overheat Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 The year is 2567. The duels are normal ( After the world understood that dueling on bikes are stupid and has no point ). Kaiba Corp is still working and managed by an another Kaiba from the family. they have made the card game more realistic. one more thing was added to the game that was called "Duel As An Hero" that was a card that every single player has from the day the are born. but every single one has one little change in it. The story takes place in a world were thier are no wars only dueling. but because of "Duel As An Hero" people die in the duel. the soilders were given new "Duel As An Hero" cards so they can kill. the story is about a soilder named "Ari". Ari is a brillient soilder but got injerd in a duel and could not fight any more. so he had to quit the army. Ari did not had a deck becuase the deck he used was the army's. soo on the way home he bought with all his mony cards and made his own deck. ( the type of deck is unknown for now). he came home and his parents were not home. so he went out to try his new deck. we saw this old school kid he used to go with. and asked him if he can duel him. the kid was named " Teri" Ari's mom said the Ari moved to another city so is was wierd for teri to see him . so the duel started. Teri : Deck: water Ari: Deck : ???? as the duel started. Teri : I play the one any only Mother Grizzly in attack mode and place 2 card face down. Ari: i play one monster face down ( Twin Headed Behemoth) and end my turn. Teri: i attack with my Gizzly and destory your monster and end my turn. Ari: now that my monster can be special summoned i can offer him to summon " Laster Dragon #2" and i attack. and end your turn. ( Ari: 4000, Teri: 3100) Teri: cuz you have destoryied my monster i can special summon i new one. say hello to "Star Boy". and know i play Snach Steel and offer your monster to play Mobius the Frost Monarch and with Star Boy one thee field my monster gains 500 ATK points. and know i attack and end my turn. (Ari:50, Teri: 3100) Ari: i play pot of greed and draw to cards. and then i play Red Eyes B. Chick and then offer him to play Red Eyes B. Dragon and know i offer my Red Eyes to summon Red Eyes Darkness Dragon and he gets a bost of 900 ATK points with makes his ATK 3300 points. now i play heavy storm. and know i play the one and only " Duel As An Hero". and the effect of mine is that if my oppnonet has a monster with 2500 ATK or more i can offer one of my cards and damage your life points equal the offerd monster. so say good buy to your life points. ( Ari:50, Teri:0) Duel END. as Teri has shock from his lost. Ari felt good with him self that he one the duel but little did he now that some one was watching the duel. te next morning Ari found on his left hand a wierd sign. the sign was like a Orb a black orb. end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 The year is 2567. The duels are normal ( After the world understood that dueling on bikes are stupid and has no point ). *Cheers* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 lol ya that was the first think i toght of Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted July 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Theres some spellin but theres a good story here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Yeah, a couple of spelling errors. "Duel As An Hero" should probably be "Duel As A Hero" And Luster dragon, not Laster "and the effect of mine is that if my oppnonet has a monster with 2500 ATK or more i can offer one of my cards and damage your life points equal the offerd monster."opponentoffered "as Teri has shock from his lost. Ari felt good with him self that he one the duel but little did he now that some one was watching the duel." Umm... No spelling, but the sentence seems off. those things aside, it seems interesting enough. so this duel as a hero card is like a connection to their soul, the card is effected by the user. I've put in something somewhat similar in my fanfic actually, although i haven't given that much information on it yet :). *coughs* Anyway, it seems interesting, although maybe you should put the stats of the card up (e.g. Mother Grizzly (4/1400/1000)) although that's just an idea. You haven't revealed too much yet, so what is going on remains a mystery... I like that.Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted July 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 ya thx and sorry for the fact that i dont learn writng skills at school in israel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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