monem Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 PLZ tell me about the mistakes that i do in this card. (After fixes) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 OCG Errors,everything is pretty good,just work on the ocg more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted August 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 OCG Errors' date='everything is pretty good,just work on the ocg more[/quote']OK . i will fix it . thanks for the advice. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Yea, work on ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted August 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 Yea' date=' work on ocg[/quote'] :D This is the card after fixes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 how about:"When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can send to the Graveyard 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field to Summon this monster to the field."5/10 just the ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted August 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 how about:"When this card is destroyed as a result of battle' date=' you can send to the Graveyard 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field to Summon this monster to the field."5/10 just the ocg[/quote']good idea !thanks for help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 glad i could help ^_^though i do suggest lengthening its effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 How about an additional effect:"If "The Elder God" is on your side of the field, this card cannot be destroyed. Additionally, if this card is equipped to "Soul Reaver" and "Kain" is on your opponent's side of the field, "Kain" must target this card before targeting any other card." Only putting bread on the table there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monem Posted August 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 How about an additional effect:"If "The Elder God" is on your side of the field' date=' this card cannot be destroyed. Additionally, if this card is equipped to "Soul Reaver" and "Kain" is on your opponent's side of the field, "Kain" must target this card before targeting any other card." Only putting bread on the table there![/quote']it's a usefull effect . i think that i well make for another card .Thanx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 You know the OCG wasnt that bad to start. are you new to this. because your doing much better than I did at the start. And btw you dont have to listen to them about the counter effects, why dont you try "When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, you can tribute 1 monster in your control to Special Summon 1 'Raziel' from your hand or deck." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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