Jump to content

please move to finished contests!!!


Slayer1

Recommended Posts

ok i'm done judging the entries so far and i will edit this post with new entries and i'll try to give a bit of advice/critisicm to help you improve don't take anything to seriously ok? let's begin

1.nash12345654321 2/10

that's not how a synchro works it's overpowered (most cards with 4000+ ATK & DEF are level 12 eg.obelisk blue eyes ultimate dragon)and you could have given it an effect

 

2.death metal 9/10

i like it good pic not a bit overpowered (level 7) and good effect

 

3.akon 6/10 (remember don't take it too hard =S)

good pic but i don't get the effect why sacrifice in your hand and deck when the duel is over? also you mispelt sacrifice (sacrafice)

 

4. regnal 8.5/10

i like it, it reminds me of maha valio except it has that extra effect to return an equip from your grave to your hand

 

5. nicklordxeno N/A

 

6. chaos master ygo (could i just call you CMY? ^_^) 9/10

i like them both particularly ironman because it has a good effect and it's not a bit overpowered

(you have to destroy 3 monsters to summon an iron token and even then it has to be destroyed for ironman to gain 400 ATK and DEF)

 

7.obi-dumb-one 7/10

i like them most of them are beyond my knowing (i'm not such a big fan of starwars)

allow me to correct some of the errors

darth malak: where it says discard the one card you didn't need to put the there

the thought bomb:it says lifepionts (mispelt and no space)

darth bandon:the first word is then instead of when (i'm not too sure since i don't know to much about star wars and forgive me if i'm wrong but shouldn't it be brandon)

sith holocron:it doesn't say if the effects of flip cards are activated or not

darth sion:when it says put this card back on the field why not just put summon or special summon or advance summon?

darth revan:isnt it a bit too overpowered? for a 10 star it could have up too 7000 ATK with enough sith cards in your field & grave

hope that helps you improve ^_^

 

8. drick 8.5/10

could use better pics phantom warrior a bit overpowered on vaati dark wind sorcerer you missed out during your next standby phase (it says your next stanby phase)

and most of the cards below vaati have simple effects

 

9. god pikachu N/A (no cards up yet)

 

10. zain reddevil N/A (no card up yet + banned)

 

11. DeMeNTeD N/A (no cards up yet)

 

BTW slayer you missed crystal from the list so here goes

 

12. crystal beast 123 7.5/10

good cards but shouldnt ray mk iii have an effect sort of like berserk gorrilla's (it's unnatural to have a 4 star with 2000 ATK and no effect stopping it no matter what his DEF is)

and for sattelite pod H i don't think something like that could work i don't think there's any card that has it's effect based on when it's faced down

 

remember i tried to judge fairly so don't hate me for this ^_^

Link to comment
Share on other sites

here are the results of my judging:

nash12345654321: 1.5/10 the picture is rather fuzzy, no effect, no point in being a synchro.

 

crystal beast 123 :7/10 the monsters have no effects, and you probably need backgrounds for 01 and Mk 3. im not sure if equip trap works, and same about sattelite pod h.

 

Darth Metal: 9/10 I like it, and it is defiently not overpowered. really kills your hand though... still nice

 

regnal 8.999999/10 : nice and balenced, it combines gilford the legend and Maha Vailo but powered down :)

 

nicklordxeno: 8.5/10 some of the cards have no real point. hwoarang and speed counters??? still some cards are pretty good (mokugin, king, armor king.)

 

Chaos Master ygo 9/10 both of the cards are balenced and fair, not having to high ATK... iron man has a really unique effect

 

Drick: 9/10 i really like your cards! all the minor errors were mentioned by nicklordxeno, so yeah. Good job!

 

obi-dumb-one: 7/10 the pictures of Dark jedi, darth renvan and sith holocron are not the best, as i cant really see them! ;) other then that, they are pretty good. Darth renvan is kind of overpowered with a minimum of 5200 ATK. the only thing keeping it semi-realistic is the cost of summoning it(5 total sacrifices for all the sith lords).

 

akon 5.9/10 its an exodia card, but with 4 cards needed to end the duel.

who wins if the duel is over?

 

nice cards everybody, i am really impressed with the quality cards that were posted ! great job!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • 2 years later...

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
×
×
  • Create New...