Seta Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Hello everyone! Now, I have decided to make a fan-fic. Hope you enjoy it. [spoiler=Charachters] Johan Encollar Age: 17Deck: AlchemyBio: The older brother of the "Encollar Duo". He loves dueling, and is a champion in his home village. His got a little brother named by Johan. Is currently the first on the top 3 of his home village. Max Encollar Age: 14Deck: Rocket JumperBio: The younger brother of the "Encollar Duo". He simply loves the card "Rocket Jumper". His won many contests in his home village, and is currently third on the top 3 of his home vilage. Lysia Silfertone Age: 17Deck: Ancient GearBio: Johan's "girlfriend". She loves dueling just as much as Johan does. She's especially nuts about machines. [spoiler=Proloque]Voice: Wha- what do you want?? Dark voice: Relax... Nothing bad... Nothing bad.... "AARGH!!!!" A man in dark clothes walked towards the stadium. ???: Get out of the way. You just waste my time.... [spoiler=Episode 1]Max: *Yawn*! Morning?Max walked downstairs, taked his deck and duel disk from the table and 2 Sandwiches.Max: Mom usually doesn't make me breackfast. Must be because that tournament...Max ran into a park, where he met his brother, Johan, and as always, dueling his friend, Lysia. [align=center]Lysia's Life Points: 1200Johan's Life Points: 3200[/align] Lysia: And now, my Ancient Gear Golem attacks you're defender! A giantic machine was ready to rip apart any card it faces. Johan: Flip effect!Lysia: What?An little alchemist appeared on the field.Johan: My Alchemy Kid can negate all effects of 1 face-up monster while flipped face-up!Lysia: So you don't lose any life points by my Golems effect? Fine, but you're monster is still destroyed! Giant machine punched the alchemist right to the cemetary.Lysia: Ill end my turn!Johan: Finally. Draw! Hmm?A little smile appeared on Johan's face.Johan: Ill play my Alchemy Reviver! It lets me to return up to 3 Alchemy cards from my cemetary to my hand! Lysia: So what? They cannot attack.Johan: Maybe they cannot, but someone other can!Lysia: Even if it can, it cannot beat my Ancient Gear Golem.Johan: Oh, really? Watch this! Ill play Alchemy Fusion! Now, Ill special Summon my Alchemist of Fire, Master Alchemist and Blade Alchemist, and send them to the cemetary to Fusion Summon the almighty, Alchemist of Combat!A giant Angel Alchemist rised on the field.And now, Ill activate it's effect! You see, by removing 1 equip spell card from my cemetary, my Alchemist gains 700 more ATK points!Lysia: But that means...!Johan: Yes, that means that my Alchemist is now stronger than you're Golem! Now, Alchemist of Combat, destroy her Golem!Lysia: No! Don't! Angel Alchemist flew high, and then sliced the Golem in halves with his giant spear.Johan: And you know his effect, you lose now 300 Life Points for each level stars youre monster has.[align=center]Lysia's Life Points: 0Johan's Life Points: 3200[/align] Lysia: You won again...Johan: Well, youll win sometimes...Max: That was an awsome duel big bro!Johan: Max? You're here? I didn't even notice!Max: You know me, I'm silent as a mouse!Johan: Yea, yea. Just don't get cocky....Max: So, Lysia's coming in the tournament too? Huh, huh???Johan: Stop asking stupid questions. Ofcourse she comes.Lysia: Yep. I just hope I dont face one of you 2.Johan: Who knows, that you could won.Max: Oh right! I just remembered! Hey, big bro! Will need partners in the first duel!Johan and Lysia: WHAT???Max: Well, I just watched the news before going to sleep, and I heard it from there, and....Johan: And you telll all that NOW???Max: Well... You know, I fell in asleep and...Johan: Come Lysia! Well need to find you a partner - soon!Lysia: You're right! Better go.Johan: Max, wait here!Max: No way! Ill come with you!Johan: *sigh* Allright, allright. Just don't say anything stupid, okay?Max: You know me, Im silent as...Johan: Yea, yea... Silent as a mouse, we know it. Just be quiet.Max: Okay! After a hour of search, Johan, Max and Lysia haven't found a partner for Lysia.Johan: Man.. Is there anyone left?Lysia: No. We visited my every friends house, and everyone already had a partner...Max: But... If Lysia doesn't find a partner, she can't get in!Johan: I bet we knew that already, but....-????: Ill be her partner.Max and Johan: Who??Lysia: Alex! Why are you here?Alex: Think about it, for the tournament too, ofcourse.Johan: Alex? You mean you're big brother Alex?Lysia: Yea, him. Don't you know him?Johan: Ofcorse I know, but... Well, lets leave it there....Max: Great! Now that we all have got partners, we can go to the tournament!Johan: We all? What are you talking about? You have a partner already?Max: Wha- what do you mean? You're my partner, right?Johan: Ofcourse I am, don't look that bad. It was just a joke.Max: A joke????? You almost scared the crap out of me!Johan: Yea, yea... You know Im mean, now lets just heaad to the tournament stadium.Lysia and Max: You bet it!!!Alex: How tiresome.... Episode 1: END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 BUMP! Come on people, comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 This Fan-Fic is not bad ^_^, But there are some Grammar Errors but not bad ^_^Look forward to the next Chapter ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 Yea.... I know, there might be some grammar errors.... But this is my second fan fic (first was a disaster XD). Thanks anyway, Ill continue episode 2 now.Throught some reasons, Ill post my coming chapters in comments: Episode 2! Johan, Lysia, Max and Alex walked towards the tournament stadium. They talked as time passed. Lysia: Johan, you know... We 2 could have also dueled in team...Johan: Yeah, maybe.... Lysia's cheeks flushed. Alex walked near Johan's ear. Alex: Hey boy. Stay away from my sister, or I hurt you...Johan: B- but... I didn't do any...-Alex: Yea, yea.... Go tell your storys somewhere else.Johan: Man, now he thinks I like Lysia... What a mess...Max: There it is! The Tournament Stadium!Johan: Wow. I didn't remember it was that big.....Max: Well, it has changed from before, a lot.Johan: I didn't know that one....Lysia: Well, lets go in!Johan: Right! Inside were many other duelists. There were also many duel arenas. Johan: Wow... Look at all these people!Max: I heard, that the contest was popular, but I did not think that it was this popular!Lysia: So.... We just wait until the duels start, right?Johan: I think so.... Announcer: May I have you're attention? Every duelists with no partners, back down. You need a partner to start the first duel. Johan: I wonder if everyone had a partner.... Announcer: Here are the maches! Lysia and Alex vs. ??? and ??? Arena 1Johan and Max vs. Joey and Tristan Arena 2???? vs. ???? Arena 3???? vs. ???? Arena 4 Johan: Wow! It appears that many didn't have partner....Max: That Joye dude sounds familiar.... Johan and Max headed to Arena 2, where they're opponent's where already waiting. Max: Wait a second! That's Joye Wheeler!!Johan: What? You mean that Joye Wheeler?Max: The one and the only! Joey: So you're Johan and Max, or should I say, "Encollar Duo"?Johan: Don't get cocky even that you're Yugi Mutou's friend. We came here to win, right Max?Max: Yea!Tristan: It is not gonna be that easy....Johan: That doesn't matter. Lets Duel! [align=center]Tristan's nd Joey's Life Points: 8000Johan's and Max's Life Points: 8000[/align] Johan: I'll start! Draw! I'll play a face-down defender and 2 face-down cards and end my turn.Tristan: That's all you can do? Draw! Ill play Axe Raider in Attack Position, and equip him with Gravity Axe - Grarl!! Now, attack his defender! Warrior jumped towards the face-down monster, and the card flipped face-up.It was The Alchemist of Fire. Axe Raider slashed it in half. Tristan: Ill place a face-down card and end my turn.Max: My move! Draw! Ill play the spell card, Earthquake!! It changes all monsters Battle Position to Defense Position! Next, I'll Summon Rocket Jumper in Attack Position! Tristan: That kind of a weakling doesn't even scare me.Max: His not weak! Ill play Rocket Boost! It increases my cards ATK by 700! Tristan: Still, it doesn't scare me.Max: Lets see then who do you like his effect! Go Rocket Jumper! Tristan: Hah, it cannot hurt me, just- The rocket launched towards tristan. Tristan: W- what? It's a direct attack? Max: Yes. You see, while all the monsters my opponent control are in Defense Position, it can attack you directly! Tristan: Nrgh! Rocket launched and dealed damage of 1700 points, and then returned to Max's field.Max: Ill place 1 face-down card and end my turn!Joey: Finally! Draw! I'll play Scapegoat! Itsummons 4 Sheep Tokens to my field! 4 little fluffy sheeps appeared on the field. Joey: Ill play 1 face-down, and en my turn:Johan: Draw! Ill play the card, Alchemy Draw! It lets me draw 3 cards, by discarding 1 alchemist from my hand. Next, Ill play the card Alchemy fusion! It lets me to Special Summon up to 3 monsters that are listed in a Alchemist Fusion monster, and Fuse them together! So, Ill Special Summon "The Fire Alchemist" and "Master Alchemist" from my graveyard, and "Blade Alchemist" from my hand! Next, Ill fuse them to create the ultimate, "Alchemist of Combat"! Now, I'll attack you're Axe Raider! Destroy him, Alchemist of Combat!The angel alchemist slashed the Axe Raider, and it disappeared. Ill end my turn. Tristan: My move, draw! Heehehee! Now you've lost! Ill play Mausoleum of the Emperor! Now, I can pay 1000 Life Points instead of 1 Release! Ill summon my best card, Gilford the Legendby paying 2000 Life Points! And next, I'll activate his effect! Ill equip him with the Gravity Axe - Grarl in my Graveyard to increase his ATK points to 3100! Now, attack Johan's Alchemist! Johan: Ill activate my Alchemist's effect! By removing up to 3 cards from the top of my Deck from play, It gains ATK equal the number of the cards discarded times 200! I remove 2 cards, so his ATK becomes 3400! Tristan: So he wins my Gilford? No way! Ill play the spell, Rush Recklessly!!! My Gilford wins! Johan: No, couse Ill play my face-down trap, Alchemy Stop! Ill pay 500 Life Points, and negate you're attack! Tristan: This is not over yet... Ill end my turn. Episode 2; END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted August 30, 2008 Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Not bad, not bad at all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2008 Thanks ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 SUPA BUMB!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.