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[shogunboy]

I need help in OCG/grammer, and I do not know what to change within the OCG/grammer. If anyone can help me with this, that would be great.

 

Sar'Nex the Guardian of the Dead

five stars

Undead

ATK/DEF: 2200/2400

 

This card can not be summoned except by releasing two dark monsters from the Grave. When summoned, monsters are treated as undead. Once per turn, this card can reproduce a similar effect to , "Call of the Haunting". If used, this card can not attack. When this card is destroy, the monster affected by the effect is also destroyed.

 

Lucuszelzer the Guardian of Magic

six stars

spellcaster

ATK/DEF:2500/2000

As long as this card is face-up, all spell cards cannot be activated, and all face up spell cards are negated.

[Umbra]

I'd figure you want something like this.

 

1st:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by removing 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position to your side of the field. If you choose to activate this effect, this card can not declare an attack until the end of your turn. If this card is destroyed, destroy all monsters that was Special Summoned by this card's effect.

 

2nd:

Spell Cards cannot be activated. The effects of all face-up Spell Cards are negated.

[shogunboy]

Alright, if anyone can help me with an multi effect, that would be great.

 

Menfluous the Guardian of the World

12 star

Divine Attribute/Divine Beast

ATK/DEF: X000/X000

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by advance summoning 5 monsters with "Guardian" in their names from the field. If any monster with a DARK attribute was part of the summoning, increase the attack and defense of this card by 1200 per DARK Attribute. If any monster with LIGHT attribute was part of the summoning, this card is allowed to negate one attack per LIGHT monster (limit 2). If any monster with EARTH attribute was part of the summoning, this card heals 700 lifepoints per EARTH monster.

 

Also need to see if this is imbalanced ( I will limit this to three Attributes and create another divine card).

[Tabris]

Here's what I think:

 

Sar'Nex: Il Blud's a lot better.

 

Lucuszelzer: The game already has Spell Canceller, and the combination of brute strength and the lockdown of a whole mechanic has been proven to be too powerful.

 

1/10

[shogunboy]

I'm going to change the second card with a recoil that disallows the owner of the card to activate magic himself. Basically, I was changing the card during the time you were posting this. I just have one question, does Jinzo have the same issue as my card, or is it just me?

 

The changes on the card is in my thread with the Guardian set. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-60596-post-934784.htmlpid934784

[Tabris]

Yes.

[shogunboy]

I see, then the recoil effect will say in order to make the card more like a delay for those who rely on spell cards. Will a delayer be a game breaker?