kaiser Ryo Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 It's an idea I had but i'm not sure if its any good so could you plz rate and make any suggestions and point out problems.Lore:Once per turn you can special summon 1 'Persisting token' to your side of the field (Unknown-type/DARK/level 3/ATK 0/DEF 1500) in defense position. While this card is on the field you can tribute any number of 'Persisting tokens' to increase this cards ATK by the number of tokens tributed X500 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 OCG needs work. Pic could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhiteFang29 Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 i like it 9.999999999999999999999999, screw it 10/10 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Name: 9/10 Doesn't Match Very Good With Picture.OCG: 8/10 DecentPictures: 8/10 Could Be BetterBalance: 9/10 OkLittle Things:7/10 Set Initials are Numbers :?: Circulation It's Just BadOverall: 8.5/10 Nice ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Try not to use fake types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaiser Ryo Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Thanks for the fairly good ratings, by the way I used a fake type cos I didn't really know what it should be I thought Fiend does that sound about right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ivarboy Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 change it’s type to fiend.:|6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutocooper Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 OCG errors,pic could be better but overall balenced. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 im going to use this card in the YMC magazine ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Tributed, times 500. Good pic and effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevie58 Posted August 17, 2008 Report Share Posted August 17, 2008 needs a little work but over all 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrbishop Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 10/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 very good! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom199502 Posted August 18, 2008 Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 8/10 fix ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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