youngigy Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 Test Card created for video tutorial: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phatt Mann Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Official Card Grammer needs some work!Nice pic! -XIII Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eryops3 Posted August 26, 2008 Report Share Posted August 26, 2008 Grammar problems.You might get better rates if you work on it. Like yours:An monkey ate my orange.It ate it up. That doesn't tell me how much he ate and "An" should be a. Better:A monkey ate my orange while I wasn't looking.It ate it all up! That is what it should be like(note that this is a similie). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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