Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Yu-Gi-Oh XDYu-Gi-Oh XDThe Edge of Darkness [spoiler=CONTENTS][align=center]Prologue Page 1, Post 1 Episode 1 Page 1, Post 5 Episode 2 (not complete) Page 1, Post 13 Episode 3 Coming Soon[/align] [spoiler=Prologue]PrologueLong ago two powerful god cards that rival the power of the Egyptian God Cards were created. They were kept in hiding because their individual powers were too great. Together they could bring about the end of the world in the wrong hands. Threats to steal the cards have prompted them to be entrusted to two duelists that are skilled enough to control their powers. Gharyu, the Dragon God of Darkness' DARK powers were so great it had to be entrusted to James, a duelist with the skill and power to control the darkness of it. Thara, the Dragon God of Light had to be entrusted to Isis, a pure hearted LIGHT duelist with the skill and power to control it.An evil tyrant named (insert name here) wants the cards for himself so he could rule the world. With them, he can do whatever he wants, unopposed. (Insert name here) has created an Ante tournament where the rarest card each duelist owns is put on the line and the winner keeps both in an attempt to obtain both the God Dragons. Duelists who want the God cards and duelists with their own agendas have entered this tournament. Only one can win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 I would like to see how this story goes along,so let me have it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Prince Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 is there a sign up sheet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 is there a sign up sheetThere was such a thread already made sometime ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 is there a sign up sheet The signup thread for this fan fic is here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=51560 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 [spoiler=Episode 1]Episode 1 - Round 1: Titan versus AnsonJames: What's this? An invitation. Excellent. Now I can put my dueling skills to the ultimate test. Isis: I'm in. I'm already a national champion. Now I have a chance to become the world champion. Titan: Hm, you are pathetic. Wait. Whats this? An invitation. To a world dueling tournament. Finally I can face some real competition. Kai: An invitation. Something isn't right about it. I must go to check it out. Axis: An invitation to a world tournament. Finally a chance for my talent to be recognised. Shoichi: An invitation. Awesome. Now I can see how my quick win combos can be used on a world tournament scale. Anson: What's this? An invitation to a tournament. Excellent. Evil Tyrant: Excellent. The chosen duelists have accepted my challenge. Now it's only a matter of time before the Dragon God Cards are mine. Tournament Opening Ceremony Evil Tyrant: Welcome to the Duel Monsters World Championship. You have all been invited because you are the best of the best in the world. This tournament will prove who is absolutely the best. In addition to the rules of regular tournaments there are a few that have been added to make this tournament interesting. Before every duel both duelists declare their two rarest cards. The winner of that duel wins the losing duelist's rarest card and keeps their own. In the grand final match, both duelists not only put their rarest cards on the line but also all the cards that they have won so far. Think of it as the prize for winning the tournament. Now the matches are going to be decided as follows so please, pay close attention:- Each duelist will pick a random number from a box. - The numbers picked will decide the matches.- If you win, you will advance to the next round.- If you lose, you are eliminated.Now lets see what everyone's gonna get. Everyone picks their numbers. These are the matches for Stage 1. Match 1: Titan v. AnsonMatch 2: James v. AxisMatch 3: Isis v. _ _ _ _Match 4: Kai v. ShoichiMatch 5: _ _ _ _ v. _ _ _ _Match 6: _ _ _ _ v. _ _ _ _Match 7: Lydia v. _ _ _ _Match 8: _ _ _ _ v. _ _ _ _ Tournament Arena Evil Tyrant: Let the games begin. Match 1: Titan versus Anson. Titan: I hope your as good as everyone else here.Anson: You'll find out soon enough.Titan: Let's duel.Anson: Let's duel.Titan: You can start.Anson: Very well. I draw. I summon Archfiend Soldier in Attack Mode, set a card face down and call it a turn.Titan: Can't you do better than that? I Set a Monster in Defense Position and a card face-down and end my turn.Anson: Okay, I draw, I summon Luster Dragon in Attack Mode. Now, prepare yourself. I attack your face-down Monster with Archfiend Soldier.The face-down is Mystic Tomato.Titan: When Mystic Tomato is destroyed as a result of Battle, I can Special Summon a DARK Monster from my deck with 1500 or less ATK in Attack Mode. I choose Mystic Tomato.Anson: I attack with Luster Dragon.Titan: Not so fast. I activate Chaos Burst. When your Monster Attacks, I Tribute one of my Monsters, your attacking Monster is destroyed and you lose 1000 Life Points. [align=center]~Life Points~Titan: 8000 Anson: 7000[/align] Anson: I'm calling it a turn.Titan: My turn. I draw. I activate Hand Destruction. Both players discard 2 cards from their Hands and then draws 2 cards. Now I activate another Hand Destruction. You know the effect.The cards discarded by Titan were Uria, Lord of Searing Flames, Hamon, Lord of Striking Thunder, Raviel, Lord of Phantasms, Dark Summoning Beast.Titan: Now I summon Phantom of Chaos. By removing a Monster in my Graveyard from play, Phantom of Chaos becomes a copy of the Monster removed. I remove from play Dark Summoning Beast. The ability of Dark Summoning Beast is that I can Tribute it to Special Summon the Sacred Beasts from my Graveyard ignoring all their regular Summoning Conditions, Uria, Lord of Searing Flames, Hamon, Lord of Striking Thunder and Raviel, Lord of Phantasms. Now I activate the Special Ability of Uria. Once per turn, I can destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on the field. Spell and Trap Cards cannot be used in response to Uria's effect.Anson: Awwh.Titan: Now that I have all 3 Sacred Beasts on the field, I can now unleash their full powers. By combining them all into one, I create the ultimate Sacred Beast, Armityle, the Chaos Phantom.Anson: 0 ATK? How are you going to win with this?Titan: Read the effect. During my turns, Armityle's ATK becomes 10000. Now your finished. Armityle, the Chaos Phantom, finish him off by crushing his inferior Archfiend Soldier.Anson: Ahhhhh.Anson's Life Points rapidly approaced zero. Titan takes Kaiser Glider from the fallen Anson.Evil Tyrant: The winner of Match 1 is Titan. Titan will advance to Round 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 ok chapter,though you reveal how the big bad would do things around here...not much suspense or mystery is there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 To be honest, I am not too good with beginnings. Later, it gets good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 To be honest' date=' I am not too good with beginnings. Later, it gets good.[/quote']We'll see...we'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 Episode 2 is gonna have a duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted July 7, 2008 Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 In my opinion, this seems a lot like Battle City so far. Let's hope it changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2008 I'm writing it as I think of it. I got bored so I decided to start before I originally decided to since I'm a bit short on characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2008 [spoiler=Episode 2]Episode 2 - Enter Dark Armed DragonEpisode 2 - Enter Dark Armed DragonEvil Tyrant: Now, Round 2 will begin momentarily. It will be James versus Axis. 30 minutes later........Evil Tyrant: It's time for Round 2 to begin.Axis: I've heard a lot about your skills James. Lets see if everything said about you is true.James: I'm gonna let my dueling do the talking. Let's duel. You may begin.Axis: Okay. I draw. I activate Hand Destruction. Both of us draw 2 cards and discard 2 cards. I activate Messanger of Peace. While this card is face-up on the field, all Monsters with 1500 or more ATK cannot declare an attack. Lets see you get past that. Now I summon Destiny Hero - Disk Commander in Attack Mode. I also set 2 cards face-down and end my turn. It's your move.James: I draw. I activate Trade-In. By discarding a Level 8 Monster from my hand, I get to draw 2 cards. Now I summon one of them. Say hello to Armageddon Knight. When Armageddon Knight is summoned, 1 DARK Monster gets sent from my deck to the Graveyard. I send Destiny Hero - Disk Commander to the Graveyard, so I can activate this. Premature Burial. At the cost of 800 Life Points, I get to Special Summon 1 Monster from my Graveyard in Attack Mode. I choose Destiny Hero - Disk Commander. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, I get to draw 2 cards. Now, Armageddon Knight. Attack his Disk Commander.Axis: I activate Limit Reverse. This lets me bring back a Monster with 1500 or less ATK. I choose Destiny Hero - Disk Commander. You know its effect.James: I set 2 cards facedown and end my turn.Axis: My turn. At the cost of 100 Life Points, Messanger of Peace gets kept on the field and is still in effect. Now I play Card of Safe Return. Every time I Special Summon a Monster from my Graveyard, I get to draw 2 cards. Now I set a Monster in Defense Position and end my turn.James: My draw. I discard Darklord Zerato in order to Special Summon Dark Grepher. Now I summon Armageddon Knight in Attack Mode. You know its ability. Now that I have exactly 3 DARK Monsters in my Graveyard I can Special Summon Dark Armed Dragon.Axis: I activate Solemn Judgment. At the cost of half my Life Points, the Summoning of Dark Armed Dragon.James: I activate my own Solemn Judgment negating yours. You just wasted half your Life Points and my Dark Armed Dragon stays on the field. Now I activate Dark Grepher's special ability. Once per turn I can send 2 DARK Monsters from my deck to the Graveyard. Now I activate the Special Ability of Dark Armed Dragon. By removing from play 1 DARK Monster in my Graveyard, I can destroy 1 card on the field. The first target is your Messanger of Peace. Now I use its effect 2 times to destroy your other Spell or Trap Card. Now, your next target is Card of Safe Return. Now, the final target is your face-down Monster. Now I activate my other face-down card, Return From the Different Dimension. At the cost of Half my Life Points, I will bring back my strongest Removed From Play Monster, Darklord Zerato. Now Darklord Zerato, attack him directly. Now Dark Armed Dragon, finish him off. Thats game.Axis' Life Points approach 0. Axis gives James his rarest card set. Exodia the Forbidden One and its limbs.Evil Tyrant: The winner of Match 2 is James.Evil Tyrant: Excellent. Everything is going according to planned. Once James has to face one of my minions, Gharyu, the Dragon God of Darkness will be mine. I know he has it. I can feel it. Episode 2 is still in progress. I reckon I can still make it longer and more exciting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
komui2 Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 u should show the ATK & DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 its quite good for a start,but keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Thanks for reading. Chapter 2 will be finished soon and Chapter 3 will be started after chapter 2 is finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 you should have something else than just confersations take a look at Raviel Priest Wyhe's fanfic, you need to describe the enviroment and the characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 you should have something else than just confersations take a look at Raviel Priest Wyhe's fanfic' date=' you need to describe the enviroment and the characters.[/quote']You consider me that good.When I wrote this things, I just apply what my teachers taught in writing great stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 I still havent finalized the chapters. The story line could well change completely. Thanks for the advice anyway Skuldur. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 BUMPING. I want to keep this alive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Bump of Life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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