Yogg-Saron Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Once in a lively land where once lay an emperor who had to power to destroy everything, Chthonian Emperor Mazza. But, this was not one of those bad emperors that would use their powers for evil doings, he helped other people get well, and would never turn evil. Though, on the tearful night of his death, one that would be remembered, he cast all of his powers into a small inscribed medallion of the legendary Chtonian Emperor Dragon, now known as the Sacred Chthonian Medallion. It would be locked away in a treacherous cavern which held the legendary beast, and after you had gotten through the fearless dragon, you were faced with fifteen different pathways, all leading into the unknown. And this is were our story begins, a fourteen-year old farm boy who lived with his parents, known as Nick Zerta. Nick was a hard working farm person, who's family and pride rested within that small 6 acre farm. Little did he know yet, that what his property lay on, would be the biggest tomb in the world, The Tomb of the Sacred Chthonian Medallion. Nick wakes up and goes downstairs of the creaky old farm house. Part of the railing was rotted but he could still smell the fresh crapes in the morning from the cooking of his mom, Emma Zerta. He could here his father, Allan Zerta's, old John Deer I-25C tractor just outside, and knew after breakfast he had to go plant wheat seeds, which would later be used to make those magnificent blueberry crapes. Nick: Hmm, mom, are those what I think they are? He could taste the crapes already, as he saw the smoke coming of the iron crape maker, which could also make some mean pancakes Emma: Sure are babe, come and sit and have some of this orange juice, I squeezed it this morning!Nick: Great mom, but after work today, may I please go to the game shop at Kokazi City? Kokazi City was a crowded bustling place, his father sold goods to the local market people there, that is how the Zerta family made money, and thrived on this to survive. Emma: Nick, you know we are running short on money, why would you want to spend it on those blasted Duel Monster cards? Even though it is fun to you, family is always first, and right now your family is poor.Nick: Who said I was going to get anything ma? I was just going to look and talk to Chris. Chris Cotor was the owner of Kokazi City Games & Cards. A very popular place for buying the relatively new game of Duel Monsters, a card based strategy game, which involves using card effects and depleting your opponent's Life Points to 0. This was Nick's favorite hangout, as he was a big Duel Monsters fan. Though he hardly ever had the money to buy anything new, he got a deck from Chirs for free, which Chris had used for a duel once, but decided to build another deck. Emma: Nick, you know I never like him, he is too....bland, and is always talking about those Duel Monsters. But I guess I can let you go, after all you deserve it for helping the family out. And here are some delicious crapes to go along with that! After breakfast, Nick went out and helped plant the seeds with Adam, and continued on through day as usual. When the clock struck 2:00 PM, Nick quickly rushed to Kokazi City. As he was running he saw some shady figures down an ally way, which looked like to be stuff from Chris's shop. When he finally arrived the place was ruined and Chris was standing outside the door crying. Nick: Chris, what happened here! Where are all of the cards?Chris: Nick.....I was robbed by a group of......card smugglers, they take good cards then use them against other people. Unfortunately targeted my game store. And they also....Nick: Also what!? I must know!Chris: ....They took my deck!Nick: !..................Well, I remember seeing some shady characters with some cards in that old corner ally way Chris! One even looked back at me.....Chris? Chris had took off, knowing that the sooner he got there the better. Worried, Nick quickly followed. They approached the ally way with caution, as they did not want to hurt anyone or worse, get themselves hurt. Nick: Chris, do you see anyone?Chris: Shhh....Wait.....They spotted us, they are running! Come on Nick!Nick: Whaa.....! As they chased the goons, Chris became tired and finally dropped down. Nick stopped and looked at Chris and decided it would be best if he kept on chasing the goons. After about 5 minutes, the card smugglers were backed into a wall, with know were to run, they conceded. Card Smuggler 1: Don't make this get messy little boy! Move out of our way or feel the wrath of my all powerful Duel Monsters deck, and I know you have one, as you have Chris's old deck. Ah poor Chris, he was such a nice person too, to bad I have to dispose of his little friend, so I challenge you to a duel!Nick: What!?Card Smuggler 1: You heard me! A duel! But no just any duel, a Shadow duel! If you win, which I doubt, you will gain control of this deck here and I will be sent to the shadow realm, however if you lose, you will hand over your deck and forfeit your soul to the shadow realm!Nick: A shadow duel? That is to dangerous, besides! Stuff like that is ancient and a myth! So I accept your challenge! Duel Begin:Nick: 4000Card Smuggler: 4000 Card Smuggler: I will go first! I draw, I activate Mirror Manipulation! Which allows me to send 1 card from my hand to the Graveyard, to add 2 of the same card from my deck to my hand, however they can not be used this turn! Next I will set a monster and end my turn!Hand: 5Graveyard: Mirror ManipulationField: Set monster. Nick: My turn, I draw! I summon a monster called Grappler of Landstar!ATK: 1000/DEF: 500.Card Smuggler: Haha! A Normal monster with just 1000 ATK?Nick: For now! Now Grappler attack his face down monster! A black smoke surrounds the field and a shadowy figure with a scythe, slices Grappler of Landstar's head clean off and sends it to the graveyard. Nick: Wha! What was that!Card Smugggler: A very rare card indeed called Night Assailant, which allows me to destroy 1 monster on your side of the field!Nick: Dang, should of thought that would have been in Chris's deck! End Episode!Will Nick seal the smugglers fate? Or will the smuggler seal him!?Next time on Duel Monster Tails: Chthonian Kingdom! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senron Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Wow great story you have to continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fh-Fh Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Very nice. By the Way, did you get the Duel Monster stories Idea from me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Very nice. By the Way' date=' did you get the Duel Monster stories Idea from me?[/quote']No in fact, I just thought of it :lol: Thanks for the comments! And I added a banner to the top, so if you enjoy this fan-fic put it in your sig for others to see, just quote a post with the banner in it to get the code for it. Nick: Gah! I activate the card Return of the Brave and Forgotten, which lets me Special Summon 1 Landstar from my grave, and I Special Summon, Grappler of Landstar in defense postion! Now I set 1 card and end my turn!Hand: 3Graveyard: Return of the Brave and ForgottenField: Grappler of Landstar, set s/t Card Smuggler: My go. I shall first play this monster in attack position, go Diskblade Rider!ATK: 1700/1500Now, attack that Grappler!Nick: Not so fast! I activate my trap, it is called Bravery Sacrifice! What this allows me to do when you attack, is allow me to redirect the attack to my Life Points instead!Nick: 2300Card Smuggler: 4000 Nick gets hurt badly by the attack and falls. Nick: So....this is what a shadow game fills like...Card Smuggler: You have not felt anything yet! I end my turn by setting a s/t! I end!Hand: 4Graveyard: Night Assailant, Mirror ManipulationField: Diskblade Rider (attack), set s/t Nick: My draw! I activate a card called Landstar Forces! This allows me to Special these 2 cards from my hand! Swordsman of Landstar(ATK: 600/DEF: 1200) and Knight of Landstar(ATK: 1000/DEF: 900) in defense position!Card Smuggler: Ha!, Those puny little things do not stand a chance against me!Nick: So you think! I activate a card called Reinforcements of the Landstars. I can only activate it when I have 3 Landstars on the Field! It allows me to Special Summon 1 Landstar Monster from my deck! I special summon, Brigadier of Landstar(ATK: 900/DEF: 1200)! Now, I can contact fuse, all 4 of these monsters to bring out my Ultimate Landstar Warlord(ATK: 4000/DEF: 0!!!Card Smuggler: WHAT!!Nick: Now, with his effect when he is summoned, I can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all cards on your side of the Field! Now, Ultimate Landstar Warlord, attack him directly!!!! The Card Smugglers Life Points depletes to 0 and he starts choking. Nick stood in shock as a dark portal appeared beneath the Card Smuggler and sucked him in. The other shady figures snickered a bit then threw Chris's deck on the ground. Chris then steadily walks up in shock. Chris: Wha...what just happened? Was that a shadow game?Nick:.......unfortunately it was Chris, the goon I faced was sent to the shadow realm.Chris: WHAT!? You were in a shadow game? Your entire life was on the line Nick! I must get you home!Nick: But I am fine, Chris, just a cut on my hip, thats all.Chris: Thank God it wasn't worse! You could have been seriously injured!Nick: I realize that Chris, but at least I defeated him right?Chris:......I suppose. Nick rushes home, it is night time by now. Suddenly the lights flicker on. Emma: Nick Zerta!Nick: *oh no*Emma: You are in big trouble mister! You know how late you were out!?Nick: Pretty late, but I am sorry mom, won't happen again! Promise!Emma: I hope it didn't have anything to do with that Chris character did it?Nick: Uh....no mom not at all. I just got lost that is all, yeah I got lost.Emma: Alright, now go to your room and get in bed, you have a long day tommorow pulling those tobacco stalks. Then next morning, Nick wakes and does not smell anything cooking...which is odd because Emma always cooked a hearty breakfast. Nick crept slowly down the creaky stairs, when he reached the kitchen, he found a note by the sink. Note: Hello Nick Zerta. You may be wondering were your parents are located at the moment, but I may have a clue, a big clue were they are at, because in fact I have taken them captive. If you ever want to see them again you will come behind the old farm shack at Noon in the Circle of Stone. The Circle of Stone was once a ancient game ring, no one new what the game was though. Nick by now was sobbing, and was to most deffinatly be going there at noon. If if it put him in danger, all he cared about was the safety of his parents. At about 5 minutes till Noon, Nick goes behind the shack and by the Circle of Stone. Nick: Let my parents go whoever you are!Voice: I.....I am afraid I cannot do that.Nick: What do you mean! I want my parents back!Voice: You.....you shall only win them back in a duel, a shadow game.Nick: NO! I will never be in a shadow game again!Voice: Fine, then my Card Smugglers will have to dispose of them their own way, good day sir.Nick: No, wait! Fine! I accept your challenge! If I win I get my parents back and you can never bother us again!Voice: I accept. Suddenly, a large duel platform appears in the middle of the circle, and Nick finally gets a glimpse of who it was that was talking while at the top of the elevator Nicagi: I am Nicagi! Ruler of Card Smugglers around the world!Nick: Nicagi!? So your the one that ordered those goons to rob Chris's store!Nicagi: Yes that was me, but I was merely trying to get your attention, as I must get rid of you, so I can ownership of this land, it lies many secrets.Nick: Huh!? What secrets!? Lets get this duel started! End EpisodeWill Nick well enough for the shadow duel!? Will he get his parents back!?Next time on Duel Monster Tales: Chthonian Kingdom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalObelisk Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Nice cliffhanger. This is a good start, keep it up ^_6... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 You have a good concept, I'll give you that. But the layout makes it a lot worse than it should be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Thanks for the comments. The 3rd episode was in constructive, however it got erased and now I must restart it. New episode should be in 1-2 days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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