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Mermander is interesting. One issue I have with it though is the body compared to the head. The edits on the head make it look really nice, but the body feels too much like charmander. Also it lacks a lot of the mewtwo feel, it just looks like its colored like one. This though isn't saying your technique was bad or anything, I'm just saying if the sprite is viewed as a fusion it isn't perfect. Shading isn't right, but thats only in one small areas (the right ear). I really like this pokemon, I'm just being nitpicky to be able to give you some decent review.

 

Kangaskhan I first have to say is way off for one reason. Kangaskhans are always female. Also giving them a weird humanoid feel doesn't seem right. I like the direction its heading in though. After a lot more edits, it could be an awesome alternate kangaskhan sprite. I suggest bulking up the arms, fixing the face, get rid of the shoes, add a pouch, and make less human.

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Mewmander Coment: Thats for the shading tip. But, by right ear, do you mean when facing Left, like in a battle, or as it is right now. And I was going to make it's feet like Mewtwos, but it was to hard. And the coment "If it's viewed as a fusion", some people might view it as that, but it's more like a disguise.

 

Kangaskhan Coment: The reason it feels to human is because it's a Cos Play of Kangaskhan. It's not finnished, but I feel that it was complet enough to post. The main thing that isn't finished is the "mother's" head, where the green-like color would be.

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Our left, its right. As a disguise, its really good in that case.

 

Well what threw me off was because you gave it Pokedex info and all, so I thought you were serious about it being a Kangaskhan.

 

Berr-E is a nice splice, nothing done "wrong", but it's kind of, how do I put this... boring? Lacks a lot of flare. Also the Rotom part is very noticeable. The eyes are also very ungrass like. A final point, Grass/Flying is overplayed type, and this thing really reminds me of Hoppip (I see the differences, but I see similarities too).

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Wel, it's kind of hard to make it look like a red berry without looking similar to Hoppip. Also, I wasn't thinging of Hoppip when making Berr-E, but of that 1 Cherry pokemon with 2 heads (Can't remember the name), which is where I got the color from.

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Don't worry, not claiming you were mimicking anything else, just point stuff out to you. I do suggest though if you make an evolution or do other stuff with this pokemon, you make it different than the other Grass/Flying. Give it a more diverse moveset, or make its stats/purpose in some way different.

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Mew's head would've been cuter.

 

 

What mew. I see no mew' date=' only Mewtwo -.-

 

 

Epicly created. Draco-san has been relaying quite a few messages to me, lately. He says their ruff around the edges, but to keep at it.

 

 

 

Umm, the edges are going to be "ruff", seen any official sprites lately? All sprites have "ruff" edges. If not, then it's not a sprite.

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