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OOOOOO! I like this club! I'll join with this card...

 

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[spoiler=Effect]When this card is Summoned' date=' it is placed in between both player's monster card zones in the column in which it was Summoned (both card zones must be unoccupied to Summon "Neutral" monsters, and they cannot be used.) While this card is Face-up on the field, both you and your opponent can attack with this card, change its battle position, and activate its effect. When this card battles a defence position monster, destroy it with this card's effect without flipping it Face-up or applying damage calculation. All monsters on the field with an ATK of 2000 or less is switched to defence position.

 

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I'd like to enter the club, please...>_>

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Sorry Tuffguy, didn't see your post.

 

OCG: 8 errors seen. 12/20

 

Name: Rather basic, but it works. 4/5

 

Picture: Awesome! ^_^ 15/15

 

Balance: Underpowered, 2 tributes and both players can use it? Bad. 11/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Fairly long, pretty basic. 15/20

 

Originality: I've seen these Neutral monsters before, I believe Zephkaaa posted one, not sure who i nvented them. 7/10

 

Little Details: Perfect. 10/10

 

Total: 74/100 You're in with 74 DPs. ^_^

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i.....i won? excuse me, but grant me this moment. *pulls out an emmy* i's like to thank the academy for this great achievement, also, i'd like to thank all who inspired me to do this*spotlights* thank you everyone *cries like an actress* okay, i'm done. hmmm, i didn't know bout the EN tag, this was made last year. Oh, with crimson claw, well, i had my heart set on the name and google images isn't to helpful in finding a red gauntlet, so, the crimson refers to its attack, crimson cloud

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alright, i'll call a comp myself, the jist is simple.

 

1: You must make 4 monster cards.

2: 1 each of these tyes: Pyro, Aqua, Thunder and a fusion of them.

3: There will be only 4 people to join, 3 plus myself

4: There is no time limit, the deadline is when all 4 people have posted

5: you may reserve a spot

 

the prize is darkfire points (for the cards) and smug self-satisfaction, i'll be the last to post, so you have time, but don't waste it

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alright' date=' i'll call a comp myself, the jist is simple.

 

1: You must make 4 monster cards.

2: 1 each of these tyes: Pyro, Aqua, Thunder and a fusion of them.

3: There will be only 4 people to join, 3 plus myself

4: There is no time limit, the deadline is when all 4 people have posted

5: you may reserve a spot

 

the prize is darkfire points (for the cards) and smug self-satisfaction, i'll be the last to post, so you have time, but don't waste it

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Entry Reserved! ^_^

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Can I join here is my card

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. this card cannot be Special Summoned exept for Tributing 2 Mineral-Type monsters from your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle you may pay 500 Life Points to put this card into your deck. Your deck is then shuffled.

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Diamon Dragon - Azah

 

OCG: 12/20

 

Errors:

 

-You need a capital t on the first word in your second sentence

-Except is misspelled

-Mineral is an Archetype, not a type, so it is Mineral Monster, not Mineral-Type monster

-If=When

-may=can

-put this card in your=return this card to your

-deck=Deck

-deck=Deck again

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. this card cannot be Special Summoned exept for Tributing 2 Mineral-Type monsters from your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle you may pay 500 Life Points to put this card into your deck. Your deck is then shuffled.

 

Name: Diamond is misspelled. 3/5

 

Picture: Looks pretty paper-mache to me. The legs are bad. 11/15

 

Balance: Underpowered. Tributing 2 monsters of a specific Archetype for a 2100 ATK monster is a bad move. The destroyed-by-battle effect iisn't too helpful for you either since this would often be a dead draw and you're paying 500 LP for little to no reason. 12/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: I've seen much longer. I'm not seeing as much effort as I'd like to here. 13/20

 

Originality: Reminds me of glad beasts with the Deck return. Otherwise it's ok. 8/10

 

Little Details: First part of Set ID should be four letters. They always are these days. That's why duelist packs started with DP1 and DP2 and now have DP06 and DP07. 9/10

 

Total: 68/100

 

That's not quite good enough.

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