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Ultimate YCM Tournament: Finals! 01alim vs. Kazerima! Who will WIN?!

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Match 1: FFXFAN21 vs. Wombat

 

FFXFAN21's card.

 

OCG: 10/20 Numerous capitalization errors, wording errors such as played and may, exactly 10 errors counted, no long effect bonus.

 

Name: It's good. A little lackluster though. 4/5

 

Picture: Looks like an Ice Dragon, not a Diamond Dragon. 13/15

 

Balance: This strikes me as underpowered, the effect doesn't really even need a cost. 3 Dragon-Type monsters is a very high cost and is worse than losing 1000 damage. 11/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Looks rather short and hastily done. :? 12/20

 

Originality: Original enough. ^_^ 9/10

 

Little Details: No set ID. >_> 6/10

 

Total: 65/100

 

No disclaimer bonus.

 

Wombat's card:

 

OCG: 16/20 A few miner errors such as word order and unnecessary words (directly), but still good enough.

 

Name: It looks like only 1 rider to me. :? 3/5

 

Picture: Nice, although the tiger looks a little too "Lion King"ish and again with the plurality. I like the dark smoky ghostly look. 12/15

 

Balance: It's alright, but I can see abuse problems in macro decks where this could be like Sinister Serpent. 13/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Not bad, I can still see the text though, which means it could be much longer. :? 14/20

 

Originality: Again, it seems like a RFP Sinister Serpent and it reminded me of Dark Worlders. 6/10

 

Little Details: In the most recent sets, Set IDs usually have 4 letters in their first part, nothing serious though. ^_^ 9.5/10

 

Total: 73.5/100

 

No disclaimer bonus.

 

The winner is Wombat, FFXFAN21 is ...eliminated.

 

Match 2: Tuffguy1992 vs. v8561v

 

Tuffguy 1992's card.

 

OCG: 8 errors counted, most involving unnecessary capitalizations. Long effect bonus rewarded. 16/20

 

Name: It works nicely. ^_^ 5/5

 

Picture: Looks a little watercolored and I can see some brushstrokes, still good. 14/15

 

Balance: Seems balanced enough when you look at Plasma, but still, it seems a little UPed as Plasma's effect was better and this doesn't compare well to some insects such as Doom Dozer. 15/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Long, nice job. ^_^ 18/20

 

Originality: Destiny Hero - Plasma. >_> 5/10

 

Little Details: Little Details: In the most recent sets, Set IDs usually have 4 letters in their first part, nothing serious though. ^_^ 9.5/10

 

Total: 82.5/100 Nice card. ^_^

 

No disclaimer bonus. >_>

 

v8561's card:

 

OCG: 8 errors counted, mostly due to missed capping, slight miswordings (not affected=unaffected) and spelling errors (aproppriate.) Long effect bonus rewarded. 16/20

 

Picture: It's great, love the sword. 15/15

 

Balance: A 2600+ ATK 5-star monster with immunity to effect monsters' effects and card advantage like that is REALLY pushing it. 9/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Long, fairly well thought out. ^_^ 17/20

 

Originality: Yup. ^_^ 10/10

 

Little Details: Pop EN into the set ID. >_> 8/10

 

No disclaimer bonus.

 

Total: 75/100 Sorry v8561v, but you're eliminated.

 

Match 3: Kazerima vs. Seth

 

Well, Seth was the only one who did not show up, so Kazerima's the winner by default.

 

Welche vs. SecretAgentMan007

 

Welche's card:

 

OCG: 12 errors spotted, look at DJ's thread and cards with similar effects to help improve it. Long effect bonus rewarded. 14/20

 

Name: Of and The aren't capitalized in card names, cool name though. 4/5

 

Picture: Black background and blurry, not good. 9/15

 

Balance: Its effects don't quite balance out the stats as a LV8 monster. I don't know what "The Overlord" is, so I can't take that into account. 14/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: It's quite long, although still looks slightly hasty. 16/20

 

Originality: Slight resembalnces to certain cards, but I'm sure it was unintentional. 8/10

 

Little Details: The latest sets have 4-letter first parts of Set IDs, and you need EN. 7/10

 

Disclaimer Bonus! 5 bonus points awarded! ^_^

 

Total: 77/100

 

SecretAgentMan007's card:

 

OCG: 12 errors spotted, no long effect bonus. 8/20

 

Name: Awesome. ^_^ 5/5

 

Picture: It's fuzzy. 11/15

 

Balance: This could get really REALLY oped. 8/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Kinda short. :? 12/20

 

Originality: It's original alright. 10/10

 

Little Details: Set ID needs EN and should be 4 letters in the first part. 7/10

 

No disclaimer bonus.

 

61/100 Sorry agent, but you're fired.

 

Match 5: The Dark Prince vs. Jspamax

 

The Dark Prince's card:

 

OCG: 1 error spotted, double penalty for uber-short effect, but you still got a great OCG mark. ^_^ Error was the absence of "this card" after When. 18/20

 

Name: Tech doesn't really work with Flame Hero. >_> 4/5

 

Picture: Black borders are bad. Little background detail. 10/15

 

Balance: Special Summoning 2 monsters is alittle over the top. 15/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: 6/20 Uber-short effects are not cool. Show effort.

 

Originality: Why do I think that you got some inspiration from the TCG for this Flame Hero idea? 6/10

 

Little Details: Mangled Set ID is mangled. 6/10

 

No disclaimer bonus.

 

Total: 65/100

 

Jspamax's card:

 

OCG: 9 errors spotted, outdated stuff, missing periods, missing commas, capital X for X 300 when X isn't even used here, stuff like that. Not long enough for long effect bonus, I can see the text clearly. 11/20

 

Name: What are they adoring? You might wanna specify that in the name next time. 4/5

 

Picture: Anime stuff isn't exactly what people on Yugioh cards look like. >_> 13/15

 

Balance: It can just keep generating tokens, so it's too difficult for your opponent to attack it, and the LP gain is kinda pushing it. 14/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Not as long as it could be, but long enough. 15/20

 

Originality: Reminds me a bit of Pikeru, but original other than that. 8/10

 

Little Details: Needs moar set ID. 5/10

 

Disclaimer bonus awarded: 5 extra points.

 

Total: 75/100

 

The Dark Prince is eliminated.

 

Match 6: FM6 vs. Poke

 

FM6's card:

 

OCG: 12 errors spotted, effect too short for long effect bonus. 8/20

 

Name: The is not capitalized in the name. 4/5

 

Picture: Anime people are not like Yu-Gi-Oh card people. 14/15

 

Balance: Heads effect is not good enough for you to make up for the equivalent of a game loss you get from the tails effect. 14/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Pretty short and looks hasty. 13/20

 

Originality: It's original enough, although the coin toss effect outburst in the latest set probably influenced you to some degree. 8/10

 

Little Details: Later Sets show that the first parts of Set Ids are 4-;etter set IDs more and more. 9.5/10

 

Disclaimer bonus: 5 bonus points for you. ^_^

 

Total: 75.5/100

 

Poke's card:

 

OCG: 20 errors counted, watch that, especially near the eand and at the end, it was good at the start but started getting really bad. >_> Long effect bonus though. 10/20

 

Name: Sounds like more of a Spell Card name. >_> 3/5

 

Picture: Pretty good, but again with the anime. >.< 13/15

 

Balance: Balanced enough, but I don't see why you'd want to use the die effect. 17/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: OCG implies hastiness, but the length is good. 16/20

 

Orginality: Reminds me a little of Archfiends with the die effect. 9/10

 

Little Details: You need EN in your Set ID. 8/10

 

Disclaimer bonus: +5 points!

 

Total: 81/100 You managed to pull it out of the fire despite the OCG disaster. Read up on that and take more time on making sure your OCG is good, look over it a little. FM6 is eliminated, sorry FM6.

 

Match 7: Ultimate_Ryan vs. DeMeNTeD

 

Ultimate_Ryan's card.

 

OCG: 11 errors counted, each not every. Long effect bonus applied, so penalty is halved. ^_^ 15.5/20

 

Name: Works, but lacks a certain umph. 4/5

 

Picture: The manticore looks bored and the background's too plain. 12/15

 

Balance: The Beast effect is a little over-the-top. Special Summoning 5 monsters is excessive, that would be cheap for Crystal Beast decks. 12/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Long enough, could be longer. ^_^ 17/20

 

Originality: Reminds me a little of Manticore of Darkness since it's a Manticore. 8/10

 

Little Details: Perfect! ^_^ 10/10

 

Disclaimer bonus: +5 points!

 

81.5/100

 

DeMeNTeD's card

 

OCG: 7 errors spotted. Long effect bonus applied. 16.5/20

 

Name: of the Pestilence? I think it would kill any Pestilence which tried to command it since it's so fierce. 4/5

 

Picture: Great, nice holo. ^_^ 15/15

 

Balance: A few of these effects seem pretty OP'd, especially the #6 die-roll effect. 13/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Longest effect in the first round. ^_^ 20/20

 

Originality: Die-roll reminds me a bit of Archfiends, and long effects dragged on by lotsa options have been done a lot. 7/10

 

Little Details: Little Details: In the most recent sets, Set IDs usually have 4 letters in their first part, nothing serious though. ^_^ 9.5/10

 

Disclaimer Bonus: +5 points!

 

Total: 90/100

 

Sorry Ultimate_Ryan, but you're eliminated.

 

Match 8: 01alim vs. Funk*Lord

 

01alim's card:

 

OCG: 16/20 No long effect bonus.

 

Name: I think Strike should be replaced with a noun. 4/5

 

Picture: Render's a little blurred. 14/15

 

Balance: I'd say it's pretty balanced, since the swarm is powerful but only happens if you trigger it's effect. The Special Summoning is a little too easy though and it adds on a giant swarm. 16/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Could be much longer: 14/20

 

Originality: It IS original. 10/10

 

Little Details: In the most recent sets, Set IDs usually have 4 letters in their first part, nothing serious though. ^_^ 9.5/10

 

Disclaimer Bonus: +5 points!

 

Total: 88.5 Very well done. ^_^

 

Funk*Lord's Card:

 

OCG: 18 errors. Long effect bonus applied. ^_^ 11/20

 

Name: A little plain. >_> 4/5

 

Picture: Needs more detail to the scythe and background. 13/15

 

Balance: I think it's a little UPd for 3 tributes. 14/20

 

Effect Length and Quality: Very long indeed. ^_^ 19/20

 

Originality: There are already Reapers such as Spirit Reaper, Reaper on the Nightmare, and Reaper of the Cards, so it reminds me of them a bit. 7/10

 

Little Details: Perfect! 10/10

 

Disclaimer Bonus: +5 points for you. ^_^

 

Total: 83/100 Not bad, but unfortunately you are eliminated despite your high score since alim had a higher score, sorry.

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Guys you should check the first post and the last post on page 7, half the results have been posted. ^_^

 

P.S: Yeah, Seth's out. I PM'ed all the people who hadn't posted their card a few days before the deadline, so I'm pretty sure he knows. Everyone posted except him. If you don't get your card in by the deadline, you're dq'd, which is exactly what happened to Seth, so his opponent, Kazerima, makes it past 'im.

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