J-Max Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 [align=center]Meh. I decided to go out with a Bang. I adore Crystal Beasts but I thought they needed a leader. Well here we are. [spoiler=Note to Doom Wraith]I beg you to let this card in for me. I am here merely asking for OCG advice. My time for Cardmaking is almost up. My ideas are just about gone..... Crystal Angel Ruby ValkyrieWIND********Warrior-Type1900/1400This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Advanced Summoned by Releasing 2 "Crystal Beast" monsters you control while "Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins" is on the field. This card is also treated as Winged-Beast. While this card remains face-up on the field all "Crystal Beast" monsters you control cannot be destroyed in battle as long as you discard 1 card each time a "Crystal Beast" is declared as an Attack Target (damage calculation is applied normally.) While any of the following "Crystal Beasts" exist in your Spell & Trap zone you can activate the effect.- "Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle": Once per turn you can Discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Crystal Beast" monster from your graveyard.- "Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth": During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.- "Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger": Once per turn, by destroying 2 "Crystal Beast" monsters you control, this card can attack your opponent directly.- "Crystal Beast Emerald Tortoise": Once per turn you can switch 1 of your opponent's monsters into Defense Position. The monster's position cannot be changed except by a card effect.- "Crystal Beast Sapphire Pegasus": If you have at least 3 "Crystal Beast" monsters in your graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 to your Spell & Trap Zone.- "Crystal Beast Cobalt Eagle": You can return cards on the field to the respective owners deck equal to half the number of "Crystal Beast" monsters you control (Rounded Down).- "Crystal Beast Amethyst Cat": Once per turn you can halve the ATK of this card & increase a "Crystal Beast" monster you control by the same amount.[/align] Link to comment
Wyhe Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Despite the limited info on it,I can still see that it can & will be great once it debuts on YCM soon...I hope. Link to comment
J-Max Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Well to all of you. Doom Wraith's Contest is going to be my Final Contest and my final stand as a Card Maker. I have held it back for a while but all good things must come to a end. I struggle to find decent effects, I put way too much work into them & I get Headaches. So whatever happens here it's Sayonara J-Max for Cardmaking. I will still be on YCM of course, helping the Newbies with their cards and being me. Just don't expect any more cards from me. Link to comment
TR_Headshot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I love the idea, though I'm sad your "leaving" as a card maker. Link to comment
J-Max Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I'm after OCG Advice. I'm hoping Doom can find it in his heart to accept this card. Link to comment
Wyhe Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 This is your last...Oh my,I hope for the best in your final stand. Link to comment
.:|Fallen|:. Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 are u leaveing but i like the idea Link to comment
J-Max Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Yep this is my Final Card. Once it get's OCG'd and everything. I will be entering it into Doom's Contest. Then Win or Lose I will be retiring from Card Making. Link to comment
Neiko Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Isn't "Type" supposed to be after "Winged-Beast" ? Link to comment
J-Max Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I think it is. Thanks for pointing that out. Link to comment
Neiko Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 NP ^_^ You said you wanted fixes. That is a bummer...and i didn't even make it to the next round in Doom's contest!!! errg...maybe next time^^ Good luck with this card Link to comment
J-Max Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 lol Thanks :) Like I said this is my final card so I want to make it my Greatest. Link to comment
Parting Shot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Advanced Summoned by Releasing 2 "Crystal Beast" monsters you control while "Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins" is face-up on the field. This card is also treated as Winged Beast-Type. When a "Crystal Beast" monster you control is attacked, you can discard 1 card from your hand to protect the attack target from being destroyed by battle this turn. While any of the following "Crystal Beast" cards are in your Spell & Trap Zone you can activate the appropriate effect:- "Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle": Once per turn you can Discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Crystal Beast" monster from your Graveyard.- "Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth": During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.- "Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger": Once per turn, by destroying 2 "Crystal Beast" monsters you control, this card can attack your opponent directly.- "Crystal Beast Emerald Tortoise": Once per turn you can switch 1 of your opponent's monsters into Defense Position. The monster's position cannot be changed except by a card effect.- "Crystal Beast Sapphire Pegasus": If you have at least 3 "Crystal Beast" monsters in your Graveyard, you can place 1 "Crystal Beast" monster from your Graveyard face-up in your Spell & Trap Zone. It is treated as a Continuous Spell Card.- "Crystal Beast Cobalt Eagle": You can return cards on the field to the respective owner's Deck equal to half the number of "Crystal Beast" monsters you control (rounded down).- "Crystal Beast Amethyst Cat": Once per turn you can halve the ATK of this card and increase athe ATK "Crystal Beast" monster you control by the same amount. Lol, I think that's correct OCG :P. So much to go through XD Link to comment
Umbra Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 @Browa: "Protect" is not OCG in any way. I'd use this:"When a "Crystal Beast" monster you control is attacked, you can discard 1 card to negate the destruction." With your OCG, it would also include that the monster would be invincible for the rest of the turn. Link to comment
Parting Shot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 @Browa: "Protect" is not OCG in any way. I'd use this:"When a "Crystal Beast" monster you control is attacked' date=' you can discard 1 card to negate the destruction." With your OCG, it would also include that the monster would be invincible for the rest of the turn.[/quote']Well, J said that protection for the turn was fine (albeit maybe slightly overpowered), and I don't think "negate the destruction" is entirely correct either. It was really hard trying to word this thing, so in the end I used protect cuz it sounded the least weird :P Link to comment
3cchiFr3ak Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 How about, "When a "Crystal Beast" monster you control is attacked, you can discard 1 card to negate the attack." Link to comment
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