stevie58 Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 hope you like please rate and comment please please please tell my if i should to change any thing ok just re edited it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyramid head Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H0micidal WolfMan Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 well, i get the concept, but be a bit more original, ocg is wrong (ocg=official card grammar) and it wouldnt be elemental, it be either Aqua, Warrior or Spellcaster, or make a subtype. like:Aqua/Elemental/Effect. sorry, try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevie58 Posted August 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 thank u ill make the adjustments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkxxx8 Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 ocg errors, overpowered, and make the effect better. 4/10keep trying ull get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H0micidal WolfMan Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 oh, i just noticed, if ur triyin to make his name chinese, it should be spelled, Shou Feng. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 good card,nice effect,but I personally like long complicated effects: 9.5/10(NOT effected by my like for long effects) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 "For every Aqua-Type monster on the field, increase the ATK of this card by 500." I think thats what you wanted. Well: -The pic isn't great.-Bad OCG. Rating: 3.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 OMG. Please fix the OCG and name. This wont get more than a 4.5/10 if you dont do so. Name should be Show Fang, the God of Water. Until then I stand by my current rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 First of all, your OCG is off. It should be: Increase the ATK of this card by 500 for each face-up WATER monster on the field. The name is also off. It needs to be: Shou Fang the God of Water (as mentioned by H0micadal Wolfman) It is overpowered for its Level. Either reduce the ATK bonus or lower the stats. Here are my suggestions: 1) Reduce the bonus to 300 per WATER monster2) Reduce the ATK to 2300 and DEF to 2700 or so. This cards needs BALANCE. I fixed your OCG. Image is okay. Effect is basic and overpowering. Stats are too high. Meh... 5/10. Not bad, but not great. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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