Mecha Restore and Destroy

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Well im bored and decided why search for pics when i can just post written cards.

so my second written card, a Machine support spell.

The original name was supposed to be

Mecha Rebuild

or

Mecha Restoration

 

rate/hate/comment

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[RestLess-BoTics]

I think you forgot to capitalize the word, "Graveyard" but otherwise, excellent! Keep up the good work! :)

 

-Glasstin

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huh didnt notice that.

and thanks.

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[Lucas Maximus]

This doesn't look bad; I see a few OCG errors, though.

 

Nevertheless, good job. ;)

 

6/10

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wheres the errors please

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bump

[.:|Fallen|:.]

i like it

9/10

i have a pic u can use for it if u want it

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pm me the pic and ill see

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[Parting Shot]

"as a result of battle" should be "by battle", level, Graveyard, face-up, Attack Position, "During the End Phase", selected. Those are all the errors I saw. Though, I think it would be better as either some form of Trap or a Quick-Play Spell as Normal Spells don't have the speed to be played when it's activation requirements require (lol).

 

Hope this helps ^_^

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it does i should have it fixed by tomorrow