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ultimate black luster soldier


Riccardo Hoeksma

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2 tribute + inf atk The word overpowered come to mind and I am ok with ormal, but not more powerful that blue eyes you cant make limited editions and OCG or official card grammer

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4/10. It`s not absolutely terrible, though a lot of work is needed. Don`t worry though, I have advice. :)

 

#1: Card is slightly unoriginal since it is based off Black Luster Soldier. You may want to make your own, original monster.

 

#2: "worrior" s/b "Warrior"

 

#3: Capitalization errors

 

#4: ∞ attack is usually not a good idea as it makes the card outrageously overpowered. 3500 sounds a bit better.

 

#5: "Limited Edision" s/b "Limited Edition"

 

I hope you found this helpful. :)

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goog efort 8/10

 

FAIL, in both your post, and your rating.

 

Back to the card, you need to try harder. It's not hard to come up with your own card. Be more original. This, however, is a mockery of my favorite card. Therefore, I must weep for him.

 

0/10

 

~Kenpachi Zaraki

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