OCG Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Weeehoow :)Ocean ripples..It's all right, but center the render some bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted July 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 To much covering the main focal, boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obi-wan Cannoli Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 A little more to the left and the render would be perfect for the rule of thirds. IDK how to explain. I would suggest erasing or lowering the ocapactiy of some of the render effects. They seem to be distorting the render too much. Also remove the cover on the bottom of the render. Maybe an orange grad map on samus. You should add text. Even though text usually fails I think it would look good here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Second one sucks too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 2nd one is better lots better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 i love both of them 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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