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Ryumancer Posted October 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 AUTHOR'S WARNING (Nothing big)This chapter will be written in a different format than the other chapters as kind of a test. You, the readers will decide which format would be overall better to read. Be sure to leave a comment saying which way you prefer. The duels will still be in the same format but the story will be in almost the same format as the duels. Just to let you know. And also, from time to time in the story, there will be an "AUTHOR'S NOTE" shortly interrupting the story or duel as a commentary or opinionated fact to the author's liking. Let the story begin! Chapter 11: Spirits Galore!Damon, Lenny and Mizura were waking up from a good night's rest. The grass was brisk with dew and glittering off the light of the morning sun. They were indeed fulfilled from defeating the darkest and most annoying duelists they came across. They were ready for the day ahead. Damon: (Yawn) What time is it, Lenny? Lenny: About 9:30. Mizura: Wow, we sure overslept. Lenny: Whatdaya mean? I'd still be sleeping if I was at my house. Mizura: Early to bed, early to wake makes a girl smart, pretty and great. Damon: Okay. So, which way should we go? Lenny and Mizura: That way! Damon was confused as Lenny and Mizura were pointing in opposite directions. Then, hell broke loose. Lenny: Whatdaya mean, that way? That's the way we came! Mizura: No, the way you pointed was the way we came! Don't be lost! Lenny: You're the one who's lost! Damon: Shut up! The both of you! We'll just flip a coin and the one who calls it right is the one whose route we'll be taking. Mizura: Deal Lenny: Alright. The group was filled with anticipation when Damon flipped the coin. Lenny: Heads. Mizura: Tails. As the coin was flipping, a big gust came about, blowing the coin into the bushes. Lenny: Oh man, that sucks! Mizura: That coin is the only to decide which route to take! We gotta find it immediately! Damon: All this crap over one lousy coin? How depressing. Lenny and Mizura: Shut up. Damon: Let's just find that stupid thing and get out of here. Lenny: You're talking my language. Damon and the others were looking around the seen and found no traces of the coin, let alone the coin itself. Damon: This is pointless, it's only 25 cents. Mizura: Let's just keep looking. Lenny: Hey, I think I fou— Just as Lenny was about to finish his sentence, a trap door camouflaged with grass opened up and Lenny fell through. Damon: What was that, Lenny? Lenny? Mizura: What happened to him? Damon: I don't know, something might have happened to him. Let's search for him before anything happens. Mizura: Right. While Damon and Mizura were searching for Lenny, Lenny was sliding down a chute of some sort. Lenny: Someone take me off this ride! AAAAHHH!! The chute ended soon enough with Lenny sliding through the exit and fell 4 feet down, screaming along the way and then had a bad landing on his posterior. Lenny: I hate slides. Ow. Where am I? I must've fallen several 10's of feet underground. ?????: That's right, you did. Sorry about that. Lenny: Who are you? Let me outta here! ?????: You gotta beat me in a duel first. I apologize, but that's how it's gotta go. Lenny: You apologize? Yeah right. ?????: Really, I'm sorry. Lenny: Whatever, who are you anyway? ?????: The name is Falon, Benji Falon. Lenny: Fine, Benji, I accept your challenge. If I win, you tell me how to get out of here. Benji: Deal. Lenny & Benji: Let's Duel!!! Lenny: 4000 LPBenji: 4000 LP Lenny: I'll start things off! [draws a card] I summon Darkfire Soldier #1 in Attack Mode! Darkfire Soldier #1: 1700 ATK Lenny: And I'll end with a face-down, your move.Benji: Very well. [draws a card] I summon the Inaba White Rabbit in Attack Mode! Inaba White Rabbit: 700 ATK Lenny: That puny thing?Benji: It can bypass your monsters and attack you directly. Go White Rabbit, attack!Lenny: This is gonna sting. [inaba White Rabbit strikes Lenny] Urgh! Lenny: (-700) 3300 LP Lenny: On my turn, that rabbit's as good as stew.Benji: Not likely.Lenny: Huh?Benji: You'll see in a moment. I play a face-down card and the spell known as Spring of Rebirth. This card gives me 500 Life Points each time a monster on the field returns to its owner's hand.Lenny: What the…?Benji: And now I end my turn. [inaba White Rabbit returns to Benji's hand] Benji: (+500) 4500 LP Lenny: Hey, you can't just return a monster to your hand at will.Benji: Inaba White Rabbit is a Spirit Monster. Spirit Monsters return to the owner's hand at the end of the turn.Lenny: O…kay. My move! [draws a card] Now you're completely defenseless now that your rabbit on a rocket left the field, so now I summon Molten Zombie! Molten Zombie: 1600 ATK Lenny: Now my monsters, attack him directly!Benji: Not this time.Lenny: What?Benji: I activate Hallowed Life Barrier! By discarding a card to the Graveyard, my Life Points are safe for the duration of the turn.Lenny: No way. Fine, I end my turn.Benji: My move. [draws a card] I place another card face-down along with a monster face-down. It's your turn now.Lenny: Finally. [draws a card] I now summon UFO Turtle! UFO Turtle: 1400 ATK Lenny: And now my newly summoned Turtle will attack your face-down! [uFO Turtle strikes the face-down monster]Benji: You attacked my Spirit Reaper. It cannot be destroyed by battle. Spirit Reaper: 200 DEF Lenny: You're kidding. I end my turn.Benji: I draw. [draws a card] I play a second Spring of Rebirth, giving me a total of 1000 points each time a monster is returned to its owner's hand. I now summon Inaba White Rabbit again! Inaba White Rabbit: 700 ATK Lenny: This is crazy!Benji: Attack!Lenny: Ah! Lenny: (-700) 2600 LP Benji: I end my turn once more. [inaba returns again] Benji: (+1000) 5500 LP Benji: You might as well throw in the towel. My 4-card combo is nearly invincible. My Spirit Reaper protects my Life Points with its invulnerability, and since my Life Points are secure, that gives me leeway to hit you directly with Inaba White Rabbit. And with its mission done, it returns to my hand, activating the effect of both of my Springs of Rebirth, giving me 500 points each. I have won every duel I was in on this island, all 5.Lenny: You are undefeated in 5 duels already?!Benji: Yes, I must win all the duels that I can to enter Pegasus' fortress.Lenny: Castle.Benji: Whatever. I'm 1/3 of the way there. I just need to get 10 more victories to make it inside.Lenny: What do need to get in there for, besides the fame and glory?Benji: It's too personal. It's your move any way.Lenny: Okay, you asked for it. [draws a card]Lenny(IM): Awesome, my Meteorain trap card! When I play this, his Life Points are in trouble even though his monster is in Defense Mode!Lenny: I play one card face-down and end my turn.Benji: I summon Inaba White Rabbit again.Lenny: I hate that thing.Benji: Attack! Lenny: Ah! (-700) 1900 LP Benji: And I end again. [inaba returns yet again] Benji: (+1000) 6500 LP Lenny: My move! [draws a card]Lenny(IM): My Field Spell, Molten Destruction! This is gonna burn bad!Lenny: Time for some major payback!Benji: Hm?Lenny: I play my Field Spell, Molten Destruction! It gives all my Fire monsters a 500 point boost! Darkfire Soldier #1: (+500) 2200 ATKMolten Zombie: (+500) 2100 ATKUFO Turtle: (+500) 1900 ATK Lenny: And now it's time to reveal my face-down card!Benji: Huh?Lenny: Meteorain! This trap card allows me to deal battle damage to your Life Points this turn even if your monsters are in Defense Mode!Benji: What?!Lenny: First, my UFO Turtle will strike your Spirit Reaper! UFO Turtle: 1900 ATKSpirit Reaper: 200 DEF Benji: (-1700) 4800 LP Lenny: Now my Molten Zombie will have a go at it! Molten Zombie: 2100 ATKSpirit Reaper: 200 DEF Benji: (-1900) 2900 LP Lenny: Last but not least, my Darkfire Soldier will take a chunk out of your Life Points! Darkfire Soldier #1: 2200 ATKSpirit Reaper: 200 DEF Benji: (-2000) 900 LP Lenny: Ooh, that had to hurt!Benji: That was a mistake.Lenny: Oh no it wasn't. I knew what I was doing. I was kicking your keester.Benji: Now you've done it. Just take the rest of your turn.Lenny: I end.Benji: Okay. [draws a card] Inaba White Rabbit, attack again!Lenny: This is getting old! Agh! Lenny: (-700) 1200 LP Benji: I end again! [inaba returns again] Benji: (+1000) 1900 LP Lenny(IM): I can't keep taking this kind of abuse. Two more attacks and I'm a goner. [draws a card]Lenny: About time I got something.Benji: Hm?Lenny: I activate Dragged Down into the Grave! This Spell allows the both of us look at and discard 1 card from each other's hands! Benji: Oh no.Lenny: Get over here! [benji walks over to Lenny]Benji: Here's my hand.Lenny: Say sayonara to your Inaba White Rabbit.Benji: The same thing goes for your Lava Golem.Lenny: Ah man. [benji walks back over to his side] Now we each draw 1 card as the last part of the effect. [Lenny and Benji each draw a card] Alright!Benji: What?Lenny: The card I drew was Pot of Greed!Benji: Great.Lenny: I can now draw 2 cards. [draws 2 cards] Prepare to meet Inaba White Rabbit's equivalent!Benji: What are you talking about?Lenny: I also have a card that bypasses monsters!Benji: What?! No way!Lenny: Yes way! I summon Raging Flame Sprite! And because of my Field Spell, he gains some extra power. Raging Flame Sprite: (+500) 600 ATK Lenny: Attack him directly!Benji: No! [Raging Flame Sprite strikes Benji] Ah! Benji: (-600) 1300 LPLenny: 1200 LP Lenny: And that nearly brings us even. But also, since my Flame Sprite succeeded in attack you directly, he gains another power bonus. Raging Flame Sprite: (+1000) 1600 ATK Benji: How is that possible?Lenny: It's his ability. Now I throw down another face-down and end my turn.Benji: My turn. [draws a card] Your monsters are history!Lenny: Huh?Benji: Now it's time for you learn what happens when you keep pushing me! I sacrifice my Spirit Reaper to summon the Dark Dust Spirit! Dark Dust Spirit: 2200 ATK Lenny: Whoa, that thing is even with my Darkfire Soldier.Benji: Who said I was gonna battle your monsters?Lenny: Huh?Benji: When summoned, my Dark Dust Spirit destroys every monster on the field except himself. Destroy everything now! [Dark Dust Spirit destroys Darkfire Soldier #1, Molten Zombie, UFO Turtle and Raging Flame Sprite]Lenny: No!Benji: Time to end this! Dark Dust Spirit, attack him directly and finish him off!Lenny: Not so fast! I activate my 2-card combo!Benji: Uh oh.Lenny: My first card, Enchanted Javelin! This will increase my Life Points equal to your monster's ATK points! Lenny: (+2200) 3400 LP Benji: But you'll still take the damage!Lenny: Not with my second trap, Gravity Bind! All monsters that have 4 or more stars will be stopped!Benji: Darn! Oh well, I end my turn! And Dark Dust Spirit returns to my hand, giving me 1000 more points! Benji: (+1000) 2300 LP Lenny: My move! [draws a card] Good.Benji: Now what?Lenny: I summon Fox Fire! Fox Fire: (+500) 800 ATK Benji: Oh no!Lenny: And because he's only a 2-star monster, he's not affected by Gravity Bind. And by the way, Fox Fire is gonna get stronger.Benji: How?Lenny: With my equip card, Salamandra! This Equip Spell gives any Fire monster I choose 700 more points! And I put it on my Fox Fire! Fox Fire: (+700) 1500 ATK Benji: 1500 ATK points?Lenny: Yep! Now, Fox Fire, attack him directly!Benji: Oh man! [Fox Fire strikes Benji] Ah! Benji: (-1500) 800 LP Lenny: That's what I'm talkin' about! Now I'm in control of this duel! Lenny: 3400 LPBenji: 800 LP Benji: Not for long! [draws a card] I activate Card of Sanctity! We each have to draw until we have 6 cards in our hands!Lenny: Okay! [Lenny draws 4 cards/Benji draws 3 cards]Benji: I now summon Asura Priest! Asura Priest: 1700 ATK Lenny: I assume that's a 4-star monster.Benji: You assume correct.Lenny: Well then your monster can't attack, my Gravity Bind's in play.Benji: Not for much longer.Lenny: Say what?Benji: I place a card face-down and activate Spiritual Balance. This Spell Card can only be activated when I have a Spirit monster out on the field. Now what happens is I destroy a Spell or Trap on my side of the field to destroy a Spell or Trap on your side.Lenny: That's not good.Benji: I destroy my face-down to destroy your Gravity Bind! [Gravity Bind is destroyed]Lenny: No!Benji: Now my Asura Priest is free to attack! Asura Priest: 1700 ATKFox Fire: 1500 ATK[Fox Fire is destroyed in battle] Lenny: Crud. (-200) 3200 LP Benji: And now I end my turn! [Asura Priest returns to Benji's hand] Benji: (+1000) 1800 LP Lenny: You don't know about the special ability of my Fox Fire.Benji: Special ability?Lenny: Yes, when destroyed in battle, my Fox Fire will just comeback at the end of the turn!Benji: What?!Lenny: Fox Fire, come back to me! Fox Fire: 800 ATK Benji: Just great!Lenny: My move! [draws a card] If one Fox Fire proves threatening…Benji: Oh no.Lenny: Then how will you do against two?! Fox Fire: 800 ATK Benji: Another one?Lenny: Oh yeah! Collectively, my Fox Fires have an ATK of 1600 which falls just short of taking you down. But I'll attack you anyway! Fox Fires: 1600 ATK Benji: Agh!! Benji: (-1600) 200 LP Lenny: And I end my turn. Go ahead, sic that Asura Priest on me again. It won't do you any good. Because when it returns to your hand, the rest of your Life Points will be deducted by my Fox Fires.Benji: [draws a card] I have something else in mind other than Asura Priest.Lenny: Oh yeah? Like what?Benji: This happens to be one of my favorite Spirits. I summon Fushi No Tori! Fushi No Tori: (+500) 1700 ATK Benji: And because it's a creature of Fire, it gains a bonus off your Field Spell.Lenny: I'm not impressed.Benji: You will be. By itself, Fushi No Tori isn't that special, but once I equip a couple cards to it, it will quite impressive.Lenny: What cards?Benji: Be patient. I equip Malevolent Nuzzler to my Fushi No Tori, increasing its ATK by 700! Fushi No Tori: (+700) 2400 ATK Benji: And now I equip Shooting Star Bow to it. Fushi No Tori: (-1000) 1400 ATK Lenny: You made it weaker?Benji: My Shooting Star Bow gives my monster the special ability to attack you directly.Lenny: What?!Benji: Fushi No Tori, attack him directly!Lenny: Uh oh! [Fushi No Tori strikes Lenny] Ah! Lenny: (-1400) 1800 LPBenji: (+1400) 1600 LP Lenny: What the…?Benji: Surprised? Whenever Fushi No Tori inflicts battle damage to your Life Points, I gain all the points that you lose.Lenny: No way! That's one useful monster!Benji: Thank you. I told you it's one of my favorites. And I think I'll throw down a face-down and activate Spritiual Energy Settle Machine! This Continuous Spell keeps Spirit Monsters from returning from my hand at the End Phase.Lenny: But you just rendered your Springs of Rebirth useless.Benji: You've driven me to the point where I need a monster on the field at all times. It's your turn.Lenny: Okay. [draws a card] Lenny(IM): Just the card I was waiting for.Lenny: I activate Giant Trunade!Benji: What?! No!Lenny: This returns all Spell and Trap cards to the owner's hand!Benji: My Spiritual Energy Settle Machine! Without it, my Fushi No Tori goes back to my hand! [All Spells and Traps go back to the hand then Fushi No Tori soon follows] No, I'm wide open! Fox Fire: (-500) 300 ATKFox Fire: (-500) 300 ATK Lenny: I replay my Molten Destruction card, giving all my monsters a boost once more. Fox Fire: (+500) 800 ATKFox Fire: (+500) 800 ATK Lenny: As you know, my Fox Fires have a collective ATK of 1600, which is just enough to finish you! Fox Fires: 1600 ATKBenji: 1600 LP Lenny: Now my foxes, finish him off, attack him directly!Benji: This can't be right! [the Fox Fires strike Benji, bringing him down to 0]Benji: No! (-1600) 0 LP Final ResultLenny: 1800 LPBenji: 0 LP As the holograms disappeared, Benji let his head down in defeat. Benji: I was sure that I was going to win. Lenny: Your first mistake was trapping me down here. Your second mistake was challenging me. Benji: I know. I know. Lenny: Why are you down here anyway? Benji: Because I like dueling people on my turf. When I'm out in the open, I get stage fright. Lenny: You're afraid of what other people think? Benji: Well… Lenny: You can't let your low self-esteem get you down. You gotta face your fears head on. Benji: I don't know if I can. Lenny: Trust me; you definitely have the dueling skill to make it through. Benji: Thanks, that means a lot. Oh, I almost forgot. What Benji was reaching around for in his pocket was his deck. Benji: This is my deck. According to the rules of this tournament, you get any one card from my deck that you desire. Lenny: I know exactly which card I want. He picked the card that he wanted most and showed it to Benji. Benji: Fushi No Tori, that monster's great. And since it's a Fire monster, he'll fit right into your deck. Lenny: Yeah, he'll do great. Benji: Please treat it well. Lenny: You have my word. Now how do I get out of here? Benji: That stairwell to the left of that hole you slid out of will lead you back to the surface. Lenny: Thanks, man. Hope you make it to the finals. Benji: Good-bye, Lenny. As the two bid each other farewell, Lenny made his way up the stairwell leading up through another trap door that happened to be a mere couple feet away from the one he fell through. Lenny: (Inhale) Ah, fresh air. Mizura: Lenny! Damon: Where were you, man? We've been looking all over for you. Lenny: Oh, doing this and that. Damon: Well since you've been gallivanting around, we've decided to go Mizura's way. Lenny: What?! That's not fair! Damon: You shouldn't have been fooling around. Lenny: Aw, come on. It seemed that all was well with Lenny as he was reunited with his friends. What awaits them next? Find out in the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixty Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 :D :D :D im luvin this alot :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 cool episode dude. nice use of Spirit Monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted October 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 Well? Which format do you guys like better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixty Posted October 23, 2007 Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 i like this form (chap11 form) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Should I color, bold, or double space during the duels? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I like the form of chapter 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted November 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 Chapter 12: Double Trouble (part I)Damon, Mizura & Lenny were traveling along a pathway hoping to find more duelists. What they didn't know was that trouble was coming their way. Lenny: We've been walking for hours. I'm getting tired. Damon: Uh, Lenny. We've only been walking for 20 minutes. Lenny: Oh god, were gonna die! Damon: What a lazy fool. When Mizura look ahead, she saw two familiar people. She started to smile. Mizura: Hey, you guys! Mizura was rushing to them, Damon and Lenny were puzzled. Lenny: Does she know those two? Damon: It seems so. Mizura: Bernard, Katelyn, I didn't know you guys were participating in the tournament! Katelyn: Mizura! Bernard: Good to see you! Mizura hugged Katelyn and Bernard and smiles were going all around. Lenny and Damon are still puzzled. Lenny: Mizura, are these friends of yours? Damon: Yeah, what's the deal? Bernard: Mizura, who are these weirdos? When Damon heard Bernard call him a weirdo, all hell broke loose. Lenny: Uh oh, here we go. Damon: Weirdo?! At least I'm not wearing a tie and some cheesy sunglasses! Bernard: How dare you speak to me that way! Do you know who we are?! Katelyn: Yeah, do you know who we are?! Damon: Hehehe…Well I can guess. Bernard and Katelyn: Hmph. Damon: (points to Katelyn) you're a little bit Country… (Points to Bernard) and you're a little bit Rock and Roll. AUTHOR'S NOTE: What Damon just said was a reference to Donny and Marie Osmond. Damon: Am I right? Am I right? Please tell me I'm right. Bernard: Oh, now you've done it! Damon: Done what? State the obvious? Bernard: Mizura, you can't hang around these scuzbags any more! Mizura: Who are you to tell me who I can and can't hang out with?! Bernard: We're your friends, not these losers! Lenny: Okay, now I'm starting to get annoyed! Mizura: At least they listen to what I have to say! Katelyn: What? Mizura, I… Mizura: You guys may have been my friends, but you guys have always been quick to judge. Bernard: We only want you to have the best of friends. Now move out of the way so that I can pulverize that big mouth over there! Damon: Just try it, Mr. Shades. Mizura: To get to him, you have to go through me. Bernard: Mizura. Move. Mizura: No. Katelyn: But, Mizura… Mizura: You guys have to beat the both of us in a duel. Lenny: Aw. That means I have to sit out? Damon: It seems so. Lenny: Okay. Bernard: Let's get this duel over with. Damon: I couldn't agree with you more. Katelyn: Let's do this. Mizura: Right. Bernard, Damon, Mizura & Katelyn: Duel! Bernard: Before we begin, let's explain how it'll go. I'm a gentleman and I believe in the "Ladies First" scenario, so first up will be my sister Katelyn, then it will be Mizura, then me, and last but not least, you, Damon. Damon: Saving the best for last are we? Bernard: Whatever helps you sleep at night. Let's begin. Katelyn: 4000 LPMizura: 4000 LPBernard: 4000 LPDamon: 4000 LP Katelyn: As my bro said, ladies first. [draws a card] I place a monster face-down with another card face-down. And I think that'll do it for me. Mizura: Then it's my turn. [draws a card] I summon Gagagigo in Attack Mode! Gagagigo: 1850 ATK Mizura: And I also place a card face-down. I end my turn. Bernard: My turn. [draws a card] Bernard(IM): I can't believe that I drew this monster right off the bat. I better use it now. Bernard: I summon Dark Martyr Augustus in Defense Mode. Dark Martyr Augustus: 1400 DEF Bernard: That's all. Damon: Lame. [draws a card] This is awesome. Bernard: Well? Make your move. Damon: Don't rush me, shades man. Bernard: Why you… Damon(IM): But I really got to think straight. Since I was the last person to go, I get the first attack. With this combo, I'll get a good head start. Bernard: Are you chicken? Damon: This'll knock your socks off! Bernard: Hm?! Damon: I summon Flame Ruler in Attack Mode! Flame Ruler: 1500 ATK Bernard: So your monster has just enough power to destroy mine, so what? Damon: Did I say I was done? Bernard: Errhhh… Damon: I activate the Spell Card Double Summon! This card allows me to Normal Summon a second time for this turn! Bernard: Huh?! Katelyn: Uh oh. Damon: So now I sacrifice my Flame Ruler to summon Tyrant Dragon! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK Bernard: No fair, you need TWO monsters to tribute to summon Tyrant Dragon, not just one! Damon: Ah, but Flame Ruler had a special ability. Whenever I wish to Tribute Summon a high-level Fire monster, Flame Ruler alone counts as 2 sacrifices for the summoning. Bernard: No way! Mizura: Heh heh… Damon: And since I was the last one to take a turn, I get to attack first! Tyrant Dragon, blow away his Dark Martyr Augustus with Erupting Fire Blast! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKDark Martyr Augustus: 1400 DEF[Dark Martyr Augustus is destroyed in battle] Damon: And since you guys have another monster on your side, my dragon can attack again! Katelyn: Oh boy. Damon: Tyrant Dragon, attack the face-down with Erupting Fire Blast! [Tyrant Dragon destroys the face-down monster in battle] Katelyn: Thank you. Damon: What? Katelyn: You attacked my Skelengel. His Flip Effect allows me to draw 1 card from my deck. [draws 1 card] Damon: Whatever. I end with two face-downs. Katelyn: Now it's back to me. [draws a card] I think I'll throw another monster face-down and end my turn. Mizura: Okay, now it's up to me. [draws a card] I place one card face-down. And now, Gagagigo, attack Bernard directly! Katelyn: I defend with my face-down monster! [face-down monster was destroyed] Bernard: Thanks, sis. Mizura: I end my turn. Bernard: Okay, my turn. [draws a card] Bernard(IM): My deck loves me better than I thought. This card will teach Damon's dragon a thing or two about manners. Bernard: I summon the diabolical Snipe Hunter! Snipe Hunter: 1500 ATK Damon: That puny thing doesn't have the power to match my Tyrant Dragon or Mizura's Gagagigo. Bernard: It's not his attack you should be worrying about, lame brain. It's his effect. Damon: Hm? Bernard: By discarding a card…[discards 1 card] I can activate Snipe Hunter's special ability. Snipe Hunter, Laser Roulette! Damon: What the…what's happening? Bernard: The numbers you see spinning around Snipe Hunter are numbers numbering 1 through 6. If Snipe Hunter gets a 1 or 6, then his special ability fails, but if he gets a 2 through 5…heheheh. Damon: Well…? Bernard: You'll see soon enough. [snipe Hunter's numbers are slowing down] Damon: Get a 1 or 6. Bernard: Bring him down. [slows down and lands on…4] Damon: Uh oh. Bernard: Yes! I got a 4! Which means my Snipe Hunter's ability activates! Snipe Hunter, destroy Tyrant Dragon with your special ability! Damon: What?! Bernard: Say goodbye to your dragon! [snipe Hunter destroys Tyrant Dragon] Damon: No way! Bernard: Now, attack him directly! Snipe Hunter: 1500 ATK Damon: An eye for an eye. Bernard: What? Damon: I can't allow that dangerous of a monster to stay on the field. Bernard: What are you talking about? Damon: Reveal trap, Sakuretsu Armor! Bernard: Oh no! Damon: This trap destroys an attacking monster, so say goodbye to your dragon killer. Bernard: No! [snipe Hunter is destroyed] Damon: That'll teach you! Bernard: You punk! I end by placing a card face-down, your move. Damon: About time. [draws a card] I summon Troop Dragon to defend my Life Points. Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Damon: That'll be all for now. Katelyn: Goody, my turn. [draws a card] I activate Change of Heart. Mizura: Oh boy. Katelyn: Oh boy is right, because it allows me to take control of any 1 monster on the field. So hand over your Gagagigo. [Gagagigo switches control to Katelyn] Mizura: No, Gagagigo. Katelyn: Good, now you'll be attacked directly by your own monster! Attack! Gagagigo: 1850 ATK Damon: Troop Dragon, defend! [Troop Dragon takes Gagagigo's attack] Katelyn(IM): Crud, I forgot about that guy's monster. Damon: Thank you. You activated Troop Dragon's special ability. When destroyed in battle, I can summon another one to take its place. Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Katelyn: Oh well, I sacrifice Gagagigo to summon Chaos Command Magician! Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATK Damon(IM): Not a bad card. This is gonna be rough. Katelyn: And I end my turn. Mizura: How dare you take my Gagagigo! [draws a card] I'll get someone even stronger! I activate A Legendary Ocean! Bernard: Uh oh! Katelyn, we now how dangerous she gets with that card in play! Katelyn: I know! Mizura: And now I summon GIGA Gagagigo! Giga Gagagigo: (+200) 2650 ATK Katelyn: Uh oh. Mizura: Giga Gagagigo, attack Chaos Command Magician! Katelyn: Not good! Giga Gagagigo: 2650 ATKChaos Command Magician: 2400 ATK Bernard: I won't be having any of that. Mizura: Huh? Bernard: I activate Ring of Destruction! Katelyn: Bernard, that's risky! Bernard: This trap destroys your monster and does damage to the both of us equal to your monster's ATK! [Giga Gagagigo is destroyed] Mizura: No! (-2650) 1350 LPBernard: Arg! (-2650) 1350 LP Mizura: I…end with a face-down. Bernard: Sorry, Mizura. But it had to be done. [draws a card] I summon Shining Angel! Shining Angel: 1400 ATK Bernard: Attack Troop Dragon! Shining Angel: 1400 ATKTroop Dragon: 800 DEF[Troop Dragon is destroyed in battle] Damon: You activated its special ability again! Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Bernard: I end my turn. Damon: And I start mine! [draws a card] By summoning Mirage Dragon in Attack Mode! Mirage Dragon: 1600 ATK Damon: Mirage Dragon, attack Bernard's Shining Angel! Mirage Dragon: 1600 ATKShining Angel: 1400 ATK[shining Angel is destroyed in battle] Bernard: Erh! (-200) 1150 LP Damon: Take that! Bernard: No, I'll take this! You activated Shining Angel's special ability by destroying it in battle! Damon: I know, you get another monster of Light from your deck and summon it straight to the field. So hurry up already! Bernard: Shut it! I'll just get another Shining Angel. Shining Angel: 1400 ATK Damon: Show some originality, man. Bernard: Are you finished yet? Damon: Yeah, I end my turn. Just as Damon ended his turn Mizura looked over and quietly got his attention. Mizura: Damon. Damon: What is it, Mizura? Mizura: I need you to get Katelyn off me. I intend to finish off Bernard myself. Damon: If anyone's finishing that pompous dilweed, it's me. Mizura: Please, he thinks it isn't right for me to hang out with whomever I want. Well I'll show him that he isn't in charge of my life, even if his father is an old friend of mine. Damon: But, Mizura… Mizura: Please, Damon. I've been wanting to stuff it in his face for a long time. This may be my only chance. Damon: Fine, he's all yours. Mizura: Thank you, Damon. Katelyn: [draws a card] I remove Necro Gardna and Skelengel from my graveyard to summon the Chaos Sorcerer! Chaos Sorcerer: 2300 ATK Bernard: Nice one, sis! Katelyn: Thanks, bro! Damon: This isn't good. Katelyn: I shall use my sorcerer's special ability and remove your Mirage Dragon from play. Damon: No! [Mirage Dragon has been removed from the game] Katelyn: Luckily for the both of you, using my sorcerer's ability prevented him from attacking this turn. However, my Chaos Command Magician is free! Go, attack Mizura directly! Damon: I shall defend her Life Points with my final Troop Dragon! Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATKTroop Dragon: 800 DEF[Troop Dragon is destroyed in battle] Katelyn: Oh well, at least I got rid of your last defense, Damon. I end my turn. Mizura: My move! [draws a card] I activate Monster Reborn! Katelyn: Hold it right there, Mizura! Mizura: Huh? Katelyn: I activate the trap card Disappear! Mizura: Not that! Katelyn: It will instantly remove your Giga Gagagigo from the game! You can't bring him back now! Mizura: I'll bring back the regular Gagagigo then! Gagagigo: 2050 ATK Mizura: And now I summon Mermaid Knight! Mermaid Knight: 1900 ATK Mizura: Gagagigo, attack Bernard's Shining Angel! Bernard: Not so fast! I discard Barrier Fiend from my hand to stop all Battle Damage done to me or my monsters for this turn. Mizura: I end. Bernard: [draws a card] Now is the time! Mizura: Huh? Damon: What do you mean? Bernard: I shall summon a "Chaos" monster of my own. Mizura: Oh no! Damon: Great, more chaos freaks! Lenny: Crap! Bernard: Usually for my monster, I'd have to remove a Light-Fairy and Dark-Fiend monster from my graveyard. However, thanks to a monster that lies in my graveyard, I only have to remove it and it alone! Damon: What monster would that be? Bernard: You should know, Damon. You destroyed it with Tyrant Dragon on your very first turn. [FLASHBACK]Damon: And since I was the last one to take a turn, I get to attack first! Tyrant Dragon, blow away his Dark Martyr Augustus with Erupting Fire Blast! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKDark Martyr Augustus: 1400 DEF[Dark Martyr Augustus is destroyed in battle][END OF FLASHBACK] Damon: Dark Martyr Augustus. Bernard: Exactly. His special ability allows him to be treated as both a Light-Fairy and Dark-Fiend. Damon: No way! Mizura: We're in big trouble. Bernard: Now I shall remove Dark Martyr Augustus from my graveyard to summon the amazing, the devastating…Sky Scourge Norleras!!!! Sky Scourge Norleras: 2400 ATK Bernard: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! AUTHOR'S NOTE: I know that Sky Scourge Norleras needs 3 DARK-Fiends instead of 1 to be summoned but I wanted to change it again. It seems that Bernard has played his trump card. Will this card win the battle for Bernard and Katelyn? Will Damon and Mizura lose this double duel? Find out in the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted November 2, 2007 Report Share Posted November 2, 2007 cool chapter, very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixty Posted November 7, 2007 Report Share Posted November 7, 2007 T_T u left me hanging..... o well, nice chapter :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Chapter 13: Double Trouble (part II)Katelyn: 4000 LPDamon: 4000 LPMizura: 1350 LPBernard: 1150 LP Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATKChaos Sorceror: 2300 ATK Gagagigo: 2050 ATKMermaid Knight: 1900 ATK Sky Scourge Norleras: 2400 ATK Bernard: At last, my greatest monster is on the field at last! Damon: Greatest monster? It only has 2400 Attack Points. Bernard: You'll see its powers in due time. Sky Scourge Norleras, attack Gagagigo with Chaos Wave! Sky Scourge Norleras: 2400 ATKGagagigo: 2050 ATK Mizura: Not so fast, Bernard! I activate Waboku! All damage done to me or my monsters is reduced to 0! Katelyn: Do it, Bernard. Bernard: Right. I activate Dian Keto the Cure Master. This gives me a 1000 point boost. Bernard: (+1000) 2150 LP Bernard: And I shall pay the 1000 that I just gained to activate my monster's special ability. Go! Bernard: (-1000) 1150 LP When Bernard yelled the command, Sky Scourge started to gather dark energy. Damon: Is that thing gathering energy? Bernard: Yes, gathering energy for self-destruction! Damon: Self-Destruction?! Damon(IM): I remember. The Wicked Eraser had a similar effect. It can self-destruct instantly, wiping everything out with it. Damon: Let me guess, it destroys all cards on the field! Bernard: More than that! Damon: What?! Bernard: My Sky Scourge destroys everything on the field and…everything in your hand! Damon: No! No! Bernard: I'm afraid so! Sky Scourge, do it now! In a big flash of light Sky Scourge destroys everything on the field. And when the flash was done, all 4 players had to discard their entire hands. Damon: Everything is… Mizura: Gone. Bernard: And thanks to my Sky Scourge's second effect, I get to draw one card. [draws a card] I summon Backup Gardna, in Defense Mode. Backup Gardna: 2200 DEF Bernard: I end my turn. Damon: You're going to wish you never did that! [draws a card] I summon Luster Dragon! Luster Dragon: 1900 ATK Damon: That'll be all for me. Katelyn: My move. [draws a card] Ooh. The card I drew was Card of Sanctity! Bernard: Good! Activate it! Katelyn: I will! This spell card makes us all draw until we each hold 6 cards in our hands! [Everybody draws 6 cards] Damon(IM): My hand is killer now. Mizura(IM): I think we can win with this hand. Bernard(IM): Victory is in our grasp. Katelyn(IM): This hand rocks!  Katelyn: Now I think I'll play Delinquent Duo! Damon: Not that card! Katelyn: I use it on Mizura! Mizura: Uh oh. Katelyn: What Delinquent Duo does is it randomly discards 2 cards from your hand, and all at a small cost of a thousand points. Katelyn: (-1000) 3000 LP Bernard(IM): It's about time that she drew that card. Katelyn: Say goodbye to 2 of your cards, Mizura! [2 cards have been discarded from Mizura's hand] Mizura: No! Not those cards! Katelyn: That's not the end of things. I also activate Confiscation! Damon: This just never ends. Katelyn: I intend to use this card on YOU this time, Damon. But first, a thousand more points have to be coughed up. Katelyn: (-1000) 2000 LP Katelyn: And then this card allows me to look at your entire hand and discard 1 of your cards to the Graveyard! So show me your cards! Damon: Fine. Damon walked over and showed his hand to Katelyn. It consisted of six cards: Tyrant Dragon, Monster Reborn, Graceful Charity, Royal Knight, Axe of Despair, and Pot of Avarice. Katelyn: *gulp* that's a damn good hand. Damon: Well, pick one. Katelyn: I choose…Graceful Charity. Damon: Fair enough. [discards Graceful Charity to the Graveyard] Bernard(IM): Usually Katelyn makes good choices easily. Did Damon have that devastating of a hand? Katelyn: And now I activate MY Monster Reborn to bring back Chaos Command Magician! Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATK Bernard(IM): Katelyn, what do you think you're doing? Why didn't you bring back Chaos Sorcerer? Katelyn: I now attack Mermaid Knight! Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATKMermaid Knight: 1900 ATK[Mermaid Knight is destroyed in battle] Mizura: No! (-500) 850 LP Damon: Mizura, are you alright?! Mizura: Yes, I'm alright. Katelyn: That will end my turn. Mizura: [draws a card] I activate my other face-down card, Reinforcements! This trap card temporarily raises the attack power of my Gagagigo by 500. Gagagigo: (+500) 2550 ATK Katelyn: Oh no! Mizura: Gagagigo, attack Katelyn's Chaos Command Magician! Gagagigo: 2550 ATKChaos Command Magician: 2400 ATK[Chaos Command Magician is destroyed in battle] Mizura: Chaos Command Magician has been destroyed. Katelyn: Crud. (-150) 1850 LP Mizura: And I place one card face-down and end my turn. Bernard: My move! [draws a card] I activate the spell known as Burial from a Different Dimension! Damon: That brings back monsters that have been removed from the game! Bernard: Right you are! Back to the Graveyard to be precise! But I only plan to bring 1 monster back to the Graveyard! My Dark Martyr Augustus! Damon: Not that monster! Bernard: And I revive it with Monster Reborn! Dark Martyr Augustus: 1400 DEF Damon: Why would he revive it instead of removing it again? Bernard: I shall now sacrifice Dark Martyr Augustus to summon Sky Scourge Invincils! Sky Scourge Invincils: 2200 ATK Bernard: Now my beast, destroy Luster Dragon! Sky Scourge Invincils: 2200 ATKLuster Dragon: 1900 ATK Damon: Not so fast, Berny! I activate my trap, Call of the Haunted! [Call of the Haunted then suddenly faded away] What happened?! Bernard: Destroy his dragon! [Mirage Dragon is destroyed in battle] Damon: Damn! (-300) 3700 LP Bernard: I bet you're wondering why your trap disappeared without a trace. Damon: So you DID have something to do with it! Bernard: Depending on what I offer as a tribute for Sky Scourge Invincils' summoning, Dark-Fiend or Light-Fairy, my Sky Scourge can negate the effects of Spells or Traps. Damon: What?! Bernard: But there's a reason I chose Dark Martyr Augustus. Since he's treated as both fore mentioned types of monsters, my Sky Scourge negates both Spells and Traps! HAHAHAHAHA!!! Damon: No way! Bernard: There's no way for you to win now! I end my turn! Damon(IM): He just rendered all Spells and Traps useless. My Monster Reborn won't work! Wait! Spell and Trap Cards would be negated, but not Monster Effects! And there is one monster in my deck that can help put an end to this crap before it even begins, but I have to draw it right now! Come on. [draws a card] I drew it! I can't believe that I drew it! Damon: Time to end this! Bernard: What? How can you do that? Spells and Traps are useless! Damon: But not Monster Effects. Bernard: What?! Uh oh! Damon: I summon Newdoria in Attack Mode! Newdoria: 1200 ATK Bernard: No, not Newdoria! Damon: So much for your other Sky Scourge. Newdoria, ram into Sky Scourge Invincils! Sky Scourge Invincils: 2200 ATKNewdoria: 1200 ATK[Newdoria is destroyed in battle] Damon: (-1000) 2700 LP Damon: I may have lost my only monster as well as a thousand of my Life Points, but it was well worth it! By destroying Newdoria, you've activated its special ability! When destroyed in battle, Newdoria takes 1 monster on the field along with it to the Graveyard! Say good bye to your Sky Scourge. Bernard: No! [sky Scourge Invincils is destroyed] Damon: For my second Main Phase, I'll activate Pot of Avarice! This Spell Card will allow me to pick 5 Monster Cards and shuffle them back into my Deck! [He searches and selects the 5 monsters] Read 'em and weep, Bernard! The 5 Monsters I chose were 2 of my Troop Dragons, Newdoria, Mirage Dragon, and Hunter Dragon! They all will be shuffled back into my Deck! [shuffles his deck] And now I draw 2 cards! [draws 2 cards] I now activate Premature Burial to bring back my other Troop Dragon that rested in the Graveyard! Troop Dragon: 700 ATKDamon: (-800) 1900 LP Damon: And I end with a face-down! Mizura(IM): Why did Damon bring back such a weak monster with Premature Burial? Katelyn: My move! [draws a card] Bernard: Give them hell, sis! Katelyn: Right! I summon the Dumames Dark Witch! Dunames Dark Witch: 1800 ATK Katelyn: Attack Damon's Troop Dragon! Dunames Dark Witch: 1800 ATKTroop Dragon: 700 ATK[Troop Dragon is destroyed in battle] Damon: (-1100) 800 LP Lenny(IM): Oh no! Damon just went from being at the head of the pack to bring up the rear! Katelyn: 1850 LPBernard: 1150 LPMizura: 850 LPDamon: 800 LP Damon: You activated my Troop Dragon's special ability! When destroyed in battle, I can summon another one to take its place! Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Katelyn: I end with a face-down! Mizura: My move! [draws a card] I activate Gift of the Mystical Elf! This trap increases my Life Points by 300 for each monster on the field! I count your Dark Witch, Bernard's Backup Gardna, Damon's Troop Dragon, and my Gagagigo; that's 4 monsters! 300 times 4 equals 1200, and that's exactly how many Life Points are added to my total! Mizura: (+1200) 2050 LP Damon(IM): Good, now Mizura is in the lead. Hopefully with the rest of this turn, she can gain control of the duel! Mizura: I summon Warrior of Atlantis! Warrior of Atlantis: 2100 ATK Katelyn: Uh oh. Bernard: Not good. Mizura: Warrior of Atlantis, attack Katelyn's Dark Witch now! Warrior of Atlantis: 2100 ATKDunames Dark Witch: 1800 ATK[Dunames Dark Witch is destroyed in battle] Katelyn: (-300) 1550 LP Mizura: Eat that! Katelyn: Darn you. Mizura: Now I end. Bernard: And I begin. [draws a card] By sacrificing Backup Gardna, I can summon Fiend of Nai! Fiend of Nai: 2200 LP Bernard: Upon his summon, I deduct 500 Life Points from any player and add them to my own. How about you, Damon? Damon: Err. (-500) 300 LPBernard: Yes. (+500) 1650 LP Mizura(IM): No, Damon's almost out of Life Points! I can't take on both of them by myself! Bernard: Now by paying the 500 I just gained… Bernard: (-500) 1150 LP Bernard: I can activate my monster's special ability. Whenever this card destroys a monster in battle, the controller of the destroyed card takes damage equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster! Damon: What?! Bernard: You're finished, bigmouth! You should've never insulted me! Attack! Damon: Not today! Bernard: Huh? Damon: I activate my trap! Draining Shield! Bernard: No! Katelyn: That stinks. Mizura: Yeah! Lenny: Alright! Damon: My trap negates your monster's attack and adds it to my Life Points. Damon: (+2200) 2500 LP Bernard: This isn't over. I end my turn. Damon: Yes it is. I activate Monster Reborn! Bernard: What?! No!! Damon: Oh yes! By sacrificing my Troop Dragon on the field, I can bring back Tyrant Dragon! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK Katelyn: Oh no! Damon: Tyrant Dragon, attack Katelyn's Life Points directly! Katelyn: AH!! (-2900) 0 LP Bernard: No way!!! I can't take both of them by myself!!! Damon: You won't take the both of us on. Bernard: What? Damon: It's Mizura's wish to finish you off. So I'll just let her do so. Bernard: Errrr… Damon: Hey, on the bright side, since your partner's been defeated, you get twice as many turns. I end with a face-down. It's your turn Bernard. Bernard(IM): [draws a card] How can I trust that he WILL stay out of this? Bernard: I place one card face-down and end my turn. Mizura: What's the matter, too afraid to attack? [draws a card] Bernard(IM): Keep talking, you'll see what I have in store! Katelyn: I'm sorry Bernard. Bernard: Hm? Katelyn: I let you down. Bernard: Nah, you didn't let me down. You're my sister! I can't hate you just because you lost a duel. Katelyn: You mean that? Bernard: Yeah, I do. Damon: He's right, you did pretty good. Bernard: Keep outta this! Katelyn: Thank you, Damon. Damon: No prob. Finish the duel, Mizura. Mizura: Yes. I sacrifice my Gagagigo to summon Levia-Dragon Daedalus! Levia-Dragon Daedalus: 2800 ATK Mizura: And now I activate its special ability! By sending my Legendary Ocean to the Graveyard, I can destroy every card on the field! [A giant tidal wave washes everything on the field away] Bernard: … Mizura: Time to finish this. Bernard: End it…now. Mizura: Levia-Dragon Daedalus, attack Bernard directly and end this duel! Bernard: AHHH! (-2600) 0 LP Final Result:Damon: 2500 LPMizura: 2050 LPBernard: 0 LPKatelyn: 0 LP The holograms disappeared and Mizura walked over two the losers of the duel. Mizura: Are you two okay? Katelyn: Yeah, we're fine. Bernard: Fine, I guess. As they were ready to stand up, Damon walked over. Damon: Not a bad duel, you two. Bernard: We don't need an opinion from you. Damon: I'm trying to be a good sportsman here. Your Sky Scourges were powerful! I was truly caught off guard. Your sister was a pretty good support. Katelyn: Thanks. Despite Damon's compliments, Bernard was still unresponsive. Mizura: Come on, Bernard. Bernard: Hehehe… Damon: Hm? Bernard: You picked yourself quite a good friend, Mizura. Mizura & Katelyn: Huh? Bernard: Full of confidence, truth & humility. That's everything a true human being should be. Katelyn: Bernard. Bernard: However, he has the biggest attitude problem. Damon: And the same could be said about you, Bernard, but I'll tell you one thing, you've got guts. Bernard: Hmph. Thanks. Damon and Bernard shook hands. Lenny: So what happens now? Damon: Mizura and I get one card from the loser's decks. Bernard: Crud! I forgot about that. Damon: Mizura, you get a card from Katelyn's deck. I'll get one card from Bernard's. Mizura: Okay. Katelyn: Choose wisely. Damon: I choose this one. Bernard: Darn, good choice. Mizura: And I pick this. Katelyn: Nice. Damon picked Bernard's Snipe Hunter while Mizura picked Katelyn's Delinquent Duo. Lenny: Man! Good cards! Bernard: Well I guess we'll be going now. Katelyn: Having a double duel has its ups and downs. Since you guys are the victors, you get 2 wins each added to your records. Bernard and I each have 2 losses now. Mizura: I'm sure you'll find a way to come out on top. Katelyn: Thanks, Mizura. Mizura and Katelyn then hugged. Lenny was staring temporarily until Damon hit him over the head. Lenny: Ow. Damon: Have some sense, man. Mizura: Bye, Bernard. Bernard: See ya, Mizura. The Jennings were on their way to their next adventure, it's about time that Damon and the others got going too. Lenny: So, where to next? Damon: Let's just keep going the way we were going. Mizura: That…would be a good idea. Lenny: We are cruising to Pegasus' castle! I have an alright record of 2-1. Damon: I'm 5-0. Mizura: And I'm 5-1 thanks to the double duel. Lenny: WHAT?! Damon: Looks like you have some catching up to do, Lenny. Lenny: That's not funny! It seemed that our heroes are back on their journey. But what awaits them next? Find out in the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 hm, good episode, but 1 question, are my characters done now or will they appear again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixty Posted November 11, 2007 Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 Chapter 13: Double Trouble (part II)Katelyn: 4000 LPDamon: 4000 LPMizura: 1350 LPBernard: 1150 LP Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATKChaos Sorceror: 2300 ATK Gagagigo: 2050 ATKMermaid Knight: 1900 ATK Sky Scourge Norleras: 2400 ATK Bernard: At last' date=' my greatest monster is on the field at last! Damon: Greatest monster? It only has 2400 Attack Points. Bernard: You'll see its powers in due time. Sky Scourge Norleras, attack Gagagigo with Chaos Wave! Sky Scourge Norleras: 2400 ATKGagagigo: 2050 ATK Mizura: Not so fast, Bernard! I activate Waboku! All damage done to me or my monsters is reduced to 0! Katelyn: Do it, Bernard. Bernard: Right. I activate Dian Keto the Cure Master. This gives me a 1000 point boost. Bernard: (+1000) 2150 LP Bernard: And I shall pay the 1000 that I just gained to activate my monster's special ability. Go! Bernard: (-1000) 1150 LP When Bernard yelled the command, Sky Scourge started to gather dark energy. Damon: Is that thing gathering energy? Bernard: Yes, gathering energy for self-destruction! Damon: Self-Destruction?! Damon(IM): I remember. The Wicked Eraser had a similar effect. It can self-destruct instantly, wiping everything out with it. Damon: Let me guess, it destroys all cards on the field! Bernard: More than that! Damon: What?! Bernard: My Sky Scourge destroys everything on the field and…everything in your hand! Damon: No! No! Bernard: I'm afraid so! Sky Scourge, do it now! In a big flash of light Sky Scourge destroys everything on the field. And when the flash was done, all 4 players had to discard their entire hands. Damon: Everything is… Mizura: Gone. Bernard: And thanks to my Sky Scourge's second effect, I get to draw one card. [draws a card'] I summon Backup Gardna, in Defense Mode. Backup Gardna: 2200 DEF Bernard: I end my turn. Damon: You're going to wish you never did that! [draws a card] I summon Luster Dragon! Luster Dragon: 1900 ATK Damon: That'll be all for me. Katelyn: My move. [draws a card] Ooh. The card I drew was Card of Sanctity! Bernard: Good! Activate it! Katelyn: I will! This spell card makes us all draw until we each hold 6 cards in our hands! [Everybody draws 6 cards] Damon(IM): My hand is killer now. Mizura(IM): I think we can win with this hand. Bernard(IM): Victory is in our grasp. Katelyn(IM): This hand rocks!  Katelyn: Now I think I'll play Delinquent Duo! Damon: Not that card! Katelyn: I use it on Mizura! Mizura: Uh oh. Katelyn: What Delinquent Duo does is it randomly discards 2 cards from your hand, and all at a small cost of a thousand points. Katelyn: (-1000) 3000 LP Bernard(IM): It's about time that she drew that card. Katelyn: Say goodbye to 2 of your cards, Mizura! [2 cards have been discarded from Mizura's hand] Mizura: No! Not those cards! Katelyn: That's not the end of things. I also activate Confiscation! Damon: This just never ends. Katelyn: I intend to use this card on YOU this time, Damon. But first, a thousand more points have to be coughed up. Katelyn: (-1000) 2000 LP Katelyn: And then this card allows me to look at your entire hand and discard 1 of your cards to the Graveyard! So show me your cards! Damon: Fine. Damon walked over and showed his hand to Katelyn. It consisted of six cards: Tyrant Dragon, Monster Reborn, Graceful Charity, Royal Knight, Axe of Despair, and Pot of Avarice. Katelyn: *gulp* that's a damn good hand. Damon: Well, pick one. Katelyn: I choose…Graceful Charity. Damon: Fair enough. [discards Graceful Charity to the Graveyard] Bernard(IM): Usually Katelyn makes good choices easily. Did Damon have that devastating of a hand? Katelyn: And now I activate MY Monster Reborn to bring back Chaos Command Magician! Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATK Bernard(IM): Katelyn, what do you think you're doing? Why didn't you bring back Chaos Sorcerer? Katelyn: I now attack Mermaid Knight! Chaos Command Magician: 2400 ATKMermaid Knight: 1900 ATK[Mermaid Knight is destroyed in battle] Mizura: No! (-500) 850 LP Damon: Mizura, are you alright?! Mizura: Yes, I'm alright. Katelyn: That will end my turn. Mizura: [draws a card] I activate my other face-down card, Reinforcements! This trap card temporarily raises the attack power of my Gagagigo by 500. Gagagigo: (+500) 2550 ATK Katelyn: Oh no! Mizura: Gagagigo, attack Katelyn's Chaos Command Magician! Gagagigo: 2550 ATKChaos Command Magician: 2400 ATK[Chaos Command Magician is destroyed in battle] Mizura: Chaos Command Magician has been destroyed. Katelyn: Crud. (-150) 1850 LP Mizura: And I place one card face-down and end my turn. Bernard: My move! [draws a card] I activate the spell known as Burial from a Different Dimension! Damon: That brings back monsters that have been removed from the game! Bernard: Right you are! Back to the Graveyard to be precise! But I only plan to bring 1 monster back to the Graveyard! My Dark Martyr Augustus! Damon: Not that monster! Bernard: And I revive it with Monster Reborn! Dark Martyr Augustus: 1400 DEF Damon: Why would he revive it instead of removing it again? Bernard: I shall now sacrifice Dark Martyr Augustus to summon Sky Scourge Invincils! Sky Scourge Invincils: 2200 ATK Bernard: Now my beast, destroy Luster Dragon! Sky Scourge Invincils: 2200 ATKLuster Dragon: 1900 ATK Damon: Not so fast, Berny! I activate my trap, Call of the Haunted! [Call of the Haunted then suddenly faded away] What happened?! Bernard: Destroy his dragon! [MirageLuster Dragon is destroyed in battle] Damon: Damn! (-300) 3700 LP Bernard: I bet you're wondering why your trap disappeared without a trace. Damon: So you DID have something to do with it! Bernard: Depending on what I offer as a tribute for Sky Scourge Invincils' summoning, Dark-Fiend or Light-Fairy, my Sky Scourge can negate the effects of Spells or Traps. Damon: What?! Bernard: But there's a reason I chose Dark Martyr Augustus. Since he's treated as both fore mentioned types of monsters, my Sky Scourge negates both Spells and Traps! HAHAHAHAHA!!! Damon: No way! Bernard: There's no way for you to win now! I end my turn! Damon(IM): He just rendered all Spells and Traps useless. My Monster Reborn won't work! Wait! Spell and Trap Cards would be negated, but not Monster Effects! And there is one monster in my deck that can help put an end to this crap before it even begins, but I have to draw it right now! Come on. [draws a card] I drew it! I can't believe that I drew it! Damon: Time to end this! Bernard: What? How can you do that? Spells and Traps are useless! Damon: But not Monster Effects. Bernard: What?! Uh oh! Damon: I summon Newdoria in Attack Mode! Newdoria: 1200 ATK Bernard: No, not Newdoria! Damon: So much for your other Sky Scourge. Newdoria, ram into Sky Scourge Invincils! Sky Scourge Invincils: 2200 ATKNewdoria: 1200 ATK[Newdoria is destroyed in battle] Damon: (-1000) 2700 LP Damon: I may have lost my only monster as well as a thousand of my Life Points, but it was well worth it! By destroying Newdoria, you've activated its special ability! When destroyed in battle, Newdoria takes 1 monster on the field along with it to the Graveyard! Say good bye to your Sky Scourge. Bernard: No! [sky Scourge Invincils is destroyed] Damon: For my second Main Phase, I'll activate Pot of Avarice! This Spell Card will allow me to pick 5 Monster Cards and shuffle them back into my Deck! [He searches and selects the 5 monsters] Read 'em and weep, Bernard! The 5 Monsters I chose were 2 of my Troop Dragons, Newdoria, Mirage Dragon, and Hunter Dragon! They all will be shuffled back into my Deck! [shuffles his deck] And now I draw 2 cards! [draws 2 cards] I now activate Premature Burial to bring back my other Troop Dragon that rested in the Graveyard! Troop Dragon: 700 ATKDamon: (-800) 1900 LP Damon: And I end with a face-down! Mizura(IM): Why did Damon bring back such a weak monster with Premature Burial? Katelyn: My move! [draws a card] Bernard: Give them hell, sis! Katelyn: Right! I summon the Dumames Dark Witch! Dunames Dark Witch: 1800 ATK Katelyn: Attack Damon's Troop Dragon! Dunames Dark Witch: 1800 ATKTroop Dragon: 700 ATK[Troop Dragon is destroyed in battle] Damon: (-1100) 800 LP Lenny(IM): Oh no! Damon just went from being at the head of the pack to bring up the rear! Katelyn: 1850 LPBernard: 1150 LPMizura: 850 LPDamon: 800 LP Damon: You activated my Troop Dragon's special ability! When destroyed in battle, I can summon another one to take its place! Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Katelyn: I end with a face-down! Mizura: My move! [draws a card] I activate Gift of the Mystical Elf! This trap increases my Life Points by 300 for each monster on the field! I count your Dark Witch, Bernard's Backup Gardna, Damon's Troop Dragon, and my Gagagigo; that's 4 monsters! 300 times 4 equals 1200, and that's exactly how many Life Points are added to my total! Mizura: (+1200) 2050 LP Damon(IM): Good, now Mizura is in the lead. Hopefully with the rest of this turn, she can gain control of the duel! Mizura: I summon Warrior of Atlantis! Warrior of Atlantis: 2100 ATK Katelyn: Uh oh. Bernard: Not good. Mizura: Warrior of Atlantis, attack Katelyn's Dark Witch now! Warrior of Atlantis: 2100 ATKDunames Dark Witch: 1800 ATK[Dunames Dark Witch is destroyed in battle] Katelyn: (-300) 1550 LP Mizura: Eat that! Katelyn: Darn you. Mizura: Now I end. Bernard: And I begin. [draws a card] By sacrificing Backup Gardna, I can summon Fiend of Nai! Fiend of Nai: 2200 LP Bernard: Upon his summon, I deduct 500 Life Points from any player and add them to my own. How about you, Damon? Damon: Err. (-500) 300 LPBernard: Yes. (+500) 1650 LP Mizura(IM): No, Damon's almost out of Life Points! I can't take on both of them by myself! Bernard: Now by paying the 500 I just gained… Bernard: (-500) 1150 LP Bernard: I can activate my monster's special ability. Whenever this card destroys a monster in battle, the controller of the destroyed card takes damage equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster! Damon: What?! Bernard: You're finished, bigmouth! You should've never insulted me! Attack! Damon: Not today! Bernard: Huh? Damon: I activate my trap! Draining Shield! Bernard: No! Katelyn: That stinks. Mizura: Yeah! Lenny: Alright! Damon: My trap negates your monster's attack and adds it to my Life Points. Damon: (+2200) 2500 LP Bernard: This isn't over. I end my turn. Damon: Yes it is. I activate Monster Reborn! Bernard: What?! No!! Damon: Oh yes! By sacrificing my Troop Dragon on the field, I can bring back Tyrant Dragon! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK Katelyn: Oh no! Damon: Tyrant Dragon, attack Katelyn's Life Points directly! Katelyn: AH!! (-2900) 0 LP Bernard: No way!!! I can't take both of them by myself!!! Damon: You won't take the both of us on. Bernard: What? Damon: It's Mizura's wish to finish you off. So I'll just let her do so. Bernard: Errrr… Damon: Hey, on the bright side, since your partner's been defeated, you get twice as many turns. I end with a face-down. It's your turn Bernard. Bernard(IM): [draws a card] How can I trust that he WILL stay out of this? Bernard: I place one card face-down and end my turn. Mizura: What's the matter, too afraid to attack? [draws a card] Bernard(IM): Keep talking, you'll see what I have in store! Katelyn: I'm sorry Bernard. Bernard: Hm? Katelyn: I let you down. Bernard: Nah, you didn't let me down. You're my sister! I can't hate you just because you lost a duel. Katelyn: You mean that? Bernard: Yeah, I do. Damon: He's right, you did pretty good. Bernard: Keep outta this! Katelyn: Thank you, Damon. Damon: No prob. Finish the duel, Mizura. Mizura: Yes. I sacrifice my Gagagigo to summon Levia-Dragon Daedalus! Levia-Dragon Daedalus: 2800 ATK Mizura: And now I activate its special ability! By sending my Legendary Ocean to the Graveyard, I can destroy every card on the field! [A giant tidal wave washes everything on the field away] Bernard: … Mizura: Time to finish this. Bernard: End it…now. Mizura: Levia-Dragon Daedalus, attack Bernard directly and end this duel! Bernard: AHHH! (-2600) 0 LP Final Result:Damon: 2500 LPMizura: 2050 LPBernard: 0 LPKatelyn: 0 LP The holograms disappeared and Mizura walked over two the losers of the duel. Mizura: Are you two okay? Katelyn: Yeah, we're fine. Bernard: Fine, I guess. As they were ready to stand up, Damon walked over. Damon: Not a bad duel, you two. Bernard: We don't need an opinion from you. Damon: I'm trying to be a good sportsman here. Your Sky Scourges were powerful! I was truly caught off guard. Your sister was a pretty good support. Katelyn: Thanks. Despite Damon's compliments, Bernard was still unresponsive. Mizura: Come on, Bernard. Bernard: Hehehe… Damon: Hm? Bernard: You picked yourself quite a good friend, Mizura. Mizura & Katelyn: Huh? Bernard: Full of confidence, truth & humility. That's everything a true human being should be. Katelyn: Bernard. Bernard: However, he has the biggest attitude problem. Damon: And the same could be said about you, Bernard, but I'll tell you one thing, you've got guts. Bernard: Hmph. Thanks. Damon and Bernard shook hands. Lenny: So what happens now? Damon: Mizura and I get one card from the loser's decks. Bernard: Crud! I forgot about that. Damon: Mizura, you get a card from Katelyn's deck. I'll get one card from Bernard's. Mizura: Okay. Katelyn: Choose wisely. Damon: I choose this one. Bernard: Darn, good choice. Mizura: And I pick this. Katelyn: Nice. Damon picked Bernard's Snipe Hunter while Mizura picked Katelyn's Delinquent Duo. Lenny: Man! Good cards! Bernard: Well I guess we'll be going now. Katelyn: Having a double duel has its ups and downs. Since you guys are the victors, you get 2 wins each added to your records. Bernard and I each have 2 losses now. Mizura: I'm sure you'll find a way to come out on top. Katelyn: Thanks, Mizura. Mizura and Katelyn then hugged. Lenny was staring temporarily until Damon hit him over the head. Lenny: Ow. Damon: Have some sense, man. Mizura: Bye, Bernard. Bernard: See ya, Mizura. The Jennings were on their way to their next adventure, it's about time that Damon and the others got going too. Lenny: So, where to next? Damon: Let's just keep going the way we were going. Mizura: That…would be a good idea. Lenny: We are cruising to Pegasus' castle! I have an alright record of 2-1. Damon: I'm 5-0. Mizura: And I'm 5-1 thanks to the double duel. Lenny: WHAT?! Damon: Looks like you have some catching up to do, Lenny. Lenny: That's not funny! It seemed that our heroes are back on their journey. But what awaits them next? Find out in the next chapter. You messed up something, so I corrected it. godd chapter! :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ryumancer Posted November 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 Chapter 14: A Rivalry is Born! (part I)Damon and the others have been walking down the path through a forest when… ????: AAAAHHHH!!! Damon: A shriek of terror? Lenny: Dad's home! Damon suddenly pounded Lenny on the head. Lenny: Ouchy. Damon: Would you please be serious for once? Mizura(IM): Men are so immature. ????: AH! Damon: Come on, let's find out where that's coming from! Mizura: Right! Lenny: Right behind ya, man! The three stumble onto an open area with minimal trees and obstacles in sight. The yells and grunts were getting louder; they were obviously getting closer. Lenny: I think we're getting warmer, Damon! Past the next set of bushes, they saw a familiar face fall to the ground beaten. Lenny: Oh man. Jeff, is that you? Jeff: Unh…Lenny…It's you. Lenny: What happened to you? You're all beaten up. Just as Jeff was about to rise some big guy with blackish-gray spiky hair and a dark colored longcoat came along and kicked him back down. Jeff: AH! ????: You should stay down. It will make it easier. Jeff: Please, I want a do over. ????: For the fifth time, you nerd, no. I won your precious Wicked God fair and square. Jeff: No, please. Lenny: Hey, man, what's your deal? ????: This has nothing to do with you, commoners. Mizura: Where do you get off calling us commoners?! ????: I got what I came for, I'm out of here. Damon: Typical. ????: Hm? Damon: You beat people down for your own selfish, cowardly needs. ????: You talk big for such a runt. Damon: If you think your so big, you'll have no problem beating me in a duel. Lenny: Damon, I thought it was my turn to duel. ????: You idiots take turns? Losers. Lenny: Okay, that's it! I'm gonna— As Lenny was about to finish his sentence, this vulgar man gave Lenny a wicked right cross. Lenny fell to the ground. Mizura: Lenny! Damon: You okay?! Lenny quickly got back up. Lenny: What's your deal?! Damon: Who the hell are you?! ????: Let me introduce myself. I am Hugo Locke. Lenny: Hugo Locke? No wonder… Damon: No wonder what? Lenny: Damon, Hugo Locke happens to be the Regional Duel Monsters Champion from the States. Damon: From America? Hmm… Hugo: Yes, I happened to be one of the first people Pegasus invited to this tournament. Obviously because of my superior skill. Damon: If you socialize like you do, then what "skill" do you think you have? Hugo: I'm undefeated for one thing. Damon: So am I. Hugo: In how many duels? Damon: I've won all 5 of my duels. Hugo: 5? HehehheheheHAHAHA! Damon: What's so damn funny?! Hugo: 5 is such a pathetic number! I won 9 duels in a row! Lenny: 9?! That's impossible! Hugo: I assure you it isn't, squab. Damon: You sure have a big mouth. Hugo: And you've got an attitude problem. Damon: Yeah, I get that a lot. You obviously have the same problem, Hugo. Hugo: That's Mr. Locke to you. Damon: Ain't happenin'. Hugo: You have no idea what you're getting yourself into, loser. Lenny: He might be right, Damon. He's a Regional Champ. Damon: So? Lenny: Remember the guy who beat me? Akiro Maiku? Damon: Yeah. Lenny: Hugo would be at his level. Hugo: Hmph. I assure you that I have much more skill than Wolfboy. Lenny: Hey! Akiro has more skill and honor than you ever will! Hugo: I'll beat him soon enough. But right now, I've got to get the squabs out of my way. Damon: That's it, you have an ego that needs bruising. Hugo: Heh! Who's going to do the bruising? You? Please! Damon: Here's how it's going to go. If I win, I get back Jeff's Wicked God Card. Hugo: Fine. But if I win, you have to give me 3 cards from your deck instead of just 1. Damon: What?! Hugo: Wicked God Cards are just as rare as the Egyptian God Cards, one of a kind. Damon: Fine, deal. Hugo: Fine then, I will destroy you with my Machine Deck! Damon: What is it with you people and single-themed decks? Hugo: And you don't have one? Damon: No, my deck is all-around, built for any situation. Hugo: We shall see. Damon: Yes we will. Damon and Hugo: Let's duel!!! Hugo: 4000 LPDamon: 4000 LP Hugo: I'll start since I'm the champion. [draws a card] I'll start with Mighty Guard in Defense Mode. Mighty Guard: 1200 DEF Damon: A Non-Effect monster with 500 ATK and 1200 DEF? That won't work. Hugo: Did I say I was done? Damon: Hmph. Hugo: I now activate my favorite Spell Card, Machine Duplication! Damon: Machine Duplication? Hugo: Watch closely as it turns one Mighty Guard…into three! Damon: What happened?! Hugo: Let me explain. Machine Duplication can only work on a Machine-Type monster with only 500 or fewer Attack Points. I search my Deck for 2 monsters of the same name and Special Summon them straight to the field. I summoned my other two Mighty Guards, in Defense Mode of course. Mighty Guard: 1200 DEFMighty Guard: 1200 DEF Lenny: He summoned 3 monsters in one turn. Extraordinary! Come on, Damon. Hugo: And I'll end with a face-down, your move. Damon: Okay. [draws a card] Hugo(IM): Little does he know, my face-down is a Trap. Bottomless Trap Hole. When he summons a strong monster, this Trap Card will destroy that monster and remove it from the game instantly. Damon(IM): Any monster from my hand would be more than enough to bring down those Mighty Guards. However, he might be expecting a strong monster to be on the offensive. So that means a weak monster will suffice. Royal Knight will do wonders. Damon: I summon Royal Knight in Attack Mode! Royal Knight: 1300 ATK Hugo(IM): 1300?! That monster's too weak for my Trap to activate! Damon: Royal Knight, attack the middle Mighty Guard with Celestial Slash! Royal Knight: 1300 ATKMighty Guard: 1200 DEF[Mighty Guard is destroyed in battle] Hugo: Why you…! Damon: (+1200) 5200 LP Hugo: What?! Why did your Life Points go up?! Damon: Thanks to my knight's special ability, my Life Points go up by the DEF of any monster it destroys in battle. Hugo: Hmph. Impressive. Damon: Thank you. I place a card face-down and end my turn. Lenny: You da man! Mizura: Way to go, Damon! Hugo: My turn! [draws a card] Hugo(IM): That face-down monster is most likely a card to support his weak knight. Royal Knight: 1300 ATK Hugo(IM): But that card won't help if he has nothing to support. Hugo: I sacrifice my two remaining Mighty Guards to summon my favorite monster! Mizura: Uh oh! Lenny: This is gonna suck! Jeff: No, not that! Hugo: I summon Barrel Dragon! Barrel Dragon: 2600 ATK Jeff: Damon! That's the monster he beat me with! Hugo: Quiet, nerd! Damon: Doesn't look like much to me. Hugo: You'll see what it's capable of. I activate my Barrel Dragon's special ability! Damon: Which is…? Just as he said this, Barrel Dragon's barrels started rotating at a ridiculous rate. Hugo: As you can see, my monster's barrels are spinning quite rapidly. And the barrels alternate between colors, red and blue. It's a game of roulette. If at least 2 of the 3 barrels land on red, then my monster's ability successfully activates. If not, then nothing happens. Damon: A game of chance? Hugo: Yes, but the odds are in my favor. [Right one lands on red] Told you so. Damon: Errrnnhh… [Left one lands on blue] Excellent. Both were in suspense on what the center one would land on. Hugo: Come on, come on. [Center one lands on…red] Damon: No. Hugo: Heheheheh…Success. Barrel Dragon, destroy Royal Knight with your special ability! Damon: No! [barrel Dragon blows Royal Knight away] Hugo: Now Barrel Dragon, attack him directly! Triple Barrel Blast! Barrel Dragon: 2600 ATK[barrel Dragon blasts Damon directly] Damon: Aaahhh! (-2600) 2600 LP Mizura: Damon! Lenny: You alright, buddy! Damon: Unh…I'm fine. Hugo: So much for your head start. HAHAHAHA!!! Damon: Just keep laughing, you brute! Hugo: I end my turn. Damon: My move [draws a card] I summon Archfiend Soldier to the field in Defense Mode, to guard my Life Points. Archfiend Soldier: 1500 DEF Hugo: Wrong! Damon: Huh?! Hugo: I activate my trap, Bottomless Trap Hole! When you summoned your monster, you activated this card. When a monster with 1500 or more Attack Points is summoned to the field, I can destroy the monster and remove it from the game! Damon: What?! [Archfiend Soldier is destroyed and removed from play] Lenny: No! Now Damon's defenseless! Damon: For my second Main Phase, I activate this, the Swords of Revealing Light! Hugo: Hm? So you have 3 turns to hide, what will that accomplish? Damon: More than you think. I end my turn. Hugo: Good. [draws a card] I summon Robotic Knight in Attack Mode! Robotic Knight: 1600 ATK Hugo: Time for my Barrel Dragon to activate its special ability again. [Red, Blue, Blue] You got off easy this time. I end with a face-down. Damon: Okay! [draws a card] I activate Graceful Charity! Hugo: Oh no you don't! Damon: Don't tell me. Hugo: I had another trap prepared. I activate Spell Shield Type-8! By discarding a Spell Card from my hand, I can negate the effect and activation of YOUR Spell Card and destroy it! Damon: Damn! [Graceful Charity is destroyed] Mizura: That was one of Damon's best Spells too! Lenny: Hang in there, man! Damon: I summon Sangan to defend! Sangan: 600 DEF Damon: And that's all for now. Hugo: Hmph, pathetic. [draws a card] I activate Barrel Dragon's ability again! [Red, Red, Blue] Destroy Sangan! [sangan is destroyed] Damon: Thanks, you activate Sangan's special ability! Hugo: I'm well aware of that cretin's special ability, now draw your weak monster and be quick about it! Damon: You'll regret those words! The monster I chose is a monster that I won recently, Snipe Hunter! Hugo: What?! Lenny(IM): I saw how Snipe Hunter worked in Damon's last duel, this should give Barrel Dragon a taste of its own medicine! Damon: You done yet? Hugo: I end my turn. Damon: Good! [draws a card] I summon Snipe Hunter in Attack Mode! Snipe Hunter: 1500 ATK Hugo: How did you get possession of a card that rare? Damon: I won it in my last duel against a pretty skilled duelist. Damon(IM): Thanks, Bernard. With your card, I can now change the flow of this duel. Hugo: Just take your turn already! Damon: You that eager to lose? Fine. I discard a card to activate Snipe Hunter's special ability! Laser Roulette! [The numbers start spinning around Snipe Hunter] If it lands on a 1 or 6, the effect fails. But if I get a 2 through 5, you get the idea. Hugo(IM): This is insane, I wasn't expecting Snipe Hunter to be in the deck of a putz. [The numbers are slowing down] Damon(IM): Do it! Do it! [it lands on…3] Hugo: No! Damon: Snipe Hunter landed on 3! You know what that means! Snipe Hunter, give Barrel Dragon a taste of its own medicine, destroy it with your special ability! Hugo: No! My Barrel Dragon! [snipe Hunter destroys Barrel Dragon] You retch! Damon: That's not all, I switch Hunter Dragon to Attack Mode as well! Hunter Dragon: 1700 ATK Damon: Now attack his Robotic Knight with Negative Energy Spark! Hunter Dragon: 1700 ATKRobotic Knight: 1600 ATK[Robotic Knight is destroyed in battle] Hugo: No way! (-100) 3900 LP Damon: Now Snipe Hunter, attack his Life Points directly! Hyper Laser Shot! [snipe Hunter shoots Hugo] Hugo: Ah! (-1500) 2400 LP Damon: Who's in control now? Damon: 2600 LPHugo: 2400 LP Lenny: Yeah! Jeff: He's in the lead. Mizura: Way to take it to that bully! Damon: I end with a face-down! Hugo: That's it, now you've done it. [draws a card] I activate Pot of Greed! It allows me to draws 2 cards from my deck! [draws 2 cards] Excellent! Damon: Uh oh, not good. Hugo: I activate Monster Reborn! Damon: No! Not that! Hugo: I bring Barrel Dragon back from the Graveyard! Barrel Dragon: 2600 ATK Hugo: But I'm not done yet. I also activate System Restoration! At the cost of 800 Life Points, I can bring back any Machine monster from the Graveyard in Attack Mode! I choose Robotic Knight! Hugo: (-800) 1600 LPRobotic Knight: 1600 ATK Hugo: Now I sacrifice my Robotic Knight to summon Blowback Dragon! Blowback Dragon: 2300 ATK Damon: Blowback Dragon? Hugo: The effect of Blowback Dragon is quite similar to that of Barrel Dragon, however there's one key difference. Instead of only targeting monsters, Blowback Dragon can target any 1 card on the field, including Spell and/or Trap Cards! Damon: No way!!! Lenny: Damon's in deep water now! Hugo: Now I shall activate the effect of both monsters at once! Barrel Dragon will target your Snipe Hunter and Blowback Dragon will deal with your Hunter Dragon! Go now! Barrel Dragon's results (blue, red, red)Blowback Dragon's results (red, blue, red) Hugo: Success on both counts!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Damon: NO!! Hugo: Both of you wipe out his monsters with your effects now!! Damon: Not good! [snipe Hunter and Hunter Dragon are destroyed] Hugo: Now Blowback Dragon will attack you directly! [blowback Dragon blasts Damon] Damon: AHH! (-2300) 300 LP Mizura: Damon! Lenny: This sucks, Damon can't survive another attack! Jeff: He's going to get beaten like I did. Hugo: Game's over! I told you that you never stood a chance against me! Now you'll learn that the hard way when my Barrel Dragon finishes you off! HAHAHHAHAHAHA!! Is it truly over? Has Damon truly lost his first duel in the tournament? Find this out and more in Part 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 heh, nice ep man, keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alsharid Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Keep it up, I like it when Damon says. What is it with you people and single themed decks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ryumancer Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Chapter 15: A Rivalry is Born (part II)Hugo: 1600 LPDamon: 300 LP Hugo: I told you that you wouldn't stand a chance! Now you're going to learn that the hard way! AHAHAHAHAHAHA! Jeff: Oh man, Damon's screwed. Lenny: Come on, Jeff. Be positive. Jeff(sarcastically cheerful): Damon's screwed!!! Lenny: That a boy. Damon: Hey, I heard that! Hugo: For once your friends are right. You are screwed! Damon: I don't think so, Hugo! Hugo: What are you, blind? Without any monsters, your Life Points are wide open! And I already blasted away 2300 of your Life Points with my Blowback Dragon! And now, my Barrel Dragon will finish you off! Damon: For being a Regional Champion, you're so naïve. Hugo: Time to end this! Barrel Dragon, attack him directly and wipe him out! Barrel Dragon: 2600 ATK Damon: Not today, Hugo! Hugo: What?! Damon: Did you forget about my face-down cards? Hugo: Oh no! Damon: I now activate a 2-card combo! My first card: Rising Energy! By discarding a card, my trap increases the ATK power of your Barrel Dragon by 1500 points! Barrel Dragon: (+1500) 4100 ATK Hugo: Why would YOU power up MY monster? Damon: So that my second trap would be more effective! Go Draining Shield! Hugo: What?! Damon: This trap stops your monster's attack and adds it to my Life Points! Damon: (+4100) 4400 LP Lenny: I can't believe it, Damon's back in the game! Mizura: Hooray! Hugo: Quit delaying the inevitable! Damon: I'm not the one who's going to lose this duel. You are. Hugo: That's a laugh. I've come across hundreds like you! Damon: Maybe you have, but count me as the last! Damon: 4400 LPHugo: 1600 LP Damon: And as far as I can tell, I gained a butt load of Life Points and you only have a mere 1600. Hugo: Life Points aren't everything, peasant. Damon: We'll see about that. Hugo: Yes we will. I end my turn. Damon: Then it's my turn. [draws a card] Choice! Hugo: Now what? Damon: I'm about to turn this duel around, that's all. Hugo: Don't make me laugh! There's no low level monster out there that can possibly survive the onslaught of my 2 monsters! And without any monsters on the field in the first place, you can't make a sacrifice! Damon: Thanks to this monster, I won't need to. Hugo: You lie! Damon: You'll find out soon enough. Since you control 2 more monsters on the field than I do, I get to Special Summon The Fiend Megacyber! The Fiend Megacyber: 2200 ATK Hugo: So what? That monster can't take on either of my monsters. Damon: I'm finished yet, moron. Hugo: What did you--! Damon: I equip this to my monster, Axe of Despair! Hugo: Uh oh. Damon: This Equip Spell increases the ATK strength of my monster by 1000 points! The Fiend Megacyber: (+1000) 3200 ATK Hugo: No way! Lenny: Alright, now Damon's monster can take down either one of Hugo's monsters! Mizura: You're right! Jeff: Take him down a peg! Damon: Okay! Fiend Megacyber, destroy his Blowback Dragon now with Despair Axe Swipe! The Fiend Megacyber: 3200 ATKBlowback Dragon: 2300 ATK[blowback Dragon is destroyed in battle] Hugo: NO! (-900) 700 LP Damon: Eat that! Damon(IM): Whoa, and to think that this card came from a total spaz! Oh well, the card that I won off of that royal pain seems to be paying off tremendously right now. Lenny: Oh yeah! Damon has this jerkwad on the ropes! His lead is enormous, look at the score! Damon: 4400 LPHugo: 700 LP Mizura: Yes, Damon sure is on the ball today. Jeff(IM): Damon might have even improved since MY duel against him. I may not remember that much, but I remember enough to see how he duels, and it seems to be working. Damon: It seems that your streak is ending, Mr. Regional Champ. Hugo(IM): How?! How can I be losing to a mere amateur?!!! This is insane!!! Damon: You'll be so embarrassed when you lose. Lenny: Whoa. Damon's already declaring victory. Mizura: Well it looks pretty much over. Jeff: There's still a little ways to go. Hugo: I won't… Damon: Hm? Hugo: I won't be losing to a nobody! [draws a card] I activate Barrel Dragon's special ability! Barrel Dragon's results: [blue, red, blue] Hugo: What?! No! Damon: Looks like fate's conspired against you. Hugo: Don't you give the fate speech to me! Damon: Fine then, consider it karma! Hugo: That's it! I activate my Nightmare's Steelcage Spell Card! When Hugo activated his Spell Card, a cage suddenly appeared, trapping Damon within. Damon: What the…? Hugo: For the next 2 of your turns, neither of us can declare an attack with our monsters! Damon: Whatever, continue your turn. Hugo: That will end my turn. Damon: Good! [draws a card] I summon Twin-Headed Behemoth in Attack Mode! Twin-Headed Behemoth: 1500 ATK Damon: And that's it for my turn. Hugo: [draws a card] Time for my monster to activate its special ability again! Barrel Dragon's results: [blue, red, red] Hugo: Success! Say sayonara to your Fiend Megacyber! Barrel Dragon, destroy Fiend Megacyber with your effect! Damon: Not that! [The Fiend Megacyber is destroyed] Hugo: I now summon Helping Robo for Combat! Helping Robo for Combat: 1600 ATK Hugo: And I end by placing a card face-down. That'll be all. Damon: Fine. [draws a card] Hugo: When my Steelcage wears off, you'll be finished! Damon: I assure you that I'll find a way to bring you down before that happens. I summon Troop Dragon in Defense Mode! Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Damon: And I also switch my Behemoth to Defense Mode. Twin-Headed Behemoth: 1200 DEF Damon: That'll end it for me. Hugo: Now that my Steelcage is done, so are you. [draws a card] I play a Spell Card known as Transfer Unit! Damon: Transfer Unit? Hugo: It's quite simple, I select 1 Machine monster on my side of the field and I transfer all its ATK or DEF points into my Life Points. Damon: Uh oh. Hugo: I select Barrel Dragon and transfer its DEF points into my Life Points. Barrel Dragon: (-2200) 0 DEFHugo: (+2200) 2900 LP Lenny: Crud! Now that jerk is back in the game! Jeff: He's starting to regain control of the duel. Mizura: Come on, Damon. You can beat him. Hugo: Now, I activate Barrel Dragon's ability yet again! Barrel Dragon: [red, red, blue] Hugo: Good, let's start with that two-headed mongrel of yours. Barrel Dragon destroy that thing with your special ability! [Twin-Headed Behemoth is destroyed] Damon: Damn. Hugo: Now, Helping Robo for Combat, attack his Troop Dragon now! Helping Robo for Combat: 1600 ATKTroop Dragon: 800 DEF[Troop Dragon is destroyed in battle] Damon: Thanks. You activated my Troop Dragon's special ability. When destroyed in battle, I can summon another Troop Dragon straight from my deck. Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Hugo: Fine, that monster will fall in battle against my Barrel Dragon. Barrel Dragon: 2600 ATKTroop Dragon: 800 DEF[Troop Dragon is destroyed in battle] Damon: Thanks again. Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Hugo: I end with a face-down. Damon: Now that it's the end of your turn, Twin-Headed Behemoth comes back with lesser stats than before. Twin-Headed Behemoth: 1000 DEF Damon: And now it's MY turn. [draws a card] Alright! Hugo: Hmph. Lenny: Damon's got that look again. Mizura: Yeah, I remember that look. It's the same look he had when he summoned…Hugo's in trouble now. Lenny: No doubt. Jeff: What? What are you talking about? Damon: You're done for! Hugo: What? Damon: I now sacrifice both of my monsters to bring out my favorite and most powerful monster! Hugo: Please, very few 2-tribute monsters in existence can beat Barrel Dragon in terms of brute strength. Damon: I assure you that this is one of them! I summon the one, the only…Tyrant Dragon! Hugo: Tyrant Dragon?! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK Hugo: How did a monster like that end up in YOUR deck?! Damon: I earned my Tyrant Dragon through hard work and dedication. Something I'm sure a snob like you has never heard of. Hugo: You know NOTHING about hard work! I had to work my way to where I am today! Damon: Well watch your so called hard work crumble! Tyrant Dragon, attack his Barrel Dragon with Erupting Fire Blast! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKBarrel Dragon: 2600 ATK[barrel Dragon is destroyed in battle] Hugo: NOOOO! (-300) 2600 LP Damon: I shall now use Tyrant Dragon's special ability and attack with him again! Hugo: WHAT?! Damon: Tyrant Dragon, attack his Helping Robo for Combat! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKHelping Robo for Combat: 1600 ATK[Helping Robo for Combat is destroyed in battle] Hugo: Urrraagh! (-1300) 1300 LP Lenny: Yeah! With Tyrant Dragon on the field, Hugo's traps will almost be useless! Mizura: It looks like Damon'll win. Jeff(IM): I can't believe it! Damon's on par with a Regional Champion! He amazes more each turn! Hugo: That thing can attack twice?! Damon: Yup. My dragon can attack a second time if you have another monster on the field. Hugo: Fine. Are you finished? Damon: Not yet. I end with a face-down. That's all for this turn. Hugo: My move! [draws a card] I summon Steel Scorpion in Defense Mode! Steel Scorpion: 300 DEF Hugo: And then I activate my face-down card, Machine Collaboration! By discarding a card to the Graveyard, this Trap Card allows me to Normal Summon another monster this turn as long as the first monster that I summoned was a Machine monster. So now I summon Reflect Bounder! Reflect Bounder: 1700 ATK Damon: What? Hugo: I forgot to mention, the Trap Card I activated requires me to summon the monster in Attack Mode! And now for my second Main Phase, I play The Dark Door! This Spell Card makes it so that only 1 monster can attack per turn! And with another face-down I end my turn! Damon: Alright. [draws a card] Tyrant Dragon, attack his Reflect Bounder with Erupting Fire Blast! Lenny: Are you nuts?! Don't rush into a battle! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKReflect Bounder: 1700 ATK Hugo: Don't forget about Reflect Bounder's special effect! When attacked in Attack Mode, it can reflect the attack back at your Life Points after damage calculation! [Reflect Bounder is destroyed in battle] So I receive Battle Damage… Hugo: (-1200) 100 LP Hugo: And then Reflect Bounder bounces the attack damage right back at your Life Points! Damon: Not so fast, Hugo! I activate my Trap of Board Eraser! This Trap Card cancels any Effect Damage to my Life Points and makes you discard 1 random card in your hand! Hugo: MY Trap will cancel it out! Trap Jammer! Damon: No! Urrrrhh! (-2900) 1500 LP Lenny: Man! Brutal! Mizura: Are you okay, Damon?! Damon: Yeah…I'm fine. But this turn still isn't over! Your Spell Card may stop more than 1 monster from attacking per turn, but my dragon can attack a second time as long as you have another monster on the field! Tyrant Dragon, attack Steel Scorpion with Erupting Fire Blast! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKSteel Scorpion: 300 DEF[before Steel Scorpion was destroyed in battle, it stung Tyrant Dragon] Damon: What the…? Hugo: Yes! Damon: What'd your scorpion do to my dragon? Hugo: It poisoned it! Damon: What?! Hugo: When attacked, my Steel Scorpion automatically stings its attacker! After your next 2 turns have passed, your Tyrant Dragon will be automatically destroyed! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Damon: Damn! Lenny: Damon's gonna have trouble without his Tyrant Dragon! Jeff(IM): Curses! Tyrant Dragon is Damon's strongest monster! Without it, Damon's chances of winning are very slim! But if I'm right, he still might have a chance! Damon: It may seem bad now, but I still have 2 more turns until I kiss my dragon goodbye. Hugo: Yes, but one way or another, I succeeded in ridding the field of your monster. Damon: Whatever, I place a card face-down. I end my turn. Hugo: Good! [draws a card] Great! I get myself out of the red zone with this, Dian Keto the Cure Master! This Spell replenishes my Life Points by a thousand! Hugo: (+1000) 1100 LP Hugo: And your dragon may still be on the field now, but with the card that I hold in my hand, it just became useless! Damon: Huh? Hugo: I equip this to your dragon. Damon: Wait! Why would YOU equip MY monster? Hugo: You're about to find out! I equip Paralyzing Potion to your Tyrant Dragon! Damon: Great, now what? Hugo: Any non-Machine type monster equipped with this card won't be able to attack! Damon: No way! You just rendered my dragon useless! Hugo: Yes, I did. Now, I think I'll set a monster face-down in Defense Mode. That'll be all for now. Damon: [draws a card] I summon Mirage Dragon! Mirage Dragon: 1600 ATK Damon: And it'll attack your face-down monster! Attack now! [Mirage Dragon destroys the face-down monster in battle] Hugo: You destroyed Dekochi the Battlechanted Locomotive. His effect allows me to draw a card from my deck. [draws a card] Damon: Whatever, I place a card face-down and end my turn! Hugo: About time. [draws a card] I play Pot of Greed! This allows me to draw 2 cards from my deck! [draws 2 cards] I summon the Mechanicalchaser! Mechanicalchaser: 1850 ATK Hugo: And it's stronger than your dragon! Damon: And your point is…? Hugo: I'll place 2 cards face-down and end my turn! Damon: What? That's it? Hugo: You'll see what happens soon enough. Lenny: What could that snake be planning? Mizura: Beats me. Lenny: Hm. Jeff, you dueled him. Do you know what he might be planning? Jeff: Sorry, Lenny, but our duel wasn't exactly long enough for me to view his strategies. Lenny: Well…that sucks. Mizura: Damon's gotta pull through. Damon: Fine, if you won't be offensive, then I will! [draws a card] I reveal my face-down card, Rush Recklessly! This Spell will temporarily boost the ATK strength of my Mirage Dragon by 700 points! Mirage Dragon: (+700) 2300 ATK Damon: Now, my dragon, attack his Mechanicalchaser! Mirage Dragon: 2300 ATKMechanicalchaser: 1850 ATK Hugo: Not so fast! Damon: Remember, my dragon stops your Traps from being activated during the Battle Phase! Hugo: It's a Spell, dummy! Offerings to the Doomed! Damon: Not good! Hugo: This Spell Card destroys any face-up monster that I choose! I choose your Mirage Dragon of course! Damon: No! [Mirage Dragon is destroyed] Hugo: So much for your dragon. Damon: Didn't want to use this yet but…I activate Pot of Avarice! I select any 5 Monster Cards in my Graveyard and shuffle them back into my Deck! [picks his 5 and then shuffles] And the last part of the effect allows me to draw 2 cards afterward! [draws 2 cards] I summon Troop Dragon in Defense Mode and place a card face-down! I end my turn! Hugo: Figures. Because of Offerings to the Doomed, I have to skip my Draw Phase. However, my face-down will fill in just fine! Go, Jar of Greed! It allows me to draw 1 card from my deck! [draws a card] I summon Nanobreaker! Nanobreaker: 1600 ATK Hugo: Don't be fooled, she's far more deadly than beautiful. Nanobreaker, attack his Troop Dragon! Nanobreaker: 1600 ATKTroop Dragon: 800 DEF[Troop Dragon is destroyed] Damon: Thank you, you activated my Troop Dragon's special ability! Hugo: Not quite. Damon: What? Hugo: Whenever Nanobreaker battles a monster with less than 4 stars, she destroys that monster immediately with her effect without applying any damage calculation what so ever! Damon: No! Hugo: Time to end this! Mechanicalchaser, attack him directly and end this duel! Damon: No you don't! I activate Negate Attack to stop your attack as well as put a halt on your Battle Phase! Hugo: Very well then, I place a card face-down and end my turn. Damon: I draw! [draws a card] Lenny: Man, losing Troop Dragon put Damon in a really rough spot. Jeff: Yeah, I hate to say this, but I think he might lose. Mizura: Don't say that! He'll win, I just know it. Damon: I play Graceful Charity! This Spell card allows me to draw 3 cards from my deck! [draws 3 cards] Then I have to discard 2 cards from my hand to the grave! [discards 2 cards] Now I play Silent Doom! This will allow me to bring back any monster from the Graveyard in Defense Mode! I choose Troop Dragon! Troop Dragon: 800 DEF Hugo: You do know that I'll just destroy that thing again with my Nanobreaker, right? Damon: He won't be out on the field for long. Hugo: Huh? Damon: I now play Monster Reborn! Hugo: Great. Damon: By sacrificing my Troop Dragon, I bring back my Tyrant Dragon! Tyrant Dragon: 2900 ATK Mizura: Tyrant Dragon's back! Lenny: Righteous! Hugo won't be able to survive this! Jeff: Did Damon just win? Damon: Your machines may be tough, but they are no match for my Tyrant Dragon! You won't be able to survive this next attack; your Life Points won't be able to take it! Tyrant Dragon, attack Nanobreaker with Erupting Fire Blast! Hugo: 1100 LPTyrant Dragon: 2900 ATKNanobreaker: 1600 ATK Hugo(IM): This is not the end! Has Damon won the duel? Or does Hugo have other plans? One way or another, this duel ends on the next episode of Yu-Gi-Oh! REVELATION! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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