TwilightAnimePrincess Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Hi. I am new here and I was wondering if there was anyone out there who would look at my first card and give me tips. This is it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom™ Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Wrong section. And...... unless you can handle 0/10, I suggest not to post it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 you're a new memberwrong sectionand for your Official Card Grammer, go here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.htmlbtw welcome to ycmfeel free to pm me if you need help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Wrong Section. -Bad pic.-Horrible OCG. Spire's Rating: 0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwilightAnimePrincess Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Wrong section. And...... unless you can handle 0/10' date=' I suggest not to post it.[/quote'] I can handle it. Thank you for your honest opinion. I will work on it to make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 wrong section,bad picture,bad ocg,wrong section,should be in any other cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Horrible everything. Wrong section, bad OCG, Overpowered, and bad pic. 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillingKid Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Change it so it's not a Divine Beast, because only pro makers can make successful Divine Beasts... Is it meant to have an effect? If so, use OCG and try to make it fit in...Is it a Normal Monster? Take away the effect... 9999 ATK and DEF are fail, sorry, but it's too bad, try to keep it within 0-5000 - if it's meant to be strong attack, keep it at about 4000 or 3000, and give it a summoning condition, or if it's low attack, give it a good effect, and low attack, like Yubel... Try to keep away from 9, 10, 11, and 12 star monsters if you're a beginner, try to add onto already made cards, etc. etc. Keep it simple. The picture is better than most people use, try resizing it though... Overall, I think it's very bad, but pretty good for a first attempt, and you've not gone around crying that you don't know how to post cards, which most people do... I'll give it a 2/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Mods need to LOCK this. Or move. Bad card is Terribad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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