CinnamonStar Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 I can't believe I never posted this here. It's a drawing of Burstinatrix I made a while ago and I took the artistic freedom to modify a few parts a bit, like her right arm, because I thought it wouldn't look so bad like this. Click on this: I'm sorry, this is the first time I'm using imageshack... I used to rely on myimg so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 That's good =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 As the guy I am, I noticed that the breasts seem somewhat tilted. But maybe that's just the awkward position. Oh, and the position's awkward. The body is leaning forward less than the head does, methinks it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C Master Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Pretty good, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 I like it, although the legs are a little on the large side. o_0 Also, one leg has the armor-edge triangular pointy armory thing, but the other doesn't. But yeah, other than the legs, I like it. ^_^ Great shading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Good for your first! I like the fireball it's good!And I kinda agree with Charlie-san. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 It's not my first one ROFL. It's the first one I decided to post here, but I guess I should change the title.I don't remember where I took this position from and it's too late to change it anyway, but I can do something with the legs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Really well done! I like it. ^_^ 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 [align=center]Her Postion is awkward, the legs are a little too much like the Pokemon Blaziken, they should have more curve to show off her hips and butt. Also her boobies are positioned wrong. The Left one should higher than the Right One according the position she is in. Other than that, good job. :P[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsplayer627 Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 ITs alright i cant do that kind of drawing though.I chhose the sencond poll choice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Its nice, just fix the errors that were alreasy posted :s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 its pretty good for paper and pencil. i give an 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Great drawing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 pretty good for a pencil and paper and yeah a few mistakes but still good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 you shouldn't have filled it with a pencil >.< would have attempted to colour it =\ not bad, b00bs are tilted and could have been bigger =| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted August 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 Thank you everyone, I said that I will work on the bewbs and butt, which are really my weakest points at everything I do. Anything constructive to add which has not been mentioned so far, other than the bewbs and butt issues?^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zigzix Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 i agreee with the issues up above but is it only me that thinks the left arm is a bit too long? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted August 5, 2008 Report Share Posted August 5, 2008 I'm amazed.I didn't realize you was into drawing before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
super dimentio Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Don't bump old threads and post 3 word replies, it's called spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 16, 2008 Report Share Posted August 16, 2008 Not bad. I don't like the legs much. The arms are too thin. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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