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I wanted to suggest stuff but realized your story was pretty set in stone' date=' however then I had an idea for a YCManga prequel, (like metal gear solid 3 or birth by sleep). In this you learn of the orginization's origin, what caused the Davok/Demyx syndrome (a mental schism that wide requires serious tramua). This also lets us continue the story after the organizations defeat.

 

Or you can talk about some other profile's story.

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You know, Zex doesn't have to be the one who writes it.

 

You could write...

 

Awesome idea. Each person writes a short prequel to their character, and then they can all be compiled. That'd be sick.

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xD Clair, you're already insane. You're just not letting it show yet. Though I tried to let a tad shine through with the "staring at the Crimson Moon Davok had painted for her" and the "I wonder what The Maker tastes like?"

 

Aeon is insane already too. He's so insane, he thinks he's sane. I will go into detail as to why in maybe a chapter or two.

 

Roxas is growing drunk with power and ambition. And is letting his magic loose.

 

Davok need not be explained.

 

Icy will soon be driven to madness.

 

Nagato is just...Nagato.

 

And Blood will go crazy with wanting to bring you down.

 

 

As for your idea, nex, a prequel could very well be a possibility. ^^ And you COULD write it.

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The fact is Rinne is I can't for two reasons:

1. I can't figure out a way to somehow make Alucard do it. (Besides convince him that not doing it will help artificial Nazi Vampires somehow)

2. I can't think of a way to do make it with out it being really bad and stuff, though I could assemble a team to do it.

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xD Clair' date=' you're already insane. You're just not letting it show yet. Though I tried to let a tad shine through with the "staring at the Crimson Moon Davok had painted for her" and the "I wonder what The Maker tastes like?"

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By insane, I meant to the point where I just become completely bloodthirsty and vicious, and pretty much try to kill everyone. xD

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My idea for the prequal-If I make it revolves around this.

Two foes had arrive, one (Mech King) is a virtually invincible robot with little intelligence, the other (you find the name) attacks peoples sanity directly. The first vitim is Davok and Demyx who are unable to pierce Mech King's shell. Riku and Nexev (who actual know each other unlike the other group menbers) are tasked to repair them (Fortification magic being one step away from healing) though Nexev suceeds they only had enough life energy between them to animate one body (thus the split personallity syndrome, they are in fact two different people). The slaughter goes on and a young Clairex fights the nameless, winning but losing her sanity in the process, (luckily Nexev comes up with the idea to hypnotize her into thinking she's sane, making her more calm). Unfortunately Mech King comes and frees nameless (they still haven't found a way to harm nameless). Roxas eventually organizes the mysterious Gentleman (with the dimension altering attack FFR), Nexev, Riku, Clairex, Zexaeon, Amythest, True, Mineku, Zaraki, EZ, and Davok to defeat them. They manage to find a way to beat them but nameless smashed a huge hole in Zexaeon's mind (he jumped in the way of the mind attack) and Mech King completely destroyed Nexev. Luckily for the storyline Nexev used his power to form a new body of ice, also Zexaeon was strong enough to refix his own mind but it's still malfunctioning (Zexaeon nolonger remenbers the first three letters of his name and is as Nexev put's it "So broken that he runs soley on wishes" meaning that Aeon's will is the only thing keeping him sane, if Aeon tires he loses it).

 

How's that?

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=O No worries Rin. You'll still have a decent role.

 

After Nagato vs. Davok finsihes up, we have

 

(le gasp!) Planned Fights for the Plot:

 

Nexev vs. Silent Swordsman

Mineku vs. JG

Amethyst vs. Omega

Haris vs. Hioco

Brushfire vs. Blood

??? ??? (can't spoil this one)

Frlf vs. Darth

Riku vs. J-Max

 

 

That's as far as I can go without ruining it completely. ^^ There are still roughly 6 fights after those.

 

Feel free to guess the outcome of every battle I posted.

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Brushfire vs. Blood sounds like the most epic one.

 

And Nexev, the prequel should feature the very beginning of the Organization. Mech King will seek to be the first member to join, but will battle Zaraki Kenpachi in the process. At the end of the battle, Mech King flees while Zaraki Kenpachi is admitted as the Organization's first member.

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