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Alright' date=' I reposted Chapter 2. It should be working now.

 

T-T I can't help but feel that what I had written before, even tohugh it's the same, was better worded.

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I wrote a 20 page story one time and lost it since my computer crashed. Afterwards I couldn't rewrite it since it just feel right or seem as good.

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*Blud snatches a cookie from Rushing Diamond and starts eating it.*

 

"Wow' date=' these are good cookies, Larxene."

 

EDIT: [b']*Blud is now Xemnas and grabs the cookies from RD's hands and transports them to Larxene's hands.*[/b]

 

Wut.

 

I demand an explanation for your presumptuous assumptions.

 

IDK =\ Like I said, I'm a club noob.

 

This much is clear. I'll beat ya senseless if ya think you'll be claiming Xemnas before myself. That power belongs to me. . . and only me.

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I was the 18th member before you were.

 

Clariex was originally a character I added to my fanfic, and she was 18 there.

 

Obviously there were other members.

 

14: Xenor

15: Xaarga

16: Shoxir

17: Xicrox (Two X's? xD)

 

It's also where I originally made Zero.

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I was the 18th member before you were.

 

Clariex was originally a character I added to my fanfic' date=' and she was 18 there.

 

Obviously there were other members.

 

14: Xenor

15: Xaarga

16: Shoxir

17: Xicrox (Two X's? xD)

 

It's also where I originally made Zero.

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I suck at memory.

 

D:

 

Guess I'll change mine...

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Name: Clariex

PoE: Too lazy to think of one.

Element: N/A

Ability: Copying anyone's abilities just by seeing them.

Weapon: Didn't think of one yet. Maybe knives.

Number: 18

 

But everyone already knew this anyway.

 

Couldnt think of a power? :/ Copying is for nubs...NO OFFENCE! :shock:

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Name: Clariex

PoE: Too lazy to think of one.

Element: N/A

Ability: Copying anyone's abilities just by seeing them.

Weapon: Didn't think of one yet. Maybe knives.

Number: 18

 

But everyone already knew this anyway.

 

Couldnt think of a power? :/ Copying is for nubs...NO OFFENCE! :shock:

 

It was for plot purposes.

 

Besides, she's obviously my favorite character and she had to have something awesome.

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Why couldn't she post it? o.O I had to go. But I was given a few more minutes so I could post this >.>

 

Also' date=' what's the original name for that? [b']Croix. Wasn't going to use my real name because I couldn't think of anything >.>[/b]

 

You used two R's.

 

Also, Croix was the name I used for Xicrox. xD

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Why couldn't she post it? o.O I had to go. But I was given a few more minutes so I could post this >.>

 

Also' date=' what's the original name for that? [b']Croix. Wasn't going to use my real name because I couldn't think of anything >.>[/b]

 

You used two R's.

 

Also, Croix was the name I used for Xicrox. xD

 

D= Your right.

 

I'll change it to Xicrox.

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=O So I've decided on the Magic categories for the leaders:

 

Roxas uses Command Magic.

 

Clair uses Create Magic.

 

Aeon uses Shapeless Magic.

 

However, I refuse to divulge the specifics of their powers (the Main category is all you get!)

 

=P And you've only barely seen what Roxas' magic can do, so don't asusme you've seen it all.

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I wanted to suggest stuff but realized your story was pretty set in stone, however then I had an idea for a YCManga prequel, (like metal gear solid 3 or birth by sleep). In this you learn of the orginization's origin, what caused the Davok/Demyx syndrome (a mental schism that wide requires serious tramua). This also lets us continue the story after the organizations defeat.

 

Or you can talk about some other profile's story.

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