in pain. Drake: Aaaah! Damn it all! I forfeit…you win! Final Result:Lenny: 1100 LPDrake: 0000 LP (Forfeit) Lenny: But, Drake…! Drake: Ah! Aaaaaahhh! Lenny: Drake, you okay? Let us help you! Drake: No…no, I'm fine. The pain is fading. Like I said, you win. I surrender. I…have to go now. Lenny: Maybe we could have a rematch sometime? Drake: Yeah, I'd like that. Since you win, you— Lenny: No need to. I wanna beat you fair and square. I don't take surrenders as victories. That is, unless they really matter. Let's finish it the next time. Drake: Rr…Right. I gotta go now. Mizura: Do you need us to escort you or— Drake: No…I'm fine. I'll see you around. Lenny: Well…okay. Whatever helps. Drake: Thanks. Goodbye. Lenny: Bye. Mizura: See ya. Drake then started walking slow and uneasy. Mizura: Do you think he'll make it? Lenny: Maybe all he needs is some rest and some food. Mizura: Good thing we gave a little bit to him. Lenny: Yeah, bye, Drake. Lenny and the others started walking the other direction. Lenny: What's up, Damon? You've been almost completely silent. Damon: Nothing, nothing at all. Lenny: Well…okay. Damon(IM): What was up with that Drake guy anyway? I wonder that if we ever run into him again, he'll be the same guy. We'll see. Meanwhile… Drake: That one was massive. These migraines are killer. ?????: That's because you're needed again. Drake: What?! Who said that?! Show yourself! ?????: You already know who I am. Drake: No! Stay away from me! Drake attempted to run but Libby blocked him off. Libby: Sorry, but you're going nowhere…Abacus. Drake: No! Don't say that name! Libby: Abacus. Drake: Stop it. Libby: Abacus! Drake: SHUT UP! Libby: ABACUS! Drake: NOOOO!! AAAAAHHHHH!! Drake transformed dramatically, becoming bigger, more muscular and with dark, magical armor that materialized out of nowhere for some odd reason. Libby: Abacus, you're back. Abacus: I thought that mortal would never cave in. Libby: It's a good thing he did right? Abacus: My control over him is slowly waning. Libby: Our master will fix that. But first we must complete Phase One of the plan. Abacus: Yes. Libby: Speaking of which, how was your duel against that Baxter fellow? Abacus: Drake surrendered. Baxter won. Libby: That fool. Oh well, what's your analysis? Abacus: Judging from what I have seen from the girl's duel with the guy you abducted and Damon's battle with you, I'd say that Baxter is the least skilled duelist of the three. Libby: Excellent! Excellent! Phase One is nearly complete. Now, for the final touches. Uh oh! It looks like one of Lenny's new friends has turned out to be an enemy in secret. Now it seems that there are 2 Dark Hunters on the island. But what is their plan? And what is their next scheme to attack our heroes with? There's more on the way on the next episode of Yu-Gi-Oh! REVELATION! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Just some minor issues: 1. Drake: This is gonna smart.This is going to smart? And WTF does that mean? 2. Our heroes were successful in finding Moss helpFinding Moss help? Once again, WTF? Anyways, good chapter. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Just some minor issues: 1. Drake: This is gonna smart.This is going to smart? And WTF does that mean? 2. Our heroes were successful in finding Moss helpFinding Moss help? Once again' date=' WTF? Anyways, good chapter. 8/10.[/quote'] 1. Yes, "This is going to smart". And smart means hurt. 2. They were able to get Moss to an infirmary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alsharid Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 NICE CHAPTER! one of my favorites Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 Thanks, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doom pheonix Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 sick, can't wait for the others oh and did you ever get the pm i sent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doom pheonix Posted January 19, 2008 Report Share Posted January 19, 2008 sick, can't wait for the others oh and did you ever get the pm i sent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted January 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 Sorry about the absence of chapters for the past 2 weeks. I've been preoccupied with personal matters. Not to mention I've had the biggest case of Writer's Block to date. Anyway, I haven't forgotten about you guys, and here's the next chapter...Enjoy!!! Oh, and doomphoenix. I got your PM's. It's all good. Chapter 22: The Royal Pain Returns (part I)Damon: 3050 LP?????: 0400 LP Throwstone Unit: 2000 DEF Lenny: Damon's on fire! Mizura: Yeah, that guy's in real trouble! Damon: I now flip up my face-down monster, Cobra Jar! Cobra Jar: 0600 ATK Damon: When summoned, my jar brings forth a Poisonous Snake Token! Poisonous Snake Token: 1200 ATK Damon: I now activate my face-down card, Zero Gravity! This will switch the battle positions of all face-up monsters on the field! ?????: No! Throwstone Unit: 0900 ATKCobra Jar: 0300 DEFPoisonous Snake Token: 1200 DEF Damon: Now I sacrifice both my Cobra Jar and Poisonous Snake Token to summon my favorite and most powerful monster, Tyrant Dragon! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK ?????: Uh…oh. Damon: Tyrant Dragon, wipe out that Throwstone Unit as well as the rest of his Life Points! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKThrowstone Unit: 0900 ATK[Throwstone Unit is destroyed in battle] ?????: NOOO! 0000 LP Final Result:Damon: 3050 LP?????: 0000 LP Lenny: Chalk up another one for us! Mizura: Way to play, Damon! ?????: Ah, nuts. I lost. Here, my deck. Damon: I'll choose this card, Riryoku. ?????: Okay. Good game. Damon: Yeah. Both players shook hands and then our heroes were on their way. Lenny: Man, no offense to that guy, but why do all the nice duelists have to suck? Mizura: Excuse me? Lenny: Oh, uh, I didn't mean you, Mizura! Mizura: So I'm not nice?! Damon: Whoa, you're in the doghouse now, dude. Lenny: Shut up, Damon! Look, Mizura, you're an exception, you're nice AND talented, totally unique! Mizura: Really? Damon: Oh brother. ?????: Hey, cretin! Damon: What the…? Mizura: Where'd that come from? Lenny: That kinda sounds familiar. When they looked behind, they indeed saw a familiar face walking towards them. It was Winston Knightly, the Royal Duelist. Damon: Hey, Churchill, how's it hanging? Winston: Knightly, Winston KNIGHTLY! Damon: Whatever, what do you want? Winston: A rematch against you, Damon Ripley. Damon: I don't have time to waste with you. Beat it. Winston: What's the matter? Are you a coward? Lenny: Don't touch that dial, kids. Damon: Remember how easy I beat you the last time we met? And YOU call ME a coward? Give me a break. You're not worth my time. Winston: What an arrogant loser. Damon: Arrogant?! Lenny: Uh oh, now he's done it. Damon: I may be a lot of things, but arrogant is NOT one of them!! Winston: Oh yeah? Well prove it! Damon: Fine, I'll humiliate you just like I did last time! Winston: No you won't! I learned a few new tricks and gained some rare and powerful cards while I was away. Mizura: What's with these two? Lenny: Winston was Damon's very first opponent on this island. Mizura: Oh. How'd Winston fair? Lenny: Damon beat Winston with 3500 Life Points to spare. Mizura: Ouch. Lenny: Yep. Damon & Winston: Let's duel! Winston: 4000 LPDamon: 4000 LP Winston: I'll start things off, cretin! [draws a card] I play Painful Choice! Damon: Painful Choice? Winston: Yes, I pick any 5 cards from my deck and I show them to you! The cards are: Chain Thrasher, Chain Thrasher, Shield & Sword, Shattered Axe, and Gather Your Mind. Winston: And after that, you get to pick which one of these cards get sent to my hand. The other four go to the Graveyard! Damon(IM): All of these cards seem quite useless right now. But I have to choose the most useless card of all and send it to his hand. Damon: I choose…Shield & Sword. Lenny: Good choice. Mizura: Yeah. Winston: Okay, Shield & Sword goes to my hand while the rest go to my Graveyard. Now I summon a monster! This one should be familiar to you! I summon Command Knight! Command Knight: 1900 DEF Damon: I remember that monster, she gives all Warriors on your side of the field a 400 ATK Point boost. Winston: Quite right. I now end with 2 face-downs. Damon(IM): This is a big change from our last duel. Hmph. Maybe this time, he'll be more challenging. Damon: My move! [draws a card] Remember this monster, Winston? It's my Royal Knight! Royal Knight: 1300 ATK Winston: Hmph! That monster! Damon: And now I equip with the Equip Spell, Axe of Despair, increasing my knight's ATK by 1000 points! Royal Knight: (+1000) 2300 ATK Damon: Which is more than enough for my knight to destroy yours! Royal Knight, attack! Royal Knight: 2300 ATKCommand Knight: 1900 DEF Winston: Not so fast! I activate a face-down, The Reliable Guardian! This Spell will boost MY knight's DEF by 700 for this turn! Royal Knight: 2300 ATKCommand Knight: (+700) 2600 DEF[Command Knight is NOT destroyed] Winston: Now I activate my other card, Destruction Punch! Whenever you attack with a monster whose ATK is lower than the DEF of one of my monsters, your monster gets destroyed! Damon: (-300) 3700 LP Oh no! [Royal Knight is destroyed] Lenny: Good move, even for Winston. Mizura: I thought you said this guy was pathetic. Lenny: He is, or at least, he was. He must've improved. Winston: Ha! You and your Royal Knight! I new you couldn't resist attacking me and gaining Life Points off of it! In fact, that's one of the first moves you pulled on me! Remember? Damon: True, but it wasn't Royal Knight that I beat you with. Winston: I know, it was that infernal Kaiser Glider of yours! Now finish your turn! Damon: Fine! I place two cards face-down and end my turn. Winston: Great! I draw! [draws a card] I now summon Marauding Captain! Marauding Captain: 1200 ATK Lenny: Oh no, not Marauding Captain! Mizura: Not good! Marauding Captain: (+400) 1600 ATK Damon: Crap, and thanks to your Command Knight, he gained a power boost. Winston: Correct! Now thanks to my captain's special ability, I can summon another monster from my hand, as long as that monster has 4 stars or less. Gearfried, come on out! Gearfried the Iron Knight: 2200 ATK Winston: Now I switch my Command Knight to Attack Mode as well! Command Knight: 1600 ATK Mizura: Yikes! Lenny: Come on, man! Winston: Time for my triple blade onslaught! First, my captain! Marauding Captain: 1600 ATK[Marauding Captain slashes Damon] Damon: Unh! (-1600) 2100 LP Winston: Now my Command Knight! Mizura: Ah! Lenny: Damon, come on! Command Knight: 1600 ATK[Command Knight slashes Damon] Damon: Ah! (-1600) 0500 LP Mizura: Oh no! Lenny: No! Winston: And now for the finisher! Gearfried, attack him directly and win me the duel! Mizura & Lenny: Ah! Damon: Not so fast! I have a trap! Draining Shield! It will stop your monster's attack and add it to my Life Points! Damon: (+2200) 2700 LP Winston: Hmph! Lenny: Yeah! Mizura: Awesome! Damon: Did you honestly think you could beat me THAT easily? Winston: Not really. Actually, I was hoping you'd stop me. If you wouldn't have stopped my first attack, I knew you'd stop my last. Damon: Not bad. You've been able to predict some of my strategies. Way to go, Winston. You've improved. Winston: Heh heh heh…Yes, I had to work hard to get here. Now that I am, you're going down. Damon: Keep dreaming. Winston: It is our dreams that push us to our best. Damon: I don't have dreams, only nightmares. Winston: Ooh…scary. You really think a vigilante attitude is going to cut it? Damon: You have no idea what my life was like. I'm about to give you a taste of that. Winston: We'll see. I place a card face-down and end my turn. Damon: About time. [draws a card] I now activate my face-down card, Level Conversion Lab! Winston: What is that? Damon: Oh, that's right, I didn't use this in our last duel. This card can be quite fun. First, I pick a monster in my hand and I show it to you. What Damon shows Winston makes him quite angry. Winston: That Kaiser Glider! Damon: Yes, now my Trap Card rolls a six-sided die. Here's how it goes. If I roll a 1, I send my monster straight to the Graveyard. However, if I roll a 2 through 6, my monster's level changes to the result on the die! Winston: What?! Damon: Now! Roll! [the die starts rolling] Winston: Get a 1, 5, or 6. [the die keeps rolling] Damon: Come on, get me a winner. [the die is starting to slow down] Lenny: Get him something good. Mizura: Come on. Damon: Mm… [the die lands on…3] Hm hm hm hm… Winston: No! Damon: That's right! It landed on a 3! Which means my Kaiser Glider is a 3-star monster instead of a 6-star! This also means I get to summon it straight to the field! Go Kaiser Glider! Kaiser Glider: 2400 ATK Mizura: Alright! Lenny: That monster kicked Winston's can last time! And it'll do it again! Winston: So you got that annoying dragon out, big deal! Damon: It will be! Kaiser Glider, attack Marauding Captain! Sonic Gliding Shock! Kaiser Glider: 2400 ATKMarauding Captain: 1600 ATK[Marauding Captain is destroyed in battle] Winston: Hmph! (-800) 3200 LP Lenny: Awesome! Winston: Yes, it is. That's exactly what I wanted you to do! Damon: Say what? Winston: Destroying my captain triggered my Trap! The Trap known as Michizure! Damon: No! Lenny: Not Michizure! Winston: So say good-bye to that filth! Damon: No! [Kaiser Glider is destroyed] Winston: Ha! That's what it gets for ruining me the last time! Damon: Yes, but my dragon had a special ability. By destroying it, I get to return 1 monster on the field back to the hand. I choose your Command Knight! Winston: So? [Command Knight is returned to the hand] Gearfried the Iron Knight: (-400) 1800 ATK Damon: I place one card face-down and end my turn. Winston: Just as I thought, you're finished! [draws a card] I play The Warrior Retuning Alive! Damon: This won't end well. Winston: This will allow me to bring a destroyed Warrior monster back to my hand. I bet you know which one I pick. It's Marauding Captain! And now I summon him once again! Marauding Captain: 1200 ATK Winston: And you know what that means, right? Damon: You're going to summon another monster. Winston: You catch on quick. I summon Command Knight back to the field! Command Knight: (+400) 1600 ATKMarauding Captain: (+400) 1600 ATKGearfried the Iron Knight: (+400) 2200 ATK Damon: Her again. Winston: Who said it's easier to destroy than it is to create or repair? In just one turn, I was able to bring back the 2 monsters you removed from my field. Damon: Whatever, bravo. Winston: Careful, cretin. I'm in control of this duel! Damon: You've never controlled anything in your life. Winston: That's it! Gearfried, shut him up! Mizura: Oh no, Damon! Damon: Sorry, chump, but this is as far as you go for this turn! Go, Negate Attack! Winston: Erggghhhh!!! Damon: Not only does this stop your Iron Knight, but it brings your entire Battle Phase to a startling halt! Lenny: Whew! A little close for comfort, man! Winston: You coward! Damon: Easy for you to say. You're the one with the all-out offensive. Winston: Yes. And I will use it to crush you! Damon: Not in this life, Winston! [draws a card] Or at least, not for the next 3 turns. Winston: I beg your pardon?! Damon: I play Swords of Revealing Light! This will stop you from attacking for 3 full turns! Winston: Holding me off won't win you the duel, cretin! Damon: I have 3 full turns to decide how best to defeat you! Winston: Bold declaration, fool! Damon: And it will come true! I have that much faith in my deck! Winston: You're starting to sound like that fruitcake King of Games! Damon: Don't compare me to that softy! He always went too easy on his enemies. Unfortunately for you, I won't be as merciful! Winston: Whatever, is you're turn done? Damon: Not quite yet. I summon Troop Dragon in Defense Mode! Troop Dragon: 0800 DEF Damon: And then I place a card face-down. That's all for now! Winston: I thought as much! [draws a card] I place one card face-down and summon Blade Knight! Blade Knight: (+400) 2000 ATK Winston: And thanks to my Command Knight, he gained a power boost! Damon: Lovely, more crazily powerful warriors. Winston: Now let's see what you've got. I end my turn. Lenny: That's one out of three. Mizura: I hope Damon can get something. Damon: Man. Winston has improved quite a bit since the last time I dueled him. Oh well, I should have something by the time my swords are gone. But to be honest, I'm not sure if I CAN pull something off. Only time will tell. It seems that Winston is back, with more power and skill than ever. Can Damon overcome Winston again? Or will Winston win this grudge match? Find out in Part 2! 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Ryumancer Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Chapter 23: The Royal Pain Returns (part II)Winston: 3200 LPDamon: 2700 LP Gearfried the Iron Knight: 2200 ATKBlade Knight: 2000 ATKCommand Knight: 1600 ATKMarauding Captain: 1600 ATKTroop Dragon: 0800 DEF Mizura: Damon's at a serious disadvantage! Lenny: I know. It looks like Winston improved more greatly than we could have ever thought. Winston: I have the ultimate offensive force just waiting to slice away at your Life Points! Damon: I've beaten your "army" before, Winston! Winston: Yes, you have. But this time you don't have that miscreant dragon to protect you! Damon: It wasn't protecting me. It was kicking your can up and down the field! Winston: How DARE you!!! You will pay for that among other things! Damon: You wish! Winston: I don't have to wish. It's all in plain sight. Your greatest monster is gone, and all that’s keeping me from destroying you is your pathetic Swords of Revealing Light! Lenny(IM): I don't get it. Why does Winston keep referring to Kaiser Glider as Damon's greatest monster? Hmm…Wait, I remember! That's because Damon never used Tyrant Dragon against Winston in their first duel! So that means Damon has a secret weapon! Let's just hope he can use it. Winston: I ended my turn. That means it's your turn, cretin! Damon: I have a name you know! [draws a card] Winston: Do you feel it closing in on you? Damon: What are you talking about? Winston: Only two turns remaining until my warriors are free to cut you down! Damon: I prefer to look at it from a different perspective. Winston: Oh yeah? What is that? Damon: I have a full 2 turns to figure out how to deal with you! Winston: That's some imagination you have there! Damon: I'm serious. I already have one of the cards necessary to take you down! Winston: Oh really? Damon: Yeah, but I can't use it now. I'll just summon Hunter Dragon in Defense Mode and end my turn! Hunter Dragon: 0100 DEF Winston: Figured as much! [draws a card] Excellent…! Damon: Now what? Winston: You remember this card, don't you, Damon? [Winston shows The A. Forces to Damon] Damon: The Allied Forces! You're going to strengthen your monsters more! Winston: Correct! I play my Allied Forces Spell Card which will give my warriors an 800 point boost! Gearfried the Iron Knight: (+800) 3000 ATKBlade Knight: (+800) 2800 ATKCommand Knight: (+800) 2400 ATKMarauding Captain: (+800) 2400 ATK Mizura: Oh no! Lenny: Great, just great! Winston: And to rub salt in the wound, I summon Dark Blade! Now my warriors get 200 MORE points! Dark Blade: (+1000) 2800 ATKGearfried the Iron Knight: (+200) 3200 ATKBlade Knight: (+200) 3000 ATKCommand Knight: (+200) 2600 ATKMarauding Captain: (+200) 2600 ATK Winston: Now you have 5 heavyweights to deal with! Blade Knight: (+400) 3400 ATK Damon: What the…? Why did your Blade Knight get even stronger? Winston: Because of its special ability. Whenever I hold 1 or less cards in my hand, Blade Knight gets an extra 400 ATK points! Damon: Your kidding! Winston: This makes my Blade Knight the strongest monster in play! With that, I end my turn. Damon: My move! [draws a card] A good card, but it doesn't do so good right now. Winston: Hehehehe… Damon: I place one card face-down and end my turn. Winston: [draws a card] I pass. Damon: Huh? Lenny: Oh crap! Mizura: His Swords, they're gone! Winston: This is your last chance to pull something! And then my warriors will cut through your defenses like tissue paper! Damon(IM): I need it, I need it NOW! [closes his eyes and draws the card] Uh… [lowers his head] Winston: Faith in your deck, huh? Looks like that philosophy backfired! Looks like I win! Damon: HeheheheheheAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Winston: What is it? Damon: Hmhmhmhm… Winston: What?! What is it?! Damon: This card hasn't shown up in a while! In fact, this is the first I've used this Spell Card in this entire tournament! Winston: What Spell Card?! Damon: This! The card that will wipe out your entire army in a flash! Activate, Lightning Vortex! Winston: Lightning Vortex?! Oh no! Lenny: Lightning Vortex?! I didn't know Damon had THAT in his deck! Mizura: Wow! Damon: At the cost of discarding a card, this Spell Card will destroy every face-up monster on your side of the field! Winston: NO! NO! Damon: Oh yes! [discards a card] Lightning Vortex, GO! Winston: NOOOOOOO! [All of Winston's monsters have been annihilated] Lenny: Awesome! Mizura: Winston's monsters are gone! Lenny: And that leaves Winston wide open for an attack! Damon: Not done yet, Winston! Winston: What?! Damon: There's a monster in my deck that has power greater than that of my Kaiser Glider! Winston: What?! You're kidding! Damon: Nope! I sacrifice Troop Dragon and Hunter Dragon to summon my favorite and most powerful monster in my deck…Tyrant Dragon!!!! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK Winston: 2900 ATK points?! No way! Damon: Yes way! Tyrant Dragon, attack him directly with Erupting Fire Blast!!! Winston: NOOO!! AAAHHH!! Lenny: Way to go, man! Mizura: Hooray! Winston: That burns!!! (-2900) 0300 LP Damon: I bet it does!!! 2700 LP Mizura: Now Damon has a big lead! Lenny: And that Royal Pain only has 300 points left! Winston: You…! Damon: Hm? Winston: You…! Damon: So I destroyed your offensive force and struck you directly with a type of monster you loathe, big deal. Winston: YOU'RE GOING TO WISH YOU NEVER DID THAT!!! Damon: Whoa! Can you shout any louder! Winston: Are you done?! Damon: For now. Let's see what you've got! Winston: Okay! [draws a card] Hehehehe…HAHAHAHA!!! Damon: What is it now? Winston: The card that will help defeat you and your whelp of a monster! Damon: Hm? Winston: I play Monster Reborn! Damon: To bring back what? Command Knight? Marauding Captain? Blade Knight? Winston: No…this! Gearfried the Iron Knight: 1800 ATK Damon: What can that do against my dragon? Its ATK points pale in comparison to my Tyrant Dragon. Winston: Not if I bring out Gearfried's full potential! Damon: Full potential? Winston: There is a legend surrounding every single card in the game of Duel Monsters. This one happens to be one of my favorites. Once upon a time, there was a great and powerful warrior. So powerful that each time he drew his sword, the whole planet quaked under the sheer magnitude of his might! The warrior himself began to fear his own strength, so he decided to do something about it. Damon: Oh yeah? What'd he do? Winston: He encased himself in an armor of iron, to keep his power from going out of control. And from that point on, he's been known as Gearfried the Iron Knight. Lenny: Whoa, cool story. Mizura: I never knew that about Gearfried. Winston: Now, I intend to set him free! Damon: What do you mean by that! Winston: This will reveal all! I play Release Restraint! This will break Gearfried's metal bindings and show his true power! I introduce…Gearfried the Swordmaster!!! Gearfried the Swordmaster: (+200) 2800 ATK Damon: Your warrior comes close, but he's still no match. Lenny: Man, that's one hardcore monster! Mizura: Yeah, I've never seen this side of Gearfried before. Damon: What's your angle? You know that your swordmaster is still weaker! Winston: Heh heh heh heh heh….Things aren't always what they seem, or are they? Damon: What are you talking about now? Winston: I'm not finished. I play this Equip Spell…Lightning Blade! Damon: Uh oh. Mizura: Oh no! With that Equip Spell, Gearfried will be stronger than Tyrant Dragon! Lenny: This is bad, very bad! Winston: Your girly girl is right, thanks to this Equip Card, my swordmaster has a grand total of 3600 ATK points!!! Gearfried the Swordmaster: (+800) 3600 ATK Damon: Crud. Damon(IM): Okay, as soon has he attacks, I'll spring my face-down card on him, my Reverse Trap. It will lower Gearfried's ATK enough that win my Tyrant Dragon destroys it, it will wipe out the rest of Winston's Life Points. Winston: Oh, I forgot to mention… Damon: Huh? Winston: Gearfried has a special ability! Damon: What? Winston: When equipped with an Equip Card, Gearfried can destroy any 1 monster on your side of the field!!! Damon: What?!! Lenny: But Tyrant Dragon is his best monster! Without that, Damon can't top Gearfried! Winston: Gearfried, demonstrate your special ability first hand!!! Damon: No! [using the power of Lightning Blade, Gearfried instantly destroys Tyrant Dragon] AUTHOR'S NOTE: Does this monster fight seem familiar, Gearfried the Swordmaster VS Tyrant Dragon? Rex Raptor used Tyrant Dragon (unfortunately) against Joey Wheeler in the Orichalcos Saga in the original Yu-Gi-Oh! Joey was able to summon Gearfried the Swordmaster at the last minute and destroy Tyrant Dragon. On a personal note, that fight was a complete nightmare, and for 2 reasons. ONE: An idiot like Raptor was using Tyrant Dragon! Dragons are NOT Dinosaurs! That really ticked me off! TWO: A shmuck like Joey defeated Tyrant Dragon! I like Joey, but he shouldn't be able to cut down a monster that's overall better than Blue-Eyes that easily! Those are my reasons and I'm stickin' to 'em. Now back to the story. Damon: It's gone! My dragon's gone! Winston: Your Life Points are about to follow. Gearfried strike him directly and win me the duel! Damon: Not this time! The card that was used to finish you off last time will save me this time! Go, Reverse Trap! Winston: That trap! I hate that trap! Damon: You have 2 cards boosting your swordmaster: your Lightning Blade and your Allied Forces! They give Gearfried a 1000 point total boost! But now it weakens Gearfried by a thousand! Gearfried the Swordmaster: (-2000) 1600 ATK Winston: But you still take a direct hit! Damon: I'm aware! [Gearfried strikes Damon] Ah! (-1600) 1100 LP Winston: You may have saved yourself this time! But next time, you'll be in a world of hurt! Damon: I guess that mean's it's my turn now! [draws a card] I activate Graceful Charity! I draw 3 cards and then I discard 2 from my hand! [draws 3 and discards 2] This duel is over. Winston: Say what? For you, maybe. Damon: Nope. It's the end of the road for you. Winston: How do you figure? Damon: With a certain Spell Card in my hand, I can bring down your swordmaster with any monster I want. But, let's make this climatic, shall we?! I use Silent Doom! This will bring back any monster I want in Defense Mode! I choose Troop Dragon! Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Winston: That puny thing won't last against Gearfried! Damon: I'm not finished yet! Winston: Urh… Damon: Now I use Monster Reborn! By sacrificing the Troop Dragon that I just brought back, I can bring back my TYRANT Dragon! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK Winston: You never learn, do you? Your dragon can't win! It's weaker! Damon: Not for long! Winston: What?! Damon: Behold! The card that will win me the duel! I play Riryoku! Winston: What is that? Damon: You don't know what it does? How fun. Winston: Just tell me what it does! Damon: Simple, first it cuts the ATK of your swordmaster in half… Winston: What?!!! Gearfried the Swordmaster: (-1800) 1800 ATK Damon: And then it adds that amount to my dragon, making him the strongest monster in play! Tyrant Dragon: (+1800) 4700 ATK Mizura: Holy cow!!! Lenny: Incredible!!! Winston: Wait! 4700 ATK points?!!! Damon: That's right! That's more than enough to wipe you out! Winston: No! Not again! Damon: Tyrant Dragon, end that swordmaster's career as well as this duel and destroy that monster! Erupting Fire Blast! Tyrant Dragon: 4700 ATKGearfried the Swordmaster: 1800 ATK[Gearfried the Swordmaster is destroyed in battle] Winston: NOOOOOOO!!! (-2900) 0000 LP Final Result:Damon: 1100 LPWinston: 0000 LP Winston: I lost…again. Mizura: Yay, Damon! Lenny: Way to go, man! Awesome duel! Damon: Thanks, guys. Winston: I was supposed to win this time! ME! Damon walked up to him. Winston: Now I guess you're going to tell me that I'm a royal pain and that I should take a hike. Well get it over with. Damon held out his hand. Mizura: Huh? Lenny: Wow. Damon: Winston. Good match. Winston: Huh? Damon: That duel was many things. But it was NOT a waste of my time. And yes, you me be a royal pain, but if you can duel like that, I guess you'll survive. Winston then grabbed Damon's hand and shook it. Winston: Thanks, I guess. Damon: Not bad, you might make it to the castle with that skill. Winston: I'm afraid I won't be making it to the castle. Damon: What? Winston: Losing to you was my third elimination. I'm disqualified. Lenny: Whoa, bummer. Mizura: That sucks. Damon: Who else did you lose to? Winston: I can't remember his name, but you were certainly friendlier, that's for sure. Damon: Really? Winston: All he did was put me down and beat me down with his Machine Deck. Damon: Urgh! Mizura: Ah! Lenny: Did you say…"Machine Deck"? Winston: What, you now this guy? Damon: Yeah, a Duel Monsters Regional Champion, Hugo Locke. Winston: You don't say. How did you encounter him? Lenny: We saw him beat up a friend of ours, so Damon stepped up. Winston: And how did he fare? Damon: I beat that guy with just the skin of my teeth. Winston: Well I guess if you beat him, you had no problem beating me. Damon: I wouldn't say that. You were quite the challenge this time around. Let's meet again sometime. We'll have a rematch. Winston: You can bet on it, Damon. Damon: Okay, see you then, Winston. Winston walked towards the pier to a ship that took todays eliminated home. Lenny: It's a shame. And I was just getting used to him too. Mizura: Me too. Damon: Yeah, another one of Hugo's victims. He never learns. Lenny: Don't worry, if he crosses you again, you'll BEAT him again. Damon: Got that right. Let's get something to eat. Mizura: Yeah. Lenny: Count me in. It looks like our heroes have earned a well deserved break. But the Dark Hunters are still out there, scheming and planning. How will their presence effect the outcome of this tournament? Find out more in the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 nice episode man, keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Alsharid Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 I liked the past chapter, so have you stopped the fanfic or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 ive just read all this fan fic it took me a while but this is great..!!!have you stopped or what is happining..? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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