jamief Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 If you have read my last fanfic, you will know it wasn't very good. But this time, it is going to be better, being there only one hero. Aster Phoenix [spoiler=Chapter 1] Aster was getting bored of winning. With no challenge worthy of him where he lived, he decided to leave. He planned to journey by Jet, not knowing where he was going. Pilot - Excuse me sir, but we're gonna have to do a security check. Aster - What! but this is my Jet Pilot - I'm sorry, it's my policy. Aster - Well then you're fired! Pilot - I am afraid i do not work for you, Aster. Aster - What ? The imposter struck Aster with a vicious blow, knoking him unconscious to the ground. 14 hours later, Aster woke up. He found himself lying in a Grassy field, with nothing but his Duel disk and his Deck He checked his Deck, and then it struck him. The Pilot had stolen his destiny hero plasma. Aster - I shall not rest untill i find that crook and retrieve my Plasma! So Aster decided to walk. Not knowing where he was going, he fell through a hatch in the ground Aster - Damn it! my leg Aster had landed on his leg, and injured his self. He hadn't quite broke it, but it was a sore one. He appeared to be in some secret meeting place. Suddenly, a stranger appeared behind him Aster - Aaaaaaah! Lyon - Hi my names Lyon Aster - Damn it, you scared me Lyon - Sorry, but what are you doing here. Aster - well, i was knocked unconscious a few hours ago, And i have no clue where i am, Damn it ! Lyon - Well , this is my Dad's farm. You can stay if you want. Aster - no sorry, i have buisness to deal with. Lyon - Hey, Say, is that a Duel Disk on your arm Aster - Why, yes it is, i see you have one to. Lyon - Well, i challenge you to a duel! Aster - *sigh* i suppose i can never back down from a duel, besides isn't that what ive been looking for. Aster and Lyon raised there duel disks, as they commenced a Duel Lyon - Let the game begin! [spoiler=Chapter 2] Aster VS Lyon Aster - 4000Lyon - 4000 Aster's Turn - I'll start my turn off by playing Destiny Draw, letting me dicard my Destiny Hero Disk Commander, to draw 2 cards. I'll place one face down monster and end my turn. Lyon's Turn - Ah, i see, Destiny hero's. I summon gladiator beast Laquari, and attack your face down monster, *Gladiator beast Laquari Destroy's Asters face down Destiy hero Fear Monger* Now i end the battle phase, letting me send Laquari bact to the deck, To special summon Gladiator Beast Hoplomus, in deffense mode. I'll Pass it over to you. Aster's Turn - During my standby phase, Destiny hero fear monger lets me special summon Another destiny hero from my grave , and you know which one that is! *Aster special summons Destiny hero disk commander and draws two cards* I tribute my Commander, to Summon My caius the shadow monarch. *Aster removes from play Lyon's Hoplomus, and attacks with Caius* Aster - 4000Lyon - 1600 I'll Set one face down and end. Lyon's turn - I draw!*sigh* I play one face down and end. Aster's Turn - I play Mystical space typhoon, *Aster destroy's Lyon's face down trap card, and attacks with Caius* Aster - 4000Lyon - 0 Lyon - Wow, that was a great duel, are you sure you don't want to stay Aster - I'd like to but i can't, Sorry, bye....... um, would you mind showing me the way out of here ? Lyon - Sure, When Aster got home, he sat down on a cold wooden chair. He was thinking, thinking of what he could do to get his plasma back. But nothing came to mind. He customised his deck , then hit the lights END OF CHAPTER 2 [spoiler=Chapter 3]Aster left early the next morning.He took the route to KaibaArena, an advanced Duel stadium, designed by KaiboCorp , to hold legendary tournaments. Aster stood at the registration desk, suspiciously looking at other contestants. Registration lady - *cough* may I help you sir, Aster - Oh, sorry, I kinda dosed of there. I’d like to register for the tournament. Registration lady - Well, you only just made it in time, you’re the 16th and last contestant of the tournament. Aster - I suppose I better enter the arena then. Registration - That, would be sensible *sigh* Aster walked into the arena nervously, as the other competitors stared at him, with great anger and determination. The crowds were howling, and the commentator was about to fire a gun. The sound of the weapon would announce the start of the tournament, and the end of Seto Kaiba’s career. But suddenly, an argument broke out between 2 contestants. They were wearing the same uniform, and seemed to be arguing about plans. Contestant 1 - Shhhh… we have to keep the plan a secret, stop complaining and stick to the plan! Contestant 2 - The plan is stupid, we should just gas them all now, take all their cards, and stop working for the boss Contestant 1 – 1,000 Dollars, just to steal some ones cards. Contestant 2 – Well you can stick to the plan, but I’m knocking them all out 1 way or another. *Contestant 1 punches Contestant in the face, knocking him out* Contestant 1 – Everyone shut up! Or I will kill you all. I am Ryko, and all I ask of, is the one named Aster Phoenix to hand over his cards. Aster – What! I will never do that! Ryko – Then I challenge you to a duel, if you win, you I shall leave, and if I win, you hand your cards over to me. Aster – Fine! Lets duel Aster VS Ryko Aster’s turn – I’ll start the duel of by summoning my Destiny End Warlock. Now during your next draw phase, you can’t draw a card. I’ll set one face down and end my turn. Ryko’s turn – I activate my Dark Coffin spell card. So now your Warlock is removed from play, and would normally return to your side of the field at the end phase, but since it is a dark monster, it won’t come back. *Ryko summons Solar Flare Dragon, Sets one face down, and ends his turn.* Ryko - 4000Aster - 3500 Aster’s turn – I play Destiny Reborn, so I discard 2 cards from my hand, and get to bring back 1 destiny end monster from my graveyard. *Aster Summons Destiny End Warlock* And that means that again, you shall not draw a card Ryko- Stop, I activate seal of Fire, now All I have to do is tribute a Fire monster, and I get to destroy 2 cards on your side of the field *Ryko destroys Asters face down, and his Warlock * Aster – I’ll set a monster and end my turn. Ryko’s turn - *Ryko special summons cyber dragon* I now tribute my Cyber Dragon, for Thestalos the firestorm monarch, *Ryko discards one random card from Asters hand* I will attack your face down monster. *Asters face down Destiny End Soldier is destroyed* I end my turn. Asters turn – I will play Smashing Ground destroying your Thestalos *Aster plays Destiny Awaken* Destiny awaken, lets me summon one level 8 or higher monster with destiny in its name from my hand, and ignoring the summoning costs. *Aster special summons Destiny hero Dogma and attacks directly* Ryko - 600Aster - 3500 Ryko’s turn – Hmph! *Ryko drops his duel disk and runs into the far distance* Ryko – 0Aster – 3500 Aster ran after him, but it was to late, he had gone. The audience had flee'd, scared as could be. END OF CHAPTER 3 [spoiler=Chapter 4] Aster walked back into the arena, and picked up Ryko’s deck. Aster – Nothing but worthless card, *Sigh*. Wait a minute! Its my Plasma! How the hell did he get a hold of that . Strange, but I suppose there is more work to be done, I must track the leader of this organisation down. *Aster noticed a small print on Ryko’s dueldisk. It had DYO written on it * Aster – *Hmph* Time to meet with an old friend ------------------------------- Duel Academy… Chancellor Shepard – So, what brings you here Aster ? Aster – I need you to take a look at this. Chancellor shepard – Is this some kind of game Aster, it’s a Duel disk. Aster – No, there is an inscription on it, what does it mean ? Chancellor Shepard – Rrrr! I thought I’d never here of them again ! Aster – Who ? Tell me now ! Chancellor Shepard – It stands for Dan Yuki Organisation, and you shouldn’t know about this Aster – Yuki…. What, You mean… Like Jaden Yuki Chancellor Shepard –That’s right, Aster. Dan Yuki, is Jaden’s father! NOT FINISHED YET...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2008 *COUGHbumpCOUGH* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 MEGABUMP, what the hell have i done wrong, to have no replys in one week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 Umm... It's really short for a Fan-Fic man. Try prolonging the episodes a bit so that it's more enjoyable. But I read it and so far, not too bad. The only thing I'd say is to write more and you're on your way! -PD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Interesting! It could be longer, but I'm not complaining. You've inspired me to start my own fan fic!-This is not an official Shiko11 comment, just a friendly jesture- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 ^ thanks :) i will try to make m chapters longer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~The Red Crusader~ Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 Very good, I'd like to see what the heck did Aster do to his deck xD *waits for Chapter III* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Posted August 15, 2008 Report Share Posted August 15, 2008 I like it so far, you know your cards well =]Try making it a bit longerBut still, I wait for Chapter III Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 chapter 3 is posted, sorry but it is a short one i may add on to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamief Posted August 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 BUMP- hmmmm, i might have to supposed to stop making these, if no one replys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoPaladin2008 Posted August 22, 2008 Report Share Posted August 22, 2008 Nice work Jamie, as everyone else has said, mibbe a bit longer chapters, but meh, not much.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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