Neo Yu-Gi-Oh card - first of a Matrix set

[sunnybacon]

EDIT 9/8/08: Corrected with tips, thanks NinteenHundred - again! :)

EDIT 11/8/08: Unstretched the picture of Neo.

 

This is a card based on Neo from the Matrix:

Hope you like it

It's the first card of a 60-card Matrix deck I'm planning.

[NineteenHundred]

Interesting card. I`ve never seen anybody try to make Matrix cards. Should go in Pop Culture though.

 

There is some errors though, but don`t worry, I`ll point them out:

 

- First of all, the "Divine" attribute is usually frowned upon. Change it to an attribute that best suits the character of the card.

 

- "Psychic-Warrior" isn`t a real type. Change it to "Psychic" or "Warrior".

 

- OCG Correction: If your opponent controls 2 or more "Agent Smith"s` on the field, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent`s Life Points for each one on the field.

 

Overall, relatively good. 6/10.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Fix:

 

If your opponent controls 2 or more "Agent Smith", your opponent loses 500 Life Points for each "Agent Smith" he/she controls.

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It's kinda overpowered. Give it a harder Summoning condition or lower the ATK and DEF. Or a little of both.

[Mr. Hyde]

It depends if your opponent has those cards

[Pikachu]

1. just warror is fine

2. overpowered, remove stars

3. why is a divine beast?

lol

[sunnybacon]

Interesting card. I`ve never seen anybody try to make Matrix cards. Should go in Pop Culture though.

 

There is some errors though' date=' but don`t worry, I`ll point them out:

 

- First of all, the "Divine" attribute is usually frowned upon. Change it to an attribute that best suits the character of the card.

 

- "Psychic-Warrior" isn`t a real type. Change it to "Psychic" or "Warrior".

 

- OCG Correction: If your opponent controls 2 or more "Agent Smith"s` on the field, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent`s Life Points for each one on the field.

 

Overall, relatively good. 6/10.

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Thanks dude, I've corrected it and also lowered the number of stars to 8. :)