Crystals of Chaos

[EmilyAnnCoons]

Ok, so, I want to develop a set based off of my game, so here are 2 cards I made based on the set. Can someone tell me what needs to be changed on them to make them balanced? (I will be adding more cards to this over time) Also, please do not comment with "OCG is wrong" or "Pics need work" I know the OCG may be off, and the pics need work. If you are going to comment on how the OCG is, PLEASE tell me the best way to correct it. On top of that, I KNOW 110% that the images need work, and I plan on working on that, but what I need is someone to tell me how to balance out the cards, or make it sound more like a real Yu-Gi-Oh card. Also, I do not own these images. These cards are currently made using RMXP graphics (as I use RPG Maker XP to make my game). If anyone would be interested in remaking the graphics to look better, please contact me (Some of the cards I want to look different then they do now).

 

 

3 New Cards:

[Saturn of Elemia]

Okay. Here are my thoughts:

 

FIRST, you have OCG errors. Here are the facts:

 

1) Spellcaster is a TYPE, not an Attribute. Attribute is LIGHT, DARK, FIRE, etc....

2) Monsters only need ONE type, unless it is a Tuner/Spirit/Union/etc...

3) OCG is off. Here is what it should be:

 

-Archmage Scheris-

Once per turn, you can change the Type of 1 face-up monster on your field.

 

-Summoner Scheris-

Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand in face-up Attack Position or face-down Defense Position. This card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated.

 

SECOND, "Summoner Scheris" is fairly overpowering. Its stats are too high for its effect. Its effect has no cost to activate. It's true that it cannot attack, but it is still a "free" monster to swarm the field. "Archmage Scheris" is balanced.

 

THIRD, the images are nice, but they could use background. Also, you NEED a clear disclaimer somewhere. If you don't have one, the mods can get you for it.

 

Overall, not too bad. Just some minor things need to be fixed. I'll give it a 8/10. 8)

[caner5000]

hey work on ocg and better pictures

[EmilyAnnCoons]

Ok, as for the disclaimer, where should I put that? Just in my signature or what? -is confused- and also, what could I do to improve Summoner Scheris? Should I lower her ATK and DEF to something like 100 or something? What would be a good way to balance out the summoner? Also, three more cards. How can I balance them (other then image change)? Also, Archmage Scheris' OCG has been changed.

 

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Few capitalization errors. Pics could be better too.

[EmilyAnnCoons]

Thanks for the help so far...anyone have any idea how to balance out Summoner Scheris? I know SaTuRnPaLaDiN said she was overpowered. Also, are Zach, Valerie, or Jessica overpowered at all? If so, what can I do to change that? Please, I need more then "OCG and pictures" I know they both need work. If someone could tell me how to modify the OCG to sound more correct, that would be a great help. The main thing I need to know is what is overpowered and what isn't, and how can I fix the overpowered ones?

[staticrevenger]

8/10

change the pics

[EmilyAnnCoons]

-sighs- again...I know the pictures need work...what I need help on is how to balance out the cards... -goes to edit post 1-

[Spire]

You needs better pics.

[EmilyAnnCoons]

argh...PLEASE stop commenting that my pictures need work! I know they do, and I even said not to say that in the first post, because I KNOW they need work. What I need is someone to help me balance out my cards. If no one will help, then when I finish this series I will just put it in the "finished card sets" section, without fixing them, because no one was willing to tell me how to balance them out. So please, do not comment on pictures, please comment on how to balance out the card effects, or how to fix the OCG, and not just say "Needs better OCG"