Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Old Best - Edited Ver - For Teh Lulz - Maybe New Best - Male on leftShiny Ver - or Scitwomew? Vespiking or Cymew?(also please rate them all ^-^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 That looks good. Great job Ryan ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Both are fantastic, but I like Vespiking more :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 3rd 1 added ^-^ he pwns all (i think) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 looking at your splices almost made me puke your old best is just barely on a average splicers level and don't get me started on the new ones your lucky i don't feel like rating them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 Whoops, the mewtwo one is KILLER! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 0_0 i worked forever on that one... what about the others? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 0_0 i worked forever on that one... what about the others? uhh sorry if i seem really "a$$-like" i've had the misfortune of talking to Draco today witch never puts me in a good mood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 i just wanna become better, any tips? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 there ok 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 which do you think is my best? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 i just wanna become better' date=' any tips?[/quote'] I'd start by contacting ruby for tips but until then practice the basics of splicing and do what you can but don't over step your level and your best is the vespiking i just don't like the star on his head and I was being nit picky about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 vespiking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 vespiking > the mewtwo 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 no Mewtwo> Vespiking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 > = greater than so your saying mewtwo greater than vespiking ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 i spent you a pm so you vespiking shall be better and wile I'm I'd like to say I've calmed down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 The mewtwo one looks the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 I cant rate it. Its too good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 thanks and buffer, working on it, thanks for the crown sprite! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted August 8, 2008 Report Share Posted August 8, 2008 vespiking is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted August 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 uPdAtE1!1! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted August 10, 2008 Report Share Posted August 10, 2008 heh you used the crown.........................i probly would have got more creative with it but its ok and i think a tiny bit better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Ok, I'll critique each individually. Vespiking is good in concept, but lacks some things. You have almost no shading! This is a huge issue, sprites are suppose to have shading. The legs are blocky, cut off weird, and need some work. They also have a metallic look, inconsistence with the res of the thing. The stripe across the stomach also has an inconsistent feel to the rest. The sprite itself only resembles a bee in color. Bees don't have claws, huge legs, stingers from the neck, and usually have six legs. Now it is a Pokemon though, so this could still be considered a bee, but I still would like to point out its pushing it. The star doesn't look right, but I don't like crown either. The crown is flat, too square, unshaded, and its angle does not match the sprite. Cymew has its issues too. The tail is one of the big issues. Its partly morphed with the back of the leg, and also, doesn't match up with the flame. Its like the tail is part of the leg, not directly connected with the center of the body, or the spine. The two Lucarios ear things also have a problem with the flame. The flame is shown behind them, but really should be between them. The yellow design starts in the center of the chest, but then goes over the leg, and then onto the side of the tail, then to the underside. You have some outline issues on the feet. Between the two forms, I don't like either. The flames are flowing in a too horizontal way. The horns though I don't like the color, I think they should be blue. Speaking of colors, you have too many. You have red, pink, yellow, and blue. I'd probably make the yellow blue, and maybe also the red on the tail blue also. What did you do to the outline on the Scitwomew one!?!?! I mean its a huge issue that really drops the quality of the art in my opinion. It screwed up the outline and the shading. If you were looking for an aura look, you didn't do it right. The next problem is that it does too many things. It's shooting energy balls, has a flaming head, a metal arm, dog arm, multiple legs. The tail is oddly set up and you seem to have deleted parts, but didn't really fix it. Once again, a few too many colors. I'm going to go with Vespiking being your best. Also Buffer, theres more than just Ruby who are great splicers here *Cough* Me *Cough*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 I'm going to go with Vespiking being your best. Also Buffer' date=' theres more than just Ruby who are great splicers here *Cough* Me *Cough*.[/quote']yea but ruby is a good friend of mine and i know how he'll react if i send a splicer to him for help however i don't know how you'll react to be sent some one to you for help so that why i send people to ruby *Cough* it's obvious *Cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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