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Under Water Smudge =D


Jerry OldMaster

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Left side from the render on is really empty

That light on her left shoulder is too bright for that lighting pattern

Right past the render things is way too dark and empty

No flow

No depth

Text on left is acceptable, but on right is bad

 

Basically just have that one little thing near the render and then the rest is boring

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Text is a bit choppy. You need to work on your depth. [basically, with a gradient of black and white make a radial gradient with mostly of the white radial, set it to overlay and erase over it] No flow[bad boy, I say bad]. You should add one of your signatures and just erase some parts. Then set it to overlay or something. You need to fill it a bit. As Ms Prob said, basically yeah most of what she said ^^"

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Text is a bit choppy. You need to work on your depth. [basically' date= with a gradient of black and white make a radial gradient with mostly of the white radial, set it to overlay and erase over it] No flow[bad boy, I say bad]. You should add one of your signatures and just erase some parts. Then set it to overlay or something. You need to fill it a bit. As Ms Prob said, basically yeah most of what she said ^^"

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