Haze Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 My first one:its a hypchou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Wow...crop your image, then I'll rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haze Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 how do u crop? i am a noob at this stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 ...Are you serious? Do you ever wonder there is almost no white when People show off there sprites? Make there be no white around the sprite. Like this: Highlight the image to see what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haze Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 ok then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 I'd love to critique this myself. Yet due to the sprite itself being much too small, I can't do much. First off, crop out the white, and save as .PNG. Secondly, I think I see you fused together Hypno and Chinchou. Yet sadly all you did was add the antenna, a very small and boring change. This is all I can say though, sorry I could give more critique to help you, but the size, file type, and the lack of cropping prevent it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustov_ya Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 ouch that was kinda rough dont you think jappioi mean this is like his first one or close to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 -.- All Profesional Splicers are rough when it comes to rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted August 12, 2008 Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 Rough, how so? I basically told him its physically impossible for me to rate it. Also it being his first means nothing. A person has the fullest potential to make a good splice, even if its their first. And yes, even without looking at guides. My first splice I didn't use any guides, and I think it turned out fine. Not the best though of course. Also critique is not being rough, I see critique as a gift, a show of kindness. It shows I want to help him to get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haze Posted August 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 a boring old charchu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Well I can see that you took the things we said and improved, good job. You still have some things to learn though. Ok, you can tell by looking at it that you need work with recoloring. Even at first glance you can see something is wrong. Some of the outline you turned to the same yellow you used for the body. This brings up the point that you only used one shade of yellow. This took away all the shading and makes the sprite look really flat. Also because of this, you didn't have a dark yellow to use as a border. Now all around the sprite, you can see some of the old red border, which doesn't look good against the yellow. Another good point is that Pikachu isn't represented the best. You merely just stuck the ears on, and used the color. Well thats all I really have to say at this point. Hope you take this advice like the last and use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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