Warriors Within the shadows

[LiNk]

I went throught the cards and changed what i found to be wrong and to what i thought to be better. again rate and comment how to make better.

Here they are.

 

rate eatch one personally if you can by #1,2,3,4 etc.

 

1. 2.

3.4. 5.6.

7.8.

9.10.11.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Not bad. 7/10

[Mr. Judgment Dragon]

Horrible OCG. Pictures are pretty good though. Somewhat unoriginal. Overall, needs work. 6/10.

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

that horserider pic is good I say that cause I used it when I was doing one of my cards :P 6/10

[Larxene]

Fix your OCG, but they aren't bad otherwise

 

Keep trying ^_^

 

~Clariex

[Neiko]

1. It's supposed to be "Increase the ATK and DEF of every face-up Warrior-Type Monster by 100." Overused pic. Ok effect i suppose. 7/10

2. Just a normal monster... 1/10

3.O/P'd. Bad pic, seems a little TOO realistic. 3/10

4.Once again slightly O/P'd. Ok pic. OCG is off. 6/10

5.Ok, ok pic but OCG is off again. 5/10

6.OCG is horrible on this card, pic choice is good for me^^ 4/10

7.Overpowered. 7/10

8.Just a Nomi. 1/10

9. Good pic. 8/10

10. Basic effect. like the pic however. 7/10

Skipping 11. al though it would be 7/10 so im subbing it for your lowest score.

 

Total: 55/100

55% F

But you tried hard and i rate tuff sometimes.

Overall score: 69% D+

Try and make fixes and i will rate again.

 

REMEBER THIS!!! every word in the title, its first letter is always capp'd remeber that.