Ultimate Ryan Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 The tag has 4 versions because i couldnt decide on a way to end it out, also the sniper effect on all of them is completely custom because I could not figure out how to do it otherwise, I spent an hour making the sniper effect alone >.< so without further adieu, I present Ryan's First (4) tags! Ver1 - Ver2 - Ver3 - Ver4 - And for the brushless SIG here it is!!! - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 nice but what are tags 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aashar Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 Wohh dude awsome 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 tags are sigs with instead of a render they use stocks ^-^ thanks, but they're not that great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 You lack of flow and depth. They are all too plain as I said to you yesterday that the signatures will be plain. Never use a large render, it ruins the scene. The brushless one is the most plainless one. You need more light for depth. As for flow, you'll know later on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZevSCG Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 k Ryan, just a couple things I'd like to point out :] Tags = sigs. No matter what :PI'm going to basically just give some advice. I know this is your first tag or two, but its good to imply this stuff early ;) For the first tag...v2 is best, imo. The focal on all 4 versions is too big, as its hard to distinguish what it is (I think it's Gardevoir, not sure though ^^") Your text...usually it doesn't look that good on an angle tbh. The colours on the text make it a bit hard to read as well. As Kox said, establishing lighting, look for the darker spots of the render. Opposite to those, for lighting, you can brush over the lighter areas with the 65px soft brush (in white), set the blending mode of the layer to Lighten, and lower the opacity. If you want to add shadows, you do the exact opposite: brush over the darker areas with the 65px soft brush (in black), set the blending mode of the layer to Darken, and lower the opacity. As for flow, I'm not sure how to really help you. Hope this helps with your first sig (: As for the brushed sig...thats definitely an interesting place for the focal. I think this tag would've been better smaller. Text is okay, but should probably be a bit closer to the focal. Most people are against borders, but I think it looks good on this one. Adding some more effects near the focal would look cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 The borders are okay for the tag.The border for sig is good.Text sucks on both.They're both simple but nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 There great, good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 I kind of like how the half ovales are kind of pushing in on it. :P Anyway, the others are ok, I wouldn't call the a fail but they are 70/30 70= Good30= Bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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