ericozco22+) Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 please rate my card by words not numbers ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineteenHundred Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Plenty of errors, mostly involving OCG. - Numbers should be in number form, not word form. (Four-level s/b 4-level)- "is summoned" is not correct OCG. It needs to say something like "is Normal Summoned" or "is Special Summoned".- "no magic, trap, or monster effects will work on this monster" s/b "This card is unaffected by Spells, Traps, and Monster Effects".- "you can tribute this monster to summon a Blue-Eyes White Dragon from your deck" s/b "You can offer this monster to Special Summon 1 Blue-Eyes White Dragon from your deck".- "...your blue eyes white dragon can`t be destroyed" s/b "...Blue-Eyes White Dragon cannot be destroyed"- ATK, not attack. (When referring to points, not in battle)- "Turtle" isn`t a real type.- Limited Edition monsters need gold stickers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 dont use attachments... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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