The Life of Tobi (Plz rate!!!)

[TobitoXIII]

This my first fan-fic, so here I go:

Chapter 1:Who am I?

19 years ago, a war was waged on the border of the Hidden Stone Village. In that war, hundreds of shinobi fought and died for their countries. One team of shinobi lost a brave boy in that war. The team was made up of Minato Uzumaki, Kakashi Hatake, Rin, and the boy who was thought to have been lost, Obito Uchiha. As Obito died, he gave his best freind Kakashi his brand new sharingan eye. Obito's name was ingraved on a memorial stone in the Hidden Leaf Village. But under the pile of rocks he was buried under, he was still breathing...

A week after the war ended, a young man who had run away from home was searching for firewood. As he approched a tree close to a pile of rocks, he heard a groaning sound coming from under the rocks. He dropped his wood and started shoving the rocks aside. After five minutes of moving rocks, he found a young boy barely alive. Half of his body was crushed and he was missing an eye. The man immidetly grabbed the boy and ran to his small cabin in the woods.

After a week the boy woke, in alarm, half-blinded. He sat up quickly, ignoring the pain in the right side of his body. He looked around the room only to see a man stirring a pot of soup over a fire.

"So, you finally decided to wake up, hmmmmm?" the man said.

"Where am I?! Who am I?!" the boy said in alarm.

"Well, to answer your first question, you're in my cabin. I fed you for a week while you slept. And, to answer your second question... hmmmm. I actually can't answer that question," the man said. "But, looking at your headband, I'd say you're from Konaha."

"Yeah, well thanks. I should be going no-Ugggghhhhh!" The boy winced in pain.

"You shouldn't move too much, un. I found you under a huge pile of rocks. The right side of your body is pretty banged up, un. You should stay with me for a few more weeks."

"Well, then what's your name?" the boy asked.

"Just call me... 'Sempai.'"

[jam 3]

............. is this "sempai" charecter Zetsu?

any way good so far. 10/10

[Phantom Roxas]

No, I'm pretty sure it's Deidara.

[Καsτοr]

But Tobi is always around Zetsu, it makes sense.

[Phantom Roxas]

And Deidara usually ends his sentences with a grunt, and Deidara and Tobi were partners.

[TobitoXIII]

I'm glad you liked the first chapter, here's the second!

Chapter 2: The Man in the Tree

The boy was becoming better and better each day. He wished he could help Sempai with the chores but Sempai would always refuse.

One night, while Sempai was cooking dinner, the boy asked him, "Why are you out here, alone in the woods?"

"I ran away from home," Sempai replied. "My father and I were both artists. One night, my father and I had an argument over a sculpture we were making. I was so fed up with him, I packed up some clay, some food, and other supplies, and just left."

"So, can I see some of your art, Sempai?" the boy asked.

"Of course you can! Here, pass me some clay from that bag next to you." The boy shuffuled through the bag and gave some clay to Sempai. "Watch this," Sempai said. He showed the boy his hand. When the boy started to become confused, he noticed a pink dangling thing on Sempai's palm. Suddenly, a hole filled with teeth opened up on Sempai's palm. It was a mouth! Sempai showed him his other hand and there was a mouth on that one too! Sempai shoved some clay into the mouth on his right hand. The mouth started chewing. After a minute, the tongue rolled out, revealing a small clay bird! "Now, watch this!" Sempai said. He formed some hand signs and said, "ART IS A BANG!!!" All of a sudden, the bird exploded into a tiny burst of flames. The boy stared in amazement.

"How do you do that?" the boy asked in astonishment.

"It's a Kekei-Genkai passed down through my family," Sempai replied. "On my travels I stopped in an art museum. Some people found me and asked me about my powers. They said they wanted me to join some sort of Organization. I'm still thinking about whether I should join or not. One of the people had red eyes, another was blue, and the last one had a tail! But, whatever. Let's eat!"

 

After three weeks in Sempai's cabin, the boy felt much better and decided to leave.

"Are you sure you'll be fine on your own?" Sempai asked.

"Yes," the boy replied. "Thanks alot for your help!" The boy rushed for the woods, without a clue of where to go. But, he was certain of one thing he felt as if he was being watched. He ran toward a small village that Sempai told him about, where he would stay for a few days.

 

In the woods, a large Venus Fly-trap emerged from the bark of a tree. When it opened, it revealed a man inside of it. Half of the man was a very pale white, the other half was pitch-black. The white half said in a demonic voice, "Is that really him? He should be dead. Is it immortallity jutsu?"

The black half responded, "I'm not sure, but one thing is clear, he posses the sharingan. He must be Uchiha Madara."

[jam 3]

ok so sempai is deidara and venus fly trap man is zetsu. Phantom Roxas you were right about sempai being deidara

[TobitoXIII]

UR-DER!!!!! Here's a pic to prove it:

[Phantom Roxas]

See? I iz smrt!

[TobitoXIII]

Yes, you "iz."

[Καsτοr]

So it really was him... Ok, I guess..

[TobitoXIII]

Here is Chapter 3!

Chapter 3: Is that Who I am?

After a few days resting in the small village, the boy decided to head towards Konoha. As, he was walking through the forest, he noticed a Venus Fly-Trap growing out of a tree trunk.

"What's an exotic plant like that doing here near Iwagakure*?" All of a sudden the plant opened and revealed a man. Half of him was a very pale white, while the other half was pitch-black. The boy suddenly froze in fear.

"We are pleased to see you my lord," the white half said in a demonic voice. "We thought you had died almost 70 years ago."

"Wha-what do you mean?" the boy asked, still frozen in fear.

"I see that when you were reborn you lost your memory, my lord," the black half said.

"Who are you, and what do you mean by 'reborn'?" the boy asked.

"We are Zetsu," the black half said. "And you are the lord of our Organization. You are the lord of Akatsuki. You are lord Madara."

"What?! I don't even remember my own name! How do you know who I am?!"

"You posses the Sharingan. Apperently, you lost it's full power, when you used the immortality jutsu. But, all that matters is that you are alive. Lord Pein has been awaiting you."

"Are you SURE that's who I am?!" the boy asked.

"Yes, we are. Only three people left in this world posses the Sharingan. That is Uchiha Itachi, Hatake Kakashi, and you are the third my lord. The only explanation is that YOU are Uchiha Madara."

Kakashi, why does that name sound so farmiliar? the boy wondered. "Fine, I'll accept who I really am."

"Excellent. Now, our plan to summon the Kyubii can come into fruition. But, you'll need a temprary codename.......Tobi. Yes, that will do. Now, come along Tobi."

"Yes, 'cause Tobi......is a good boy."

 

This might be the final chapter, so I hope you liked the story!

*Iwagakure-Hidden Stone Village

[piggiz13]

SO FUNNY! (the 3rd chapter anyway) I'd say 9/10. Could be a little better. I DO like it. Very great. Just could be funnier.