:.Bronze Hat.:™ Posted August 20, 2008 Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 This story is about a tournament with represnitaves for all 8 of our planets (and Pluto) hoping to become champoin - all for a different purpose. After a represenitave of the entire Solar System is selected, he/she will face represenitaves of all Solar Systems to become the best duelist in the Galaxy! The story will automatically jet forward to the 4-way qualifying finals for planet Earth. In this fanfic will be totally new charecters and cards. Without further ado, here's chapter 1. Chapter 1: The Finals - Earth Yoshumi: "Batteryman, attack him directly and win me the Duel!" Jefferson's Life Points are down to 0. Referee: "Jefferson is out of the Duel. Earth's represenitave will be Yoshumi Tyona." Yoshumi: "Yes!" Yoshumi: *Picks up card* Yoshumi: "Batteryman, you have served me well." Referee: "Excuse me, sir, but you'll need this badge to show that you're Earth's official represenitive for the Galactic Tournament." Yoshumi: *Picks up badge* Yoshumi: "Okay. Thank you." Referee: "We also want you to take this special set of cards to give you a boost in the tournament." Yoshumi: "Interesting....." ****************************************************** Yoshumi and his freinds Max and Hita are walking down the street. Hita: "It's great you beat Jefferson and got the position of Earth's represenitave for the Galactic Tournament, Yoshumi." Max: "Yeah, now you have the chance to bring pride to Earth and be crowned the best duelist in the Galaxy!" Yoshumi: "Yeah, it's pretty great, isn't it?" Max: "Just don't get confident, these guys are from all over the Galaxy, you know." Yoshumi: *Silence* *The trio walks into the sunset* ******************************************************Max: "Looks, like we're, here! Hey, you're Duel's going to start soon, Yoshumi." Yoshumi: "Yeah, I better get going. See ya, guys!" Max and Hita: "Bye! We'll be right there, cheering you on!" *15 minutes later* Reffere: "Let the Duel between Yoshumi Tyona, represenitave of Earth, and Kilgaak Oyshun, represenitave of Venus, begin!" Yoshumi: "Hmmmmm................" Yoshumi: "I know! First i'll play Batteryman AA in Attack Mode! Then i'll play North Pole Attarcion to summon Batteryman D in Defense Mode! That ends my turn!" Kilxgaak: "Ok, then i'll play Oxygedon in Attack Mode! Then i'll play Dian Keto the Cure Master, which raises my Life Points by 1000. Next i'll play DNA Surgery to change all monsters to Pyros! Oxydegon, attack Batteryman D!" Yoshumi: "But, it will be destroyed........" Kilgaak: "Exactly! If Oxydegon is destroyed in battle with a Pyro-Type, both players lose 800 Life Points!" Yoshumi: *Gasp* *Oxydegon launches a Fire Cyclone at Batteryman D, but Batteryman shoots fire in the form of lighting which devours Oxydegon and his attack* Yoshumi and Kilgaak: "Uh!!" Life Points are currently at Yoshumi: 3200, Kilgaak: 4200. Yoshumi: "But, you just left yourself wide open! Now I play Sparks, which inflicts 200 points of Damage. Now I summon another Batteryman AA, so now I have 2 Double a's with 2000 points of juice! Attack him directly!" Yoshumi: 3200Kilgaak: 0 Hita: "You'd think that if he was chosen to represent an entire planet, he'd be a little better than that." Max: "Yeah...." Kaaglik: "Stop! He's not the real represenitive!" Everyone: "Huh?!" To be continued...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staticrevenger Posted August 21, 2008 Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 Hey this is pretty cool! :)But I think you should put in a small section at the beginning that describes the personality and appearance of the characters. Any, still quite good :D. BTW, Oxygeddon, not Oxydegon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:.Bronze Hat.:™ Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Charecters: Yoshumi Tyona Apperence: Crazy hair like others, but redBlue EyesStandard Male Domino High UniformBlack undershirt with battery pictureGold watch with battery pictures to tell when it's time to d-d-d-d-d-d-d-d-duel (not really :))Personality: Nevers of steel but has great inthusasm and can be rather freindly.Deck: Batteryman EX Max Decarlo Apperence: White part right hair with blue and silver highlightsBrown eyesStandard Male Domino High UniformPersonality: Yosumi's childhood friend and a genuis, especially when it comes to dueling.Deck: Metal/Spell Life Hita Suji Apperence: Exact same apperence as Hita the Fire Charmer, except with a not-so-angry facePersonality: Off the dueling field, she can be peppy and freindly or a nervous wreck. On the dueling field, she's a warrior, even if she has 100 Life Points and the opponent has 100,000,000.Deck: Vengance Jefferson Millaway Apperence: Spiky Brown hairBrown eyesStandard Male Domino High Uniform Alien charectors will be added every 3 chapters.Chapter Two: Round One Kaaglik: " He's my fakie brother. Let the real match of Earth VS. Venus commense." Yoshumi: "You're on!" Kaaglik: "I play Card Destruction! Now we each discard are hands and draw the same number of cards we discarded. So now I play Rewind! Now I can add 2 card sent the Graveyard just now to there position before being destroyed. Since I brought Or Warri back to my hand using Rewind, I can play him with double attack!" Or Warri now has 3000 ATK. Max & Hita: *Gasp* Max: "Now that's the real represenitave!" Yoshumi: I play Ultimate Offering and summon Batteryman AA. Then I play 500 Life Points to summon another Batteryman AA. Then I play another 500 Life Points to summon Electromagnet. Then I play 1 card face-down." Thanks to Batteryman AA's and Electromagnet's effects, the Batteryman's have 3000 ATK. Max: "Yoshumi countered a 3000 attack point monster providing move in one turn!" Kaaaglik: "I honor you for being that good! Unfortunatly, i'll still have to beat you! I summon Anceint Gear Soilder in Defense Mode and play my own face-down." Yoshumi: *Thoughts* "It's a good thing he's falling for my fake trap. Electromagnet does have 0 attack and defense -" Kaaglik: "Aha!" Yoshumi: "What?" Kaaglik: " I can read thoughts! You just gave away your sfety, big time!" Hita: *Gasp* Yoshumi: "You cheat!" Kaaglik: "If your too erm.. is chicky how humans say it? Anyway, if you're too chicky to continue, forfeiting is within the rules." Yoshumi: "Never! I play another Electromagnet. Batteryman attack!" Kaaglik: "Not so fast! Activate trap - Mirror Forcce!" Yoshumi: *Gasp* *Explosion* Yosuhmi: "I still have my turn. I play one card face-down." To be continued.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
haloichigo1 Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 interesting idea, but you should add more you skip ahead onlyto the important parts and i kind of want to know what happens between soi can feel a connection with the characters.it was still cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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