Mah first tagamabob

[+Jono]

Ok, like I said, I would be switching styles. So here is (I think it's called a) tag that I made using one of my splices, Artizaptres.

 

 

I know, it sucks. I know, you want to come to my house and chop my head off using a blunt hack saw, making it as painful as possible, so I can never go near photoshop again and destroy your eyes with another horrid tag. But this is my first shot so bear with me... CnC please.

 

Thanks for the tut Altair.

[Obi-wan Cannoli]

Problematica Is going two throw you off a cliff in to a pit a snarling Junkyard dogs. Hungy, Junkyard Dogs >=P.

 

The tag is so darn Bright, its not even worth making it sound funny. It looks like you put two C4d's on a black background. Used a white brush to make the spaces between them overly white and bright. I know you did more then that but that's what it just looks like. You just put a splice on top with no blending But the colors are close to matching. If it wasn't for the blue outline around Artisa..pters..s whatever, with a tiny amount of smudging it would blend. Read some more tuts. Try out thing for yourself.

[Cyber Altair]

polar is gonna kill you, lemme do so instead.....

 

wtf is with the stroking? seriously get rid of it not only it ruins the blending which doesn't exist but is a whole different colour... learn the colour wheel please... Plus as for the flow the the bird is flying in the wrong direction ruining the flow.... BG is simple, ugly and doesn't fit at all

 

this is all to help you improve, don't take it wrong =D

[Zack Blaze]

I like It

[+Jono]

Problematica Is going two throw you off a cliff in to a pit a snarling Junkyard dogs. Hungy' date=' Junkyard Dogs >=P.

 

The tag is so darn Bright, its not even worth making it sound funny. It looks like you put two C4d's on a black background. Used a white brush to make the spaces between them overly white and bright. I know you did more then that but that's what it just looks like. You just put a splice on top with no blending But the colors are close to matching. If it wasn't for the blue outline around Artisa..pters..s whatever, with a tiny amount of smudging it would blend. Read some more tuts. Try out thing for yourself.

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Yeh, I don't know who Problematica is but from reading his/her posts I can conclude that Problematica is someone who likes to put others down when he/she doesn't have any skills either and probably make sigs like mine. But who knows. I could be wrong. I don't care. I'm only interested in constructive feedback.

 

polar is gonna kill you' date=' lemme do so instead.....

 

wtf is with the stroking? seriously get rid of it not only it ruins the blending which doesn't exist but is a whole different colour... learn the colour wheel please... Plus as for the flow the the bird is flying in the wrong direction ruining the flow.... BG is simple, ugly and doesn't fit at all

 

this is all to help you improve, don't take it wrong =D

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First up, what's stroking? Yeh I need to lrn2gfx I know. Also the sprite. I KNEW THAT WOULD CAUSE TROUBLE ^^. I was going to put in a normal sprite but Nooooo. Dam me. Anyways I also thought the background would be a problem. I don't have a clue about C4D's which is probably why I chose the wrong ones. Anyway thanks for the feedback. Like I said this is my first try.

[Spire]

That looks pretty good.

 

Good job! ^_^

[Seth]

Yeh' date=' I don't know who Problematica is but from reading his/her posts I can conclude that Problematica is someone who likes to put others down when he/she doesn't have any skills either and probably make sigs like mine. But who knows. I could be wrong. I don't care. I'm only interested in constructive feedback.[/quote']

Yeah, I'm still waiting for her to post one of HER GFX's.

 

Anyways, Altair-sama and Obi-kun have already stomped on you enough, so I won't post anything, cuz I would porbably say something like they did =)

Have a nice day~

[Cyber Altair]

she's really good, about same level as me, kox and haruno....

 

also try making sure that the white spots make the area around the sprite brighter and not just looking like white dots which are really bright.... they shouldn't be really visible much in this case but yet bring attention and add lighting to our piece =D

[Inverted{Craze}]

Yah Shes Cool.

I Really Want To See Her GFX Though!

I Like it, Kinda.

Maybe A Flock Of Them?

Anyway

Prolematica Is Going To Come To Your House And Steal Your Mom

[Guest Star]

Yeh' date=' I don't know who Problematica is but from reading his/her posts I can conclude that Problematica is someone who likes to put others down when he/she doesn't have any skills either and probably make sigs like mine. But who knows. I could be wrong. I don't care. I'm only interested in constructive feedback.[/quote']

Yeah, I'm still waiting for her to post one of HER GFX's.

 

Anyways, Altair-sama and Obi-kun have already stomped on you enough, so I won't post anything, cuz I would porbably say something like they did =)

Have a nice day~

 

If you want to see one of her graphics, look in my signature.

 

Also, I like the tag.

[problematica]

Please don't base the rest of my work off that tag ^^' Picture was nearly impossible to work with

 

As for the tag, if I said anything it would be a recap of everything negative everyone else has already said, but like worse

[Jerry OldMaster]

=D

Smudge anyone? :\

[Paranoia_Survivor]

Umm.. a C4D with light spots and a horrible green outline? That's it?

[+Jono]

Like I said this is my first shot at this style. I want to improve not hear about some random who comes to peoples houses and kills their family members. All that problematica stuff is basically spam.

 

 

she's really good' date=' about same level as me, kox and haruno....

 

also try making sure that the white spots make the area around the sprite brighter and not just looking like white dots which are really bright.... they shouldn't be really visible much in this case but yet bring attention and add lighting to our piece =D

[/quote']

 

Like I said I don't care about problematica. But you still didn't answer my question, What's stroking? Oh and also how do I reduce the brightness of the white dots? If you have MSN then I think we need to talk. Thanks for your help though =)

[problematica]

Stroking is where you put an outline around a character or other object, e.g. the blue outline around that Pokemon

 

To make it less bright lower their transparency/opacity

[+Jono]

Oh ok. Thanks ^^ The tut didn't call for lowered opacity so I didn't do it. I usually follow the tut exactly for my first time, then change it later. As for the stroking that was made with the splice:

 

As seen there.