Searune Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I am new so this is my first card created on this site so I was wondering if I balanced it right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SecretAgentMan007 Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 OK, first of all, a LV 10 should have 3800- 4100 ATK, DEF. And your OCG is waaaaay off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Even though this is your only post I'm gonna be harsh, you need Better OCG (Official Card Grammar) and wok on the name. On top of this, if its not your artwork you need o say that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 ocg needs alot of worki dont think i would have it that high of a leveld monstertry 8 stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Card Creator Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 007 Honestly don't tell people what to do on thier own cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Searune Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Any tips on OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Try reading Dj's thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I think you may find it useful to go to the OCG Tread, it will help in writing your text. You can also use the cards you've collected for a reference, as far as how to phrase things and which words are capitalized. Keep creating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Searune Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Then how about this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 You can't make liited edition cause they have gold stickers and It needs a backgroung Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Searune Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 well the reason I went with no back round is to show that the creature with out the negated trap card it has no effect in an artistic way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Try to use img tags. The pic has no background and the OCG could use work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pimpalo Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I thought we agreed to having no attachments? Get IMG tags. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I like the new card but I agree with all of the above. And for a new card, edit it into your first card, don't make a new post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pimpalo Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 007 Honestly don't tell people what to do on thier own cards. You are so dumb... This isn't flaming... Simply truth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SecretAgentMan007 Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Then how about this?This one is better balanced, but your OCG still needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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