Which description is better for a card?

[tehodis]

A very old man who will sit on the porch in an old rocking chair and watch you as you go by. And you will be unnerved, because not only is he creepy with that stick, his glasses are also so thick and reflected that you cannot see if he is actually looking at you. He might just be sleeping. Or reading that book on his lap. But you'll never know.

 

One of the earliest members of the Death Eaters. Avoided Azkaban after The Dark Lord's fall.

[The Slime Lord]

Well, the first one is a bit too long and the second one is a bit too short (not that much). But I think the second one is better.

[chaoserver]

As slime Lord sais they are two extremes. Compress the first or use the second.

[tehodis]

Thanks much.

[Slash]

yah I think the second one would work better

[Bromlee]

I like the first one, although it is a bit long

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Second one. The first is too vague and doesn't describe enough.

[daxinator]

2nd