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Umm.. Vanillas usually mean lack of creativity.

Subtypes = Bad in most cases and since these dont have consistency it is bad.

Overpowered for the most part =/

 

Thats my 2cents and advice, start over...

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Umm.. Vanillas usually mean lack of creativity.

Subtypes = Bad in most cases and since these dont have consistency it is bad.

Overpowered for the most part =/

 

Thats my 2cents and advice' date=' start over...

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What is/are Vanillas??

 

Thanks, but i don't really understand

 

Normal Monster Cards are normally referred to as "vanillas".

 

As for your cards, you'd probably get some better critique if you posted them in the correct section.

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lol @ N00bs in this thread

 

1) Normal monsters shouldn't have effects, and effect monsters shouldn't have flavour text. Choose one.

2) It can become overpowered. I'd make it's level higher, maybe say it can't be Special Summoned.

3) Overpowered. It's ATK is basically 4000. For 1 tribute, this can crush pretty much everything.

4) Spells need effects. You also need to change it to a field spell.

5) Overpowered. Not a ritual spell. Knuckles has enough ATK already, and summoning a strong card should need some sort of sacrifice or tribute.

6) You should make it clear it only works for the current turn.

7) This card is balanced, not much to say about it.

8) Balanced. I'd expect this to have some relevance effect-wise to Sonic though...

9) I need to see Shadow, but it's probably balanced.

Pictures always need backgrounds. Types used should already exist in the game. Needs OCG (official card grammar; the way official cards are written.) help. Hopefully someone else will help you with this, as I mostly comment on the effect itself.

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