juan231095 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Hay!!! Wow ^^ this looking really good!! And of corse all thanks to the writter, producer, director, well... we dont need to get in that!! Weeeeeellll..... anyways hope you still make this good job! ^w^ Seeing you around..... PS:Plz TwT PM me back for you-know-what xDD (lol) just to give more suspence (lol....again) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 *Bump* Chapter one up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 *Bump* I added A 'card of the Chapter' thing for the first chapter, a shameless rip-off, and a note on the ability that you never got to see of the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 Wicked first chapter mental!I can't wait to read chapter 2 and see what this voice in josh's head is all about! And I can't wait to see what your're planning to do with Arashi and the other characters in your future chapters! My rating for the first chapter: 9/10 Keep it going man, this is very impressive and I'm into your fan fics now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Yep, always room to improve! 10/10 is for final episodes really. The voice in Josh's head is vaguely foreshadowed at in chapter 15 of the first volume, in case you didn't notice. Chapter two is... Well... To be honest I'm tossing a couple of ideas around for chapter two. But hopefully parts of it you won't expect :). Oh, and I edited it slightly, nothing special, just a line or two. Nothing much to worry about... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Now your vol 2 is a great start...and a mystery undertone with the "voice"...is it someoen who know...or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 They have appeared in the story, yes. And I repeat they are in chapter 15 of volume one. It becomes clear when you think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2009 *bump* Chapter Two added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 *Bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 So another duels begins...there must be a very good reason on why you ended off there...have to wait and see then, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 No good reason really, except for a select few anyway... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 No good reason really' date=' except for a select few anyway...[/quote']so there was a reason, so spill it...or you can wait till your next ch to say them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 hey dude!I'm hooked onto this!I love your style of writing, not too complex but you get all the details =)Keep it up, please =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Really? Good to know. Alas, school is eating up much of my time currently, and i'm one of those idiots who writes numerous stories and updates agonizingly slow because of such. Rest of my stories are on Fanfiction.net, the first one I wrote there was actually this story from a different point of view, I decided To do this one because I was trying to start fresh and improve my writing. My writing still needs work, and I may find myself leaving this story incomplete too alas. But hopefully not. So yeah, glad you enjoyed it, the next chapter is partway done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami-Atemu Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Whoa the first chapter blew me away. I couldn't believe the intensity of the duel. Loved it by the way. A bit overpowering and a bit expected but hey it was awesome. I really thought the boy was going to lose here. That would have been unexpected to say the least. Ah well good stuff. I have been having a hard time finding a fanfic I personally enjoy but I found my first one. Thank you kind sir. The only thing I was disappointed about was the Syncros. I really wasn't expecting them there at all and wasn't hoping. Ah well, just keep me entertained with the fanfic and I'll learn to accept. Would love to read the next chapter, but time for dinner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Where are these people coming from? Well, glad you enjoyed it. Don't like Synchros? Pity, there is a few in there. Although not too many. I prefer for fanfics those monsters that require specific summoning conditions, like Gate Guardian (only much better and (some exceptions) easier, naturally). Well, I may need to work harder on the next chapter! More people coming to see this story it seems. Edit: Oh, and as a small clue, I decided to switch the letter for a person's Life Points in the last chapter to the first initial of the person's actual name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2009 Well, chapter three added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 Michael...why that name sound so familiar...and good Life cards too, I remembered those babies... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Why does it sound familiar? Good question, answer is in Remnants of Power. Yeah, the Life cards make a comeback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 *Bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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