Mr. Hyde Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Ive been trying to improve my ocg so here are my set of cards.This monster can only be special summoned by the effects of 'Defenders of mobius-Naruto Uzumaki'. This card gains 100 ATK for each of your opponents spell and trap cards. Five turns after this card is played tribute this card to special summon one card whose name includes 'Defenders of mobius-Demon fox naruto state 2'.This monster can only be special summoned by the effects of 'Defenders of mobius-Demon fox Naruto State 1'. This card gains 200 ATK for each of your opponents spell or trap cards. When this card gains 1000 ATK from this effect tribute this face up card for a card whose name includes 'Defenders of mobius-Demon fox Naruto 4 tails'.This card can only be special summoned by the effect of 'Defenders of mobius-Sasuke Uchiha'. This monster gains 100 ATK for each monster on your opponents side of the field. When this card gains 500 ATK from this effect tribute this card to special summon 1 card whose name includes 'Defenders of Mobius-Cursed mark Sasuke state 2'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corporal Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Why the hell does everyone want to help Mobius so much? These are decent, but many are over-powered. Take Dialga. First off, he's a dragon. Secondly, the effect should be more like: "This card cannot be special summmoned. During your opponent's Standby Phase, you can activate this card's effect. Immediately skip to your opponent's End Phase. If you activate this effect you cannot attack on your next turn. This effect can only be used twice for the entire duel." There be some OCG errors, but I just rushed an example of how to improve it, so yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Summoned, Special Summoned, etc. is capitalized.OCG is a bit better though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broly12345 Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Ok why in the world do they all have Defenders of Mobius in the title? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeypooop Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 10000000000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broly12345 Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Need imrovements. Plus, why are Dialga and Palkia Dinosaurs!? I know for a fact that they are dragons! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Need imrovements. Plus' date=' why are Dialga and Palkia Dinosaurs!? I know for a fact that they are dragons![/quote']Sorry when i was doing them i thought they were dinosuars and theyre defenders of mobius bbecause theyre good guys and defend stuff and mobius is where my main man sonic lives so i thought it would be cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 I'm not wild about them 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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