narutocooper Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/6487/121883uu6.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow-uchiha Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 -_-..i guess.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joseph_downe Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 You spelled opponents wrong. Your OCG's a little off in some places. "There" in Entai's effect should be "their". Attributes are supposed to be typed in uppercase (i.e. FIRE monsters) and not in quotes (i.e. "Fire" monsters"). Entai Effect Reword: When this card is Normal Summoned successfully to the field, increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters by 400 and your opponent randomly selects and discards one card from their hand. Mewtwo Reword: Once per turn by paying 700 Life Points, you may take control of one of your opponent's monsters. If either you or your opponent controls a "Mew", increase this card's ATK by 300. Keep at it and polish up your OCG, pics could have been more wisely chosen. Try not getting ones with blank backgrounds or people's names, signatures, or links in them. Other than that the cards seem fine and fairly balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Entai should be Entei. Some of the pics have wording and blank backgrounds.Effects are kinda plain too.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GlassMan Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Somewhat dull. OCG needs work, and spelling errors need a fixing. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 yep, some pics are overused (eg. Entei)but, it's ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LetahlBullet3 Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 need better pics and fix your OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutocooper Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 *bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutocooper Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 [/img]http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7787/121883ge2.jpg[/img][/img]://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4706/121883ze5.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutocooper Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 wtf wtf wtf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutocooper Posted July 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 30, 2008 Report Share Posted July 30, 2008 Don't quadruple post. Just edit your posts. As for the cards themselves - 6.6/10 :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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