Strikenmist Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Plz Rate & Comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 They're okay. Pics are overused. Effects are kinda simple, but I like Raikou's mostly. 7/10 ~Kenpachi Zaraki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benoit4ever Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Entei's picture is kind of blurry, and Raikou's is pretty cool. I think, for 3 sacrifices, that you should either dumb down ATK and DEF, and give a good effect, or sort of keep it like it is, simple effect, and good ATK and DEF. There are a few OCG errors, and if it's okay, I'd like to help you fix them. The small errors are in the second sentence of effect in each card. The errors are in bold. "This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by tributing 3 cards." In Yu-Gi-Oh, they always write the number in numerical form. And the other error, was just grammar. Hope I helped! -Frankie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Benoit4ever Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 No problem, all in a days work! xP But, I do recommend searching for different pictures. And, if it interests you, work on a series of Pokemon! -Frankie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sleevecard Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Three needs to be 3, the word is spell "except." Other than that they're not bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benoit4ever Posted July 22, 2008 Report Share Posted July 22, 2008 Three needs to be 3' date=' the word is spell "except." Other than that they're not bad. 7/10[/quote']I am pretty sure I summed that up above. Lol. It's cool, don't mean to come off as a douche. -Frankie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Pretty good cards, but Entei should focus on Burn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 1. pic overused2. don't make yp types (eg. Pokemon)other than that cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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