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Poke N Wombat, you're in with 80 Darkfire Points. ^_^

 

[spoiler=jak199:]

 

OCG: 12 errors spotted. Not good for a short e ffect. >.< 8/20

 

Name: Needs some kinda caption, who is Riku? What do they do? 3/5

 

Picture: Kinda looks like some normal person, nothing specal or warlike about them. >_> 12/15

 

Balance: Seems a little over-the top with the way certain warrior archetypes can swarm. 13/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: It's short and I don't see much effort here. 12/20

 

Originality: The level thing reminds me of Ritual monsters. 8/10

 

Little Details: Don't use Circulation and Set ID is unrealistic. 5/10

 

Total: 61/100 Not good enough, sorry.

 

 

[spoiler=BH15:]

 

OCG: 6 errors seen. 14/20

 

Name: Alright, a little plain. 4/5

 

Picture: White backgrounds are bad. 10/15

 

Balance: It works, pushing it a little though for a Level 4 1900 ATK Zombie. 16/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: It's short, too short. Use detail and effort >.< 11/20

 

Originality: Reminds me a bit of Cyber Phoenix with the target negater thingy. 8/10

 

Little Details: Set ID should be _ _ _ _-EN_ _ _ Fill the first four blanks with letters and the last 3 with numbers. 7/10

 

Total: 70/100 You're in, but barely. Try to up your effort a bit. You get 70 Darkfire Points. ^_^

 

 

[spoiler=SecretAgentMan007:]

 

OCG: 10 errors spotted, long effect bonus given. ^_^ 15/20

 

Name: It works. ^_^ 5/5

 

Picture: Blur and Black Background are bad. 8/15

 

Balance: Seems balanced enough, the ATK and DEF switcher makes up for the Summoning condition. 18/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Long enough. Could be longer. ;) 16/20

 

Originality: Seems like Metal Fish a little. 7/10

 

Little Details: You need a Set ID. >.< 6/10

 

Total: 75/100 You're in with 75 DPs. ^_^

 

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I would like to make a wager with BH15 or secret agent man

 

Rules:

1.doom wraith Judges

2.old and new ok

3.all monsters

4. 3 cards max

5.card have to go together some way

6.Realistic contest

7.place post here

8.end date July 27

 

50 normal points, do u accept???

 

p.s. if their is any flaw or any thing is wrong pls pm me

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I would like to make a wager with BH15 or secret agent man

 

Rules:

1.doom wraith Judges

2.old and new ok

3.all monsters

4. 3 cards max

5.card have to go together some way

6.Realistic contest

7.place post here

8.end date July 27

 

50 normal points' date=' do u accept???

 

p.s. if their is any flaw or any thing is wrong pls pm me

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I'll go against you.

 

Doom Wraith, please add me to the member list.

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OOOOOO! I like this club! I'll join with this card...

 

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[spoiler=Effect]When this card is Summoned, it is placed in between both player's monster card zones in the column in which it was Summoned (both card zones must be unoccupied to Summon "Neutral" monsters, and they cannot be used.) While this card is Face-up on the field, both you and your opponent can attack with this card, change its battle position, and activate its effect. When this card battles a defence position monster, destroy it with this card's effect without flipping it Face-up or applying damage calculation. All monsters on the field with an ATK of 2000 or less is switched to defence position.

 

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secret agent and bguy since u accepted 1 day left u must post by 1:00pm western mountain time or I win.

 

heres my cards:

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Effect=This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 Fiend-Type monsters in your hand and or Graveyard. Once per turn, you may remove from play 1 Fiend-Type monster you in your hand or Graveyard to draw 1 card. You may discard the card you had drawn, to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Fiend-Type monster from your Deck, to the field. At the end of your turn that you used this effect to Special Summon, destroy 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster on the field.

 

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Effect=Every Standby Phase this card card loses DEF 200.Every Main Phase this card is on the your side of field you can send 1 Fiend-Type monster from hand to the Graveyard. By doing so this card loses DEF 200 and you can Special Summon 1 Fiend-type monster from your hand,the Summoned monster is destroyed at the Standby Phase of your opponent's next turn.If this card is in your Graveyard you may send this card to your hand by Sending 3 Fiend-Type monsters from your hand to the Graveyard.

 

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Effect=When this card is Summoned, it is placed in between both player's monster card zones in the column in which it was Summoned (both card zones must be unoccupied to Summon "Neutral" monsters, and they cannot be used.)While this card is Face-up on the field, both you and your opponent can attack with this card, change its battle position, and activate its effect.Every Standby Phase you can send 1 monster card from your hand to the graveyard.By doing so your opponent's deck is shuffled and then you may look a the top or bottom 5 cards in you opponent's deck and put them in any order you wish.

 

my cards all go together due to their effect/ if u have any questions or comments feel free to ask or tell

 

any of my contest rules or mod rules broken I shall tell u or u get -5 points in the over all grading process

READ MY RULES BEFORE U AGREE TO ANYTHING!!!!!!

and since there are 3 of us the losers will give the winner 25 points each OVERALL 50 points

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I would like to make a wager with BH15 or secret agent man

 

Rules:

1.doom wraith Judges

2.old and new ok

3.all monsters

4. 3 cards max

5.card have to go together some way

6.Realistic contest

7.place post here

8.end date July 27

 

50 normal points' date=' do u accept???

 

p.s. if their is any flaw or any thing is wrong pls pm me

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here is my entry.

What do they have in common? They all are Secret Agents and will all be in a Set I an working on.

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Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. It can only be Special Summoned when "Agent World" is on the field. For every "Chase Credit Card" in the Graveyard, this card gains 200 ATK and 100 DEF. When this card is attacked by another Bond monster, switch the ATK of the two cards until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card is attacked by a Ninja monster, destroy it without your opponent taking Battle Damage. When " Kid Agent #1" and "Kid Agent #2" have been on the field for 4 turns, Sacrifice them and this card to Special Summon "James Bond' from your Hand.

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You guys are going down.

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BH15:

 

 

OCG: 6 errors seen. 14/20

 

Name: Alright, a little plain. 4/5

 

Picture: White backgrounds are bad. 10/15

 

Balance: It works, pushing it a little though for a Level 4 1900 ATK Zombie. 16/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: It's short, too short. Use detail and effort >.< 11/20

 

Originality: Reminds me a bit of Cyber Phoenix with the target negater thingy. 8/10

 

Little Details: Set ID should be _ _ _ _-EN_ _ _ Fill the first four blanks with letters and the last 3 with numbers. 7/10

 

70/100

 

Crimson Claw:

 

OCG: 11 errors seen. 12/20

 

Name: Cool. ^_^ 5/5

 

Picture: It's a little too realistic, and it's now crimson, it's silver. 11/15

 

Balance: The chances you'll fight a 4400+ ATK monster are rather low, but taking the odds into account and the 500 ATK boost I'd say it's pretty well balanced. 17/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Long, but I can still see the text, so it could be much longer. 16/20

 

Originality: It's original, other than the concept of Union monsters. 8/10

 

Little Details: Set ID is unrealistic, and it should be just [Zombie / Union], not [Zombie / Union / Effect]. Read TotalObelisk's tutorial on how to superimpose cards. 5/10

 

TOTAL: 74/100

 

Apocalypse the Lich King

 

OCG: 14 errors spotted. >.< 6/20

 

Name: Awesome! ^_^ 5/5

 

Picture: Really fantastic! 15/15

 

Balance: OPed-ness is pushing it. 14/20

 

Effect Quality and Length: Pretty short and basic, long enough. 14/20

 

Originality: Reminds me of Phantom of Chaos wth the effect gainer thingy. 7/10

 

Little Details: Set ID is unrealistic. 7/10

 

TOTAL: 68/100

 

Average: 68+74+70=212/3=71.

 

BH15 scored a 71, now I'll judge the other two contestants.

 

Zephkaaa:

 

Lord of Darkness:

 

OCG: 9 errors. 13/20

 

Name: Kinda plain and simple, could use a name before "Lord of Darkness" 4/5

 

Picture: Awesome! ^_^ 15/15

 

Balance: A lil OPed. Graveyard removal isn't hard, an d the drawing and Special Summoning effects can really affect a duel. Not to mention it's large ATK. 12/20

 

Effect Quality and Length: Long enough, could be longer. 17/20

 

Originality: Removing Fiends from play to Special Smmon was seen in Dark Necrofear. 8/10

 

Little Details: Replace ZK in the Set ID with EN. Cards can't be 2 Types. Pick 1. 5/10

 

TOTAL: 74/100

 

The Dark Counch Shell of Summoning

 

OCG: 13 errors spotted. >_> 8/20

 

Picture: A little blurred. 12/15

 

Name: Counch? 4/5

 

Balance: Fair, bordering on UP'ed. 15/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Pretty long, but could be much longer.

looks a littke rushed. 13/20

 

Originality: It's original.. 10/10

 

Little Details: ZK in Set ID=EN. 8/10

 

TOTAL: 70/100

 

Spy of Darkness

 

OCG: 12 errors spotted. 8/20

 

Name: No capital "o" in of. Rather plain. 3/5

 

Picture: Background is solid, which is bad, the person shouldn't be a solid color either. Very little detail in pic. 10/15

 

Balance: It's really UPd. Both players can use it but it costs you a tribute summon. 11/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Pretty long, but looks rather hastily done. 13/20

 

Originality: Deck rearranger reminds me of Goddess Skld's Oracle and Pigeonholing books of Spell. 6/10

 

Little Details: Put a space before and after your slash seperating Fiend and Neutral. Change ZK to EN in Set ID. 5/10

 

TOTAL: 56/100

 

Average: 56+74+70=200/3=66.

 

Zephkaaa scores 66/100. The last one cost ya.

 

SecretAgentMan007:

 

James Bond Jr.

 

OCG: 7 errors spotted. 13/20

 

Name: Jr. doesn't seem right on a card, maybe Young Bond or something would be better. 4/5

 

Picture: White Border and blur are bad. 11/15

 

Balance: Seems fair, but I'd need to see the Chase Credit Cards to be sure. I don't think you need a Summoning condition on a Level 3 monster. 14/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Pretty short and simple. It's alright. 13/20

 

Originality: Reminds me of Chrysalises with the Field Spell Reliiance and the Special Summoning stuff. 6/10

 

Little Details: Put EN in Set ID. Detective and Bond aren't real types, put a Space between Detective and the slash. Unrealistic Serial Number. 4/10

 

TOTAL: 65/100

 

SecretAgentMan007

 

OCG: 11 errors seen. 14.5/10

 

Name: Put a space between each word. 4/5

 

Picture: A little blur around the contours, but pretty good. 14/15

 

Balance: Seems fair, maybe a little UP'ed, the archetype effects are bad for you and the Summoning condition's a little deep. 14/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Very long, could still be much longer though. ;) 18/20

 

Originality: Starting to remind me of LV monsters a bit. 7/10

 

Little Details: Put EN in Set ID. Detective and Bond aren't real types, put a Space between Detective and the slash. Unrealistic Serial Number. 4/10

 

TOTAL: 75.5/100

 

James Bond:

 

OCG: 5 errors. 15/20

 

Name: Could use a caption to describe what he does. 4/5

 

Picture: Blur, bad background, and a logo, not good. 9/15

 

Balance: Underpowered. 11/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Rather short. 13/20

 

Originality: Reminds me of The Inexperienced Spy. 7/10

 

Little Details: Put EN in Set ID. Detective and Bond aren't real types, put a Space between Detective and the slash. 5/10

 

TOTAL: 64/100

 

Average: 64+75.5+65=204.5/3=67.5

 

BH15 is the winner.

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Right now I suppose.

 

BH15 gains 71 Darkfire Points, boosting his total Darkfire Points to 141. This means BH15 is now in Rank 2: Phoenix Caller. So everytime he battles, he gets +3 to his total score.

 

God Duelist: You're in with 80 DPs. ^_^

 

Magno: There are OCG issues everywhere, sorry but that's not gonna be good enough.

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