New cards possibly to go with fanfic

[yeti100]

These cards are possibly going to be used by one of my characters if i ever get round to writing it down. please give any opinions rate/fix so i can improve them

 

Core Synchron

Light/Machine/Tuner/2 stars

Atk: 1000 Def: 1000

Effect: all other machine type monsters on your side of the field gain 500 atk

 

Emeregency shield

Light/machine/2 stars

Atk: 500 Def:1500

effect: you can remove this card in your graveyard from play to negate an attack made by your opponent and end the battlephase.

 

Turbo wolf

Earth/Machine/3 stars

Atk: 1000 Def: 500

Effect: when you normal summon this card you may discard a card from your hand to increase this cards attack by 500 points until the end of this turn. if you have two cards or less in your hand double the original attack of this card.

 

Bombardment Sky Base

Light/Machine/8 stars

Atk 2000 Def 3000

Core synchron + 1 or more no tuner monsters.

Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by Spell, Trap, or Monster effects. If this is the only monster on your side of the field, your opponent can attack your Life Points directly. Once per turn, by sending one "Full Salvo" from your hand or your deck to the Graveyard, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent OR you can remove one "Full Salvo" in your Graveyard from play to destroy a card on your opponents side of the field. If this card's effect is activated, this card cannot declare a attack this turn.

 

these card will hopefully belong to one of the main trio of characters thought it best to post them here so everybody knows what they can do.

[kennytran4]

Can you like put grammar on the words? (Capital letters, full stops etc....)

I give a rating of 6/10

[Elemental Lord Omi]

Bombardment Sky Base

Light/Machine/8 stars

Atk 2000 Def 3000

Core synchron + 1 or more no tuner monsters.

Effect: this card cannot be destroyed by magic trap or monster effects. if this is the only monster on your side of the field your opponent can attack your lifepoints directly. by sending one full salvo card from your hand or your deck to the grave inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent or you can remove one full salvo card in your grave from play to destroy a card on your opponents side of the field. this card cannot attack.

 

Some fixes,

Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by Spell, Trap, or Monster effects. If this is the only monster on your side of the field, your opponent can attack your Life Points directly. Once per turn, by sending one "Full Salvo" from your hand or your deck to the Graveyard, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent OR you can remove one "Full Salvo" in your Graveyard from play to destroy a card on your opponents side of the field. If this card's effect is activated, this card cannot declare a attack this turn.

 

I just fixed some OCG, the last part of the effect I couldn't tell if you didn't want this card to attack at all, or just if you use it's effect, so if I got it wrong change it. I think these cards are pretty good, congrats.

[Wyhe]

is a bit messy...I may consider using them for my own fanfic

If I do,I'll let you know.

[yeti100]

to: Elemental lord omi, thanks for the fixes and yes you git the final part of the effect right i just wasn't sure how to word it

to: Raviel Priest WHYE you can use them in your fanfic if you wangt but they will also appear in mine when i get some time to write it down

[Wyhe]

to: Elemental lord omi' date=' thanks for the fixes and yes you git the final part of the effect right i just wasn't sure how to word it

to: Raviel Priest WHYE you can use them in your fanfic if you wangt but they will also appear in mine when i get some time to write it down

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ok then.

[TR_Headshot]

not bad 8/10

[yeti100]

thanks